Ccj and defence

shortysky

These are some of the evidence I used. 

shortysky

These are off my phone I think night mode was on, as dash cam images shows a more darker version. So not sure if to just use the day pictures. 

Fruitcake

I think the stills from your dash cam would be better as they show what a driver would have seen, and how difficult it would have been for you to see and read the signs at night.

You need to include the GSV image that shows number 34 and that it is next door to the pizza restaurant, plus a screenshot of the restaurant's website or something that shows its address as number 32.

shortysky

Ok true and the headlights kind of make it harder to see with the white back ground. So do you think I should put them in with or instead of the day time pictures? Also have I changed the parts right that you mentioned? 

shortysky

This was the image I used as proof of address as they have closed down now, so it’s not on their web page. What’s GSV sorry? 

KeithP

GSV = Google Street View.

shortysky

Thought that’s what it meant.. is the image I used ok for that, should I screen shot the shop next door like I have with the pizza express. And then a google street view to show its next door?

Redx

Good questions now , so yes , everything you can to bolster your case , nothing to make it worse , the dash cam footage is excellent , showing that it's not a car park but side road with parking outside the shops , excellent , the issue with the numbers on the doors , excellent

Keep going , you are improving it all the time due to the critical feedback and your willingness to accept it

shortysky

Redx said:

Good questions now , so yes , everything you can to bolster your case , nothing to make it worse , the dash cam footage is excellent , showing that it's not a car park but side road with parking outside the shops , excellent , the issue with the numbers on the doors , excellent

Keep going , you are improving it all the time due to the critical feedback and your willingness to accept it

That’s great thank you feel like I’m getting there. Sorry for being hostile I was just very stressed. Feel like it’s improving as I go. So I shall use the dash cam footage. But should I take the daytime images or leave them in? I will also add the google info for the shop next door, then a street view. The man who owns the business there gave me a lot of useful information and made it feel less daunting. 

Fruitcake

You now have a good base, so anything from now on will be fettling, fine tuning if you like. Please accept any suggestions and criticism in the spirit that it is meant, even if it appears to be nit-picking.

For example, 

3.       The Claimant are is

5.      The Claimant's trade body, the British Parking Association (BPA) ...

6.      The claimants are is ...