Car Parking Claim Form How to Proceed

Savvy101

Coupon-mad said:

Seems a very short set of words to describe the relevant land and the date of the event. What exactly does that line say (no need to redact that bit).

So I need to include the land , time and date of event?

Savvy101

I have finished the Acknowledgment of Service

KeithP

Savvy101 said:

I have finished the Acknowledgment of Service

Good. Now start working on your Defence following the guidance you have already found.

Coupon-mad

Savvy101 said:

Coupon-mad said:

Seems a very short set of words to describe the relevant land and the date of the event. What exactly does that line say (no need to redact that bit).

So I need to include the land , time and date of event?

Please show us what that line says.

Savvy101

Coupon-mad said:

Savvy101 said:

Coupon-mad said:

Seems a very short set of words to describe the relevant land and the date of the event. What exactly does that line say (no need to redact that bit).

So I need to include the land , time and date of event?

Please show us what that line says.

On the Relevant Land at Collier Street, Manchester.

The parking charge was issued at 14:41 on 22/04/2022

Hope this is what I have missed out.

Coupon-mad

OK I think it has sufficient detail, so use the Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Savvy101

Coupon-mad said:

OK I think it has sufficient detail, so use the Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Thank you for getting back to me. Not sure what you mean by, Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Savvy101

Savvy101 said:

Coupon-mad said:

OK I think it has sufficient detail, so use the Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Thank you for getting back to me. Not sure what you mean by, Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Sorry I mean "so use the Template Defence & show us your para 3"

KeithP

Savvy101 said:

Savvy101 said:

Coupon-mad said:

OK I think it has sufficient detail, so use the Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Thank you for getting back to me. Not sure what you mean by, Template Defence & show us your para 3.

Sorry I mean "so use the Template Defence & show us your para 3"

 Just another way of saying what has already been said on this thread...

KeithP said:
Good. Now start working on your Defence following the guidance you have already found.

and...

KeithP said:

To create a Defence, and then file a Defence by email, look again at the second post on the NEWBIES thread - immediately following where you found the Acknowledgment of Service guidance.

Savvy101

Here is my defense, your guidance is much appreciated. 

2. The facts in this defence come from the Defendant's own knowledge and honest belief.  Conversely, the Claimant sets out a cut-and-paste incoherent and sparse statement of case. The POC appear to be in breach of CPR 16.4, 16PD3 and 16PD7, and fail to "state all facts necessary for the purpose of formulating a complete cause of action". The [Defendant is unable, on the basis of the POC, to understand with certainty what case, allegation(s) and what heads of cost are being pursued, making it difficult to respond.] However, the vehicle is recognised, and it is admitted that the Defendant was the registered keeper and driver.

3. The Defendant went to the Land at collier street , Manchester to drop of someone going to the Deansgate train station.

Since a ticket had been obtained on Just Park, the defendant left the car at the Collier Street Car Park in Manchester

4. An appeals against the PCN, showing evidence of payment through Just Park, was sent to SIP Parking  but this was rejected.