Parking fine claim county court business centre

ZR18

I will use that, thanks. 

am I right to say the evidence above proves the vehicle was at standstill no longer than 5mins?

Coupon-mad

You can probably judge better than us.

ZR18

Hi All, I’ve managed to draft my WS which I need to send off in couple of days. I would be greatfull if you will please have a read and advice if it needs any tweaks,changing or adding. Thank You so much for your time.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/16Nl_fB0JiGK15Rtw-UhK1xwbUYkus6sC/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword

KeithP

On your index page, the right hand column with page numbers is displaced.
For example, the index tells us the image xx-03 is on page 9. It isn't, it's on page 11. 
Similarly, image xx-06 is on page 14 but the index says otherwise.
But the page numbering really goes haywire at page 19 - with several iterations of pages 19, 20, 21, etc.

ZR18

Thanks, I’ll have that fixed. Please let me know if you notice anything else or if anything may need changing or adding 

ZR18

Hi, thank you all for taking the time to read through my WS, I’ve now fixed the numbering. Just wanted your final approval before I send it please, is there anything else you feel I should edit or add ?

Coupon-mad

ZR18 said:

Hi All, I’ve managed to draft my WS which I need to send off in couple of days. I would be greatfull if you will please have a read and advice if it needs any tweaks,changing or adding. Thank You so much for your time.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/16Nl_fB0JiGK15Rtw-UhK1xwbUYkus6sC/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword

The schedule of costs should not be an exhibit.  Just a sheet at the end of the bundle. No number.

In para 3, do not call it 'a small private car park'.  Call it:

a small row of parking bays around a mini roundabout which appeared to be a continuation of the public highway and/or provided by the Train Operator for dropping off or picking up station passengers.

In para 4 get rid of 'car park' and 'private car park' and again just call them 'those parking spaces'.

Go through the whole statement and stop calling it a private car park. It doesn't have that appearance so don't give it that level of recognition.

I saw 'private land' or 'private car park' from you again just above one of your photos.  You are only calling it that because they did!  You are being drawn in. Remove that phrase from your thinking. Call it out as what it looks like: unrestricted station drop off bays.

Remove para 20.  Not quite right and not needed.  Reads & flows better without it.

ZR18

Coupon-mad said:

ZR18 said:

Hi All, I’ve managed to draft my WS which I need to send off in couple of days. I would be greatfull if you will please have a read and advice if it needs any tweaks,changing or adding. Thank You so much for your time.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/16Nl_fB0JiGK15Rtw-UhK1xwbUYkus6sC/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=msword

The schedule of costs should not be an exhibit.  Just a sheet at the end of the bundle. No number.

In para 3, do not call it 'a small private car park'.  Call it:

a small row of parking bays around a mini roundabout which appeared to be a continuation of the public highway and/or provided by the Train Operator for dropping off or picking up station passengers.

In para 4 get rid of 'car park' and 'private car park' and again just call them 'those parking spaces'.

Go through the whole statement and stop calling it a private car park. It doesn't have that appearance so don't give it that level of recognition.

I saw 'private land' or 'private car park' from you again just above one of your photos.  You are only calling it that because they did!  You are being drawn in. Remove that phrase from your thinking. Call it out as what it looks like: unrestricted station drop off bays.

Remove para 20.  Not quite right and not needed.  Reads & flows better without it.

Thank You for pointing that out. Can I call it a
lay-by? 

there are no bays or markings, it’s a small stretch that comes off and then re-joins the public highway. 

The area marked with red line from start to finish 

  

KeithP

ZR18 said:

Thank You for pointing that out. Can I call it a lay-by? 

Why not call it the road?  

Coupon-mad

As I said, call it:

a small row of parking bays around a mini roundabout which appeared to be a continuation of the public highway and/or provided by the Train Operator for dropping off or picking up station passengers.