parking fine from 2016 - advice please

Gingersun

Hello, thanks for all the help with amends, is it ok to post my defence in full (without identifying details) for a final look please before I send today? as I've mad amends/taken out paras etc. I'd really appreciate it. Thank you.

Jenni_D

If you're using the forum template defence (which you should be) then please only post the bits you've changed - paras 2 and 3 (any any additions) - no need to post the rest of it. (But confirm that you've renumbered the following paras if you've added more of your own).

Gingersun

Jenni_D said:

If you're using the forum template defence (which you should be) then please only post the bits you've changed - paras 2 and 3 (any any additions) - no need to post the rest of it. (But confirm that you've renumbered the following paras if you've added more of your own).

Thanks, I've also taken out pofa relevant stuff from further down so I'd like to have it looked at in full to make sure I've taken out the right bits etc...

Le_Kirk

Don't take anything out of the template defence and only show us, as @Jenni_D wrote, just show us what you have added/changed.  We trust @Coupon-mad and don't need to check her work.

Jenni_D

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Gingersun

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Yes that's right so just want to check all ok with what I have removed as well as own words parts 

Le_Kirk

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Gingersun said:

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Yes that's right so just want to check all ok with what I have removed as well as own words parts 

OK but I cannot see anywhere on the defence template that recommends removing anything.  If it is paragraph 15 that concerns you, it is about the addition of the "debt admin" fees.  If they did not add those fees (typically £60/£70) then fair enough.

Gingersun

Le_Kirk said:

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Gingersun said:

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Yes that's right so just want to check all ok with what I have removed as well as own words parts 

OK but I cannot see anywhere on the defence template that recommends removing anything.  If it is paragraph 15 that concerns you, it is about the addition of the "debt admin" fees.  If they did not add those fees (typically £60/£70) then fair enough.

I'll check, I removed the pofa points 15 I think , maybe another on recommendation on thread here.

Gingersun

Gingersun said:

Le_Kirk said:

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Gingersun said:

Jenni_D said:

I think the OP has removed some POFA stuff because they're an admitted driver?

Yes that's right so just want to check all ok with what I have removed as well as own words parts 

OK but I cannot see anywhere on the defence template that recommends removing anything.  If it is paragraph 15 that concerns you, it is about the addition of the "debt admin" fees.  If they did not add those fees (typically £60/£70) then fair enough.

I'll check, I removed the pofa points 15 I think , maybe another on recommendation on thread here.

On the claim form I have amount claimed. Court fee and legal rep costs...

Gingersun

On a previous correspondence as per the sar there's a debt recovery charge...