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CCBC Form received for UKCPM/Gladstones

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  • FTB_Peter
    FTB_Peter Posts: 57 Forumite
    This is the defence of estoppel (google it or search the forums). You had an honestly held belief which you will support with a Witness Statement from the soft play centre

    Spot on, only issue with this is that due to the high staff turnover of such places the young lady who said we’d be ok has now left.
  • System
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    Spot on, only issue with this is that due to the high staff turnover of such places the young lady who said we’d be ok has now left.

    It will come down to who the judge believes on the day. Don't discount using it as a line of defence but have others.
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  • Coupon-mad
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    Here's a defence about a Kids Play Centre:

    https://forums.moneysavingexpert.com/discussion/comment/74422535#Comment_74422535

    and here's one mentioning promissory estoppel:

    https://forums.moneysavingexpert.com/discussion/comment/74124430#Comment_74124430

    We've seen this sort of thing before. Adapt the best bits into a defence for you.
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  • FTB_Peter
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    edited 26 August 2018 at 9:04AM
    Thanks Coupon-mad, that’s a massive help! I really need to get my defence drafted up as we’re going away early Tuesday morning.

    I popped down to the place in question yesterday and there are no signs at all on the entrance to the car park. From what I’ve been reading, legally there should be?
  • Umkomaas
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    edited 26 August 2018 at 9:39AM
    I popped down to the place in question yesterday and there are no signs at all on the entrance to the car park.
    Did you take photos? You really need to have as much of your own photo evidence as possible.
    From what I’ve been reading, legally there should be?
    Not 'legally' (wrong term), but the IPC Code of Practice requires entrance warning signs to be displayed. Please read the Code of Practice to get the detail.

    https://theipc.info/resources/brandings/brandmedia_2_Code-of-Practice.pdf

    All that said, PPCs do often treat the CoP as somewhat 'optional'.
    Please note, we are not a legal advice forum. I personally don't get involved in critiquing court case Defences/Witness Statements, so unable to help on that front. Please don't ask. .

    I provide only my personal opinion, it is not a legal opinion, it is simply a personal one. I am not a lawyer.

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  • System
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    edited 26 August 2018 at 9:21AM
    what I’ve been reading, legally there should be?

    Yes and no. A better way to explain it is that if the area is subject to some sort of parking control, there should be an indication (via signs) that you are entering a controlled area so you can find the terms (via signs) and decide if you want to agree the terms (the controls specified on the signs)
    UKCPM are IPC and not BPA. So the IPC Code says

    Section B.2.1, B.2.2 of the IPC Code of Practice which gives clear instructions as to the placing, visibility and clarity of any signs that are used to form contracts. It says:

    2.1 Where the basis of your parking charges is based in the law of contract it will usually be by way of the driver of a vehicle agreeing to contractual terms identified by signage in and around a controlled zone. It is therefore of fundamental importance that the signage meets the minimum standards under The Code as this underpins the validity of any such charge. Similarly, where charges are founded in the law of trespass and form liquidated damages, these too must be communicated to drivers in the same way.

    2.2 Signs must conform to the requirements as set out in a schedule 1 to the Code

    No signs at the entrance then there is no legal certainty about being aware of the signs and the terms
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  • FTB_Peter
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    OK, first draft of my defence, heavily based on one of Coupon-mad's most recent versions. Do I keep the verbal parking consent and photos back for the WS?




    In the County Court Business Centre
    Claim Number: xxxxxxxx

    Between:


    UK Car Park Management Ltd (Claimant)

    v

    xxxxxx (Defendant)


    DEFENCE


    Preliminary


    1. The Particulars of Claim lack specificity and are embarrassing. The Defendant is prejudiced and is unable to prepare a full and complete Defence. The Defendant reserves the right to seek from the Court permission to serve an Amended Defence should the Claimant add to or expand his Particulars at a later stage of these proceedings and/or to limit the Claimant only to the unevidenced allegations in the Particulars.

    2. The Particulars of Claim fail to refer to the material terms of any contract and neither comply with the CPR 16 in respect of statements of case, nor the relevant practice direction in respect of claims formed by contract or conduct. The Defendant further notes the Claimant's failure to fully engage in pre-action correspondence in accordance with the pre-action protocol and with the express aim of avoiding contested litigation. The Claimant failed to respond to the Defendant's letter dated 22nd March 2016, asking for more evidence, and merely proceeded to issue a claim.

    Background

    3) It is admitted that at all material times the Defendant was the registered keeper of the vehicle which is the subject of these proceedings.

    4) It is admitted that on the material date, the Defendant's vehicle was parked at the location stated.



    5) The Claimant has provided no evidence (in pre-action correspondence or otherwise) that the Defendant was the driver.


    5.1. The Defendant avers that the Claimant is therefore limited to pursuing the Defendant in these proceedings under the provisions set out by statute in the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 (the 'POFA').


    5.2. Before seeking to rely on the keeper liability provisions of Schedule 4 of the POFA, a private parking operator must demonstrate that:


    5.2.1. there was a 'relevant obligation' and/or 'relevant contract' formed with the driver, and


    5.2.2. there was 'adequate notice' of the terms and the parking charge itself, on prominent signs in large lettering displayed clearly at the place where the car was parked, and at the entrance, and


    5.2.3. that it has followed the required deadlines and wording as described in the Act to transfer liability from the driver to the registered keeper. It is not admitted that the Claimant has complied with the relevant statutory requirements.


    5.3. To the extent that the Claimant may seek to allege that any such presumption exists, the Defendant expressly denies that there is any presumption in law (whether in statute or otherwise) that the keeper is the driver. Further, the Defendant denies that the vehicle keeper is obliged to name the driver to a private parking firm. Had this been the intention of parliament, they would have made such requirements part of POFA, which makes no such provision. In the alternative, an amendment could have been made to s.172 of the Road Traffic Act 1988. The 1988 Act continues to oblige the identification of drivers only in strictly limited circumstances, where a criminal offence has been committed. Those provisions do not apply to this matter.


    6) It is denied that any "parking charges, damages or indemnity costs" (whatever they might be) as stated on the Particulars of Claim are owed. The alleged debt is denied in its entirety.


    7) It is denied that the Claimant has standing to bring any claim in the absence of a contract that expressly permits the Claimant to do so, in addition to merely putting up parking signs and issuing letters on behalf of the true landowner. The Claimant is put to strict proof.


    7.1. It is not admitted that the Claimant has contractual or other lawful authority to make contracts, specifically by offering parking to non-permit holders at this location, and/or to bring proceedings against the Defendant. The Claimant is put to strict proof.


    Failure to set out clearly, or offer parking terms to non-permit holders

    8) The Defendant relies upon ParkingEye Ltd v Barry Beavis (2015) UKSC 67 insofar as the Court were willing to consider the imposition of a penalty in the context of a site of commercial value and where the signage regarding the penalties imposed for any breach of parking terms were clear - both upon entry to the site and throughout.



    9) The Defendant avers that the parking signage in this matter was inadequate and no consideration flowed between the driver and the Claimant.


    9.1.1. At the time of the material events the signage was deficient in number, distribution, wording and lighting to reasonably convey a contractual obligation;


    9.1.2. The signage did not comply with the requirements of the Code of Practice of the International Parking Community's ("IPC") Accredited Operators Scheme, an organisation to which the Claimant was a signatory; and


    9.1.3. The signage contained particularly onerous terms not sufficiently drawn to the attention of the driver, as set out in the leading judgment of Denning MR in J Spurling v Bradshaw [1956] EWCA Civ 3


    9.2. In this case neither the Claimant, nor their principal, the landowner, is offering anything to motorists who do not have a permit. The Defendant avers that the sign - in fact, not seen by the driver due to outside line of sight placement and lack of signage on the entrance - creates a prohibition against parking without a permit. The notices cannot, therefore, reasonably be construed as having created a contractual relationship between the Claimant and the Driver.


    9.2.1. On the 20th September 2016 another relevant poorly pleaded private parking
    charge claim by Gladstones was struck out by District Judge Cross of St Albans County Court without a hearing due to their ‘roboclaim’ particulars being incoherent, failing to comply with CPR. 16.4 and ‘providing no facts that could give rise to any apparent claim in law.’



    9.2.2 On the 27th July 2016 DJ Anson sitting at Preston County Court ruled that the very similar parking charge Particulars of Claim were deficient and failing to meet CPR 16.4 and PD 16 paragraphs 7.3 – 7.6. He ordered the Claimant in that case to file new particulars which they failed to do and so the court confirmed that the claim be struck out.


    9.3. Even if the Court finds that a non-permit holder should have seen a sign and was a trespasser, this is a matter of tort whereby (as confirmed in the Beavis case and also by the 2012 Guidance Notes relating to Section 56/Schedule 4 of the POFA) only the landowner themselves would be potentially able to pursue damages. In Beavis, this was because ParkingEye Ltd were not in possession and thus unable to pursue damages, one of the same difficulties this Claimant faces, yet they lack the 'legitimate interest/commercial justification’ reasoning that disengaged the penalty rule for ParkingEye, given the unusual and case-specific facts in the Beavis case.


    10) This operation at this location is predatory, with minimal/misplaced signage designed not to be seen from inside a vehicle once parked, in order to penalise unsuspecting drivers rather than offer a clear contract to park at a price. The charge is unconscionable and unfair in this context, with ParkingEye v Beavis fully distinguished.


    11) The concept of the fairness of a contract must be considered in every case (Consumer Rights Act 2015) and was considered by District Judge Iyer in Pace Recovery v Lengyel, case C7GF6E3R, on 24 May 2017. The Judge held that 'the concept of fairness requires the parking firm to comply with the requirements of the relevant code of practice' which the parking operator had not; the same difficulty this Claimant faces.


    11.1. The transcript of the decision in Pace v Lengyel will be provided to the Court, since it is on all fours with this case in several other respects too, including:


    i. the Judge's findings that the Claimant could not make contracts with drivers, and


    ii. that there was no contract possible with a non-permit holder in any case, so any purported contract was invalid under the doctrine of impossibility of performance, and


    iii. the signage was inadequate, and


    iv. such a claim against a non-permit holder might have been more properly phrased in trespass, but that was not the Claimant's case and they were not the party in possession of the land.


    12) It is denied that the Claimant has any entitlement to the sums sought and it is denied that interest is applicable on the total sums claimed by the Claimant, which bear no relation to the maximum sum potentially able to be recovered from a registered keeper, as set out in the POFA, namely the sum stated in the Notice to Keeper.


    13) The Defendant denies the claim in its entirety, voiding any liability to the Claimant for all amounts due to the aforementioned reasons. The Defendant asks that the court gives consideration to exercise its discretion to order the case to be struck out under CPR Rule 3.4, for want of a detailed cause of action and/or for the claim having no realistic prospects of success.


    14) If the court is not minded to make such an order, then when Directions are given, the Defendant asks that there is an order for sequential service of witness evidence (rather than exchange) because it is expected that the Claimant will use its witness statement to provide the sort of detail which should have been disclosed much earlier, and the Defendant should have the opportunity to consider it, prior to serving evidence and witness statements in support of this defence.


    I confirm that the above facts and statements are true to the best of my knowledge and recollection.


    Signed...........................


    Date
    .....................


  • Coupon-mad
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    Do I keep the verbal parking consent and photos back for the WS?
    you must mention them - and you need 'promissory estoppel' and the fact you were authorised to park there - in the defence (near the start, in 'background'), but no attachments go at this stage, as your tangible evidence (e.g. the Pace v Lengyel, transcript, and your photos, etc.) follows with the WS later on.

    It's not true to say:
    The Claimant failed to respond to the Defendant's letter dated 22nd March 2016, asking for more evidence, and merely proceeded to issue a claim.

    because you said:
    got a response saying they are not obliged to provide it

    And I would remove this (below) because they are not presuming you were the driver and it will be better not to complicate matters in this case, which is about promissory estoppel and the fact the car WAS authorised to be there:
    5.3. To the extent that the Claimant may seek to allege that any such presumption exists, the Defendant expressly denies that there is any presumption in law (whether in statute or otherwise) that the keeper is the driver. Further, the Defendant denies that the vehicle keeper is obliged to name the driver to a private parking firm. Had this been the intention of parliament, they would have made such requirements part of POFA, which makes no such provision. In the alternative, an amendment could have been made to s.172 of the Road Traffic Act 1988. The 1988 Act continues to oblige the identification of drivers only in strictly limited circumstances, where a criminal offence has been committed. Those provisions do not apply to this matter.
    Failure to set out clearly, or offer parking terms to non-permit holders
    I am not sure I would say this, you did have permission. An were there any physical 'permits' needing to be displayed there? If not, then don't use the word 'permit' anywhere; instead go for 'authorised' or 'unauthorised' parking.
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  • FTB_Peter
    FTB_Peter Posts: 57 Forumite
    Upon returning to the site yesterday there are signs stating permit parking only (more than I recall from the time) but if you drive in and pull over to the right and then reverse into the parking bays, these signs are then hidden behind your car.


    Point taken about not receiving a response, oversight on my behalf. Is it worth mentioning the information I requested was not provided?
  • Coupon-mad
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    No, it's better to narrow the defence and remove the waffle, and in fact remove mention of case transcripts like PACE v Lengyel, as a defence is not the place to mention them.

    I would also remove the mention of other, older Gladstones cases struck out...

    You do need to talk about being authorised. And mention promissory estoppel.

    You do need to look at the 'particulars of claim' as written on the left of the claim form, and specifically respond to/deny or refute what is said there.
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