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CCJ issued after being misled by private parking firm - VCS

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  • Rmc2018
    Rmc2018 Posts: 92 Forumite
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    DRAFT ORDER
    IN THE COUNTY COURT AT NOTTINGHAM BUSINESS CENTRE 

     

    BETWEEN 

     

    VEHICLE CONTROL SERVICES (VCS) LTD (Claimant)

    And


    (Defendant)

    District Judge


    UPON THE APPLICATION of the Defendant dated 08 January 2021  and the annexed witness statement of xxxx dated 08 January 2021


    IT IS ORDERED that:

     

    1.     The default judgment dated 21st October 2020 be set aside.

    2.     All costs to be reimbursed by Claimant.

    3.     Unless the Claimant serves a copy of the Claim Form on the Defendant by 4 pm on [date] paragraph 2 shall cease to have effect and the Claimant shall pay the Defendant's costs summarily assessed at £255 plus the £185 paid by the defendant under duress and false pretences and the claim shall be struck out.

    4.     If the Claimant serves the claim form as directed in paragraph 3 the Defendant shall file and serve a defence by 4pm on [date].

    5.     Should the Claimant discontinue the Claim after the CCJ is set aside, paragraph 2 shall cease to have effect and the Claimant shall pay the Defendant's costs summarily assessed at £255 plus the £185 paid by the defendant under duress and false pretences plus the Defendant's costs for attending the hearing.

     

     

     

  • Rmc2018
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    N244 - pg 1.            
  • Rmc2018
    Rmc2018 Posts: 92 Forumite
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    N244 - pg 2           
  • Rmc2018
    Rmc2018 Posts: 92 Forumite
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    Hi all so I am hoping that I am now in a position to send my claim off, if you could all read the above and get back to me with anything at all that would be most appreciated. 

    my next steps? 
    - does everything get sent over at once - Draft Order, N244 form, WS, Defence?
    - do I need to physically sign the form/WS/Defence?
    - were do I sent the forms to and how - can they be emailed?
    - how do I make the payment?

    so so sorry if this has already been covered but I have read read and re-read the newbies section and all I see is how to submit my defence via email, I was not sure if this applied to the above also?

  • KeithP
    KeithP Posts: 41,296 Forumite
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    edited 29 January 2021 at 5:39PM
    Every paragraph needs a number. There are three unnumbered paragraphs following para 3 in your Defence.

    The paragraph numbering in your Witness Statement goes awry after the first instance of paragraph 21 - it reverts to paragraph 15.1 at that point and paragraph numbers to 21 are used a second time.
  • Rmc2018
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    Strange, not sure what happened but I will update the numbering thank you @KeithP
  • Umkomaas
    Umkomaas Posts: 43,826 Forumite
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    Rmc2018 said:
    Strange, not sure what happened but I will update the numbering thank you @KeithP
    Sometimes there is a forum glitch when copying and pasting directly from a word processor document. I'd check your original to see whether it is such a glitch, it may not be necessary to alter your original work. 
    Please note, we are not a legal advice forum. I personally don't get involved in critiquing court case Defences/Witness Statements, so unable to help on that front. Please don't ask. .

    I provide only my personal opinion, it is not a legal opinion, it is simply a personal one. I am not a lawyer.

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  • Jenni_D
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    For forums it can often be better to paste it first into Notepad to strip out formatting and then copy from Notepad and paste in here. :)
    Jenni x
  • Coupon-mad
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     Aware of this, the defendant ensured her car was parked for only 8 minutes whilst retrieving funds for the carp park, before returning to A Notice to Keeper  Driver  on the Vehicle.

    The only other thing I saw was in your defence you need to remove the first few words that starts talking about the PARTICULARS OF CLAIM because you weren't served with a claim for, were you?  Don't delete the whole point, just the bit taking about 'Particulars' of a claim form you've never seen.
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  • 1505grandad
    1505grandad Posts: 4,024 Forumite
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    ".....COUNTY COURT AT NOTTINGHAM BUSINESS CENTRE"

    Just checking  -  have not read all the posts but application notice posted above says Northampton
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