Claim form for car parking charges

baz417

Coupon-mad said:

That's a great adaptation of the newest WS and I might use it as an exemplar WS for newbies!

All I saw to critique was that you should remove paragraph 06 entirely as it states the obvious and you didn't suddenly get a PCN now so it makes no sense in context of a claim.

And when you re-number the rest, drop the zero from the paragraph numbered 6.

I don't think you need to mention that your numberplate starts with N.  Clearly you DID NOT just type in 'N' (no driver would) and you can say that at the hearing; even if it's not an 'error code', it's clearly unfair if the system prints a ticket before a full VRM has been typed in.

Aha, I found the transcript you need to add:
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/im5la2708fmhf3aakfiwb/C8DP11F9-EXCEL-v-SIMPSON-Approved-Judgment.pdf?rlkey=13d60uirdigjtr1ylii21oawc&dl=0

Claim no. C8DP11F9 – Excel v Mrs S – 09/09/2016, Oldham Court 

well, its been possible because of helpful people on this forum especially you have helped me throughout. i am in the process of editing WS now , will post here for feedback.

baz417

1505grandad said:

Para 23 has the wrong exhibit number  -  in fact para 24 also  -  suggest you check all numbers etc are correct just in case (obviously to include the above Excel v Mrs S)

Thanks for pointing out, editing now so will rectify it. Cheers

Coupon-mad

Do read the transcript.
It's perfect (not a precedent of course but a nice steer for your Judge!).

baz417

Coupon-mad said:

Do read the transcript.
It's perfect (not a precedent of course but a nice steer for your Judge!).

I read it just now and it does give the reassurance for a positive outcome in  the court I believe.  Thanks

baz417

i have tried my best editing WS, thanks all for suggestion and guidance, please see below:
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/vcupf57xn7ap7wy9bfrcq/WS-Parellel-Parking-Limited-Dopbox-draft.docx?rlkey=7gawfjsbsfojuba5y2urktb83&dl=0
 kindly let me know if anything lacking...

Coupon-mad

Nice.  I've already pointed another poster to that version as the new exemplar WS bundle!

Can you delete all previous version links back in your thread please, so that there is only ONE here for people to find?   Otherwise, some newbies land on the first one they see on a thread, and stop reading...

You do have a random 'claim num' top right that needs removing... 

P.S.

please change the subheading 

'Exaggerated Claim'

to

Exaggerated Claim and 'market failure' currently being addressed by the Government

I would LOVE to see that sub-heading in bold in everyone's WS from now on!

baz417

Coupon-mad said:

Nice.  I've already pointed another poster to that version as the new exemplar WS bundle!

Can you delete all previous version links back in your thread please, so that there is only ONE here for people to find?   Otherwise, some newbies land on the first one they see on a thread, and stop reading...

You do have a random 'claim num' top right that needs removing... 

P.S.

please change the subheading 

'Exaggerated Claim'

to

Exaggerated Claim and 'market failure' currently being addressed by the Government

I would LOVE to see that sub-heading in bold in everyone's WS from now on!

Sure will edit accordingly. Going to delete all previous link. I have only most edited WS draft on dropbox Thanks again.

baz417

I have removed all previous link also one with random claim number. Please let me know if any old link need removing so everyone can see the updates WS.

Coupon-mad

baz417 said:

i have tried my best editing WS, thanks all for suggestion and guidance, please see below:
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/vcupf57xn7ap7wy9bfrcq/WS-Parellel-Parking-Limited-Dopbox-draft.docx?rlkey=7gawfjsbsfojuba5y2urktb83&dl=0
 kindly let me know if anything lacking...

This link still has the 'claim num' top right.

baz417

Coupon-mad said:

baz417 said:

i have tried my best editing WS, thanks all for suggestion and guidance, please see below:
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/vcupf57xn7ap7wy9bfrcq/WS-Parellel-Parking-Limited-Dopbox-draft.docx?rlkey=7gawfjsbsfojuba5y2urktb83&dl=0
 kindly let me know if anything lacking...

This link still has the 'claim num' top right.

my apologies, its removed now: the new link below:
https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/0ktsyua3tq0x8cwveenks/WS-Parellel-Parking-Limited-Dopbox-draft.docx?rlkey=py0up0ojf4ohks2o7ybahflg9&dl=0

Please let me know if anything need adding if not, then i should be sending them this week ( must be sent before 25th August as hearing date is 8th September)
still need to add on my WS as its personal info:
The Claim number:
hearing date :
place :
home address in 1st paragraph
putting initials instead of XX in Exhibits
adding digital signature at the end - is its acceptable and right way?

send copies to the court and other party ( its Parallel Parking i believe) ?
hope thats all for the process. 
thanks very much