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  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 152,019 Forumite
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    edited 18 June at 12:49PM
    Yes that's good. Quite long but valid.

    I suggest you remove the DLUHC and draft Impact Assessment paragraphs in the template defence (middle) because that's old news and we are expecting news and a Public Consultation from the Labour MHCLG soon.

    I will be removing the DLUHC stuff when I get a chance.
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  • Doomswell
    Doomswell Posts: 21 Forumite
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    That would be paragraphs 9 to 13?
  • Gr1pr
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    Needs a space after  3.2

    Most of the narrative in your 3.1 should be saved for your WS in several months time,  so IMHO far too much detail for a defence 
  • Doomswell
    Doomswell Posts: 21 Forumite
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    What goes in a defence then?
    A simple statement of what happened, and the relevant legislation?
    The template is pretty long.
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 152,019 Forumite
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    Just do what I advised. I did say "Quite long but valid" so don't start faffing about with it.
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