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UKPC - County Court Claim - Hearing

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  • Coupon-mad
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    I'm a lady!   :)
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  • I'm a lady!   :)
    Sorry!
    Will post a revised WS tomorrow, would appreciate a final check before I submit. 
  • I'm a lady!   :)
    Apologies again, rude of me to assume.

    I have made the edits based on your feedback. Could you please check this looks good to go?
    https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?resid=D45076F206E55709!556&authkey=!AG7jsD4bncg5vdU
  • Coupon-mad
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    edited 17 January 2024 at 9:20PM
    Change 'violation' (several times) to 'event',

    Remove this from 8 because it makes no sense when you spell it out in para 10!

    It remains uncertain whether the claim pertains to my alleged parking outside of a designated bay, failure to remain on the premises, incorrect bay parking, overstaying the allotted time.

    You need to add paragraph numbers for every single paragraph (e.g. those under 10 have no number).

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  • 1505grandad
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    Some observations:-

    Make sure you state the full name of claimant in the heading

    Para 2  -  state exhibits 1 - 16  -  only 12 shown in contents list.

    Para 33  -  not relevant to your case  (kiosk, store closed, sign re clamping etc.)  -  make sure there are no other c & p errors


  • I have made sure paragraphs are numbered now, and removed the irrelevant section in paragraph 8.

    Fixed the exhibit numbers 1-12.
    removed the paragraph related to kiosk.

    I had a read through to make sure no more c&p errors.

    I think it might be good to go now?
    https://onedrive.live.com/view.aspx?resid=D45076F206E55709!556&authkey=!AG7jsD4bncg5vdU

    thanks again all!

  • Coupon-mad
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    Looks good, as long as you are showing dated photos (e.g. of the new sign added later).
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  • Looks good, as long as you are showing dated photos (e.g. of the new sign added later).
    the older photos are from google street view, not sure i can put a date on them except manually?
    the ones i took (the night time ones) I will have to figure out how to time stamp them from my phone.
  • KeithP
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    GSV images are dated month and year.
  • Coupon-mad
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    Citizen_K said:
    Looks good, as long as you are showing dated photos (e.g. of the new sign added later).
    the older photos are from google street view, not sure i can put a date on them except manually?
    the ones i took (the night time ones) I will have to figure out how to time stamp them from my phone.
    screenshot...!
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