Small County court defence template - Private Parking ticket

Raja24

Great, thanks Coupan-mad for your help. 

This is my witness statement (I've removed personal details). Any feedback will be much appreciated 

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PuWlN8UiBYEErcWTckjENXkkwPQ-4QFS/edit?usp=drive_link&ouid=115778166692186804106&rtpof=true&sd=true

Coupon-mad

Swap 'Facts and Sequence of Events' section para 2 with the 'Inadequate POC' section.

1505grandad

"This is my witness statement........."

Presumably you will be adding the relevant SoT etc. at the end?

Le_Kirk

PAragraph #1

1.1 I draw the attention of the Court to two persuasive

I assumed that you were referring to the two recent judgments but then you only mentioned one, CEL v Chan.  What happened to the other one CPM v Akande?

Raja24

Great feedback, thanks everyone. Here is the amended witness statement include pictures and SoT etc. This is now the full witness statement. Please let me know what you think ?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BHsZtPcBYOA3mAsYzQEPTFtb6BdCWbuT/view?usp=drive_link 

abz_anony

Google drive WS is in some sort of code format not in written English format

Raja24

Thanks for letting me know. Please check now

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G893wbMPs2y-CDWxV0PVnN9mDk7ntvdT/edit?usp=drive_link&ouid=115778166692186804106&rtpof=true&sd=true

KeithP

The Defendant's name and the Claim Number are clearly visible on the title page of that linked document.

Raja24

Thanks I've deleted the name and the claim number. You can use the same link to view the document. Thanks for point that out

Coupon-mad

Please copy & paste the WS across two replies.  Far more likely to get people here looking and helping, then asking them to click on a link.