DCBL PCN Claim form defense support please

Coupon-mad

Replace this:

"this required the Defendant to temporarily occupy a white line."

With this:

This was with the full authority of the staff at the store, agreed for the purposes of loading.

initech1979

Actually I've not really followed your advice very well there have I, should I remove all of my sob story in paragraph 6 for now, that's not important at this stage?

initech1979

Replace this:

"this required the Defendant to temporarily occupy a white line."

With this:

This was with the full authority of the staff at the store, agreed for the purposes of loading.

Do you not mean 'follow with this' rather than 'replace this' as your statement has no context without?

Coupon-mad

No - I say replace it. No idea why you wish to admit to parking on a white line which isn't pleaded in the POC:

Gr1pr

As above, you are addressing the claim form, not embellishing the facts, never admit to details that are not there in the first place 

The driver was there with the full authority of the store to do an authorised pickup 

It explains why the driver was there and the permission, without any real details, no sob stories, no giveaways 

initech1979

Makes sense, updated accordingly, thanks chaps

Gr1pr

initech1979 said:

Makes sense, updated accordingly, thanks chaps

And chapess, CM is a lady. !  😇

initech1979

I beg your pardon CM , thank you both

initech1979

So once I append the rest of the template to this defence and update the numbering, are you happy it's ready to submit? Thanks

initech1979

initech1979 said:

So once I append the rest of the template to this defence and update the numbering, are you happy it's ready to submit? Thanks

Please advise, thanks in advance