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  • waamo
    waamo Posts: 10,298 Forumite
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    If you are confused by it then don't alter it at all. It is carefully crafted to serve a purpose. Let it do its job.
  • jugulator
    jugulator Posts: 57 Forumite
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    Umkomaas wrote: »
    This is the danger of going 'off piste' and blowing your toes off in the process!

    What was the last thing Redx advised?

    By the way, they've done nothing 'illegal'.

    Oops! I should not have mentioned "I" The rest of the bits were copied from the other word template.
  • jugulator
    jugulator Posts: 57 Forumite
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    waamo wrote: »
    If you are confused by it then don't alter it at all. It is carefully crafted to serve a purpose. Let it do its job.

    I would be more than happy to just copy and paste the template, however, as I mentioned above the allegation is that I parked in a staff car park. There is no payment or time penalty involved. So, if I simply copy it, it wont make any sense.
  • Umkomaas
    Umkomaas Posts: 43,788 Forumite
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    edited 21 August 2019 at 8:58PM
    jugulator wrote: »
    Oops! I should not have mentioned "I" The rest of the bits were copied from the other word template.

    Remove it, then I'll edit my post. Just use the initial appeal template unaltered then they'll know you're getting forum help. Vanishingly few initial appeals are upheld. Save your efforts for POPLA.

    But if you're hell bent on disregarding advice, just get on with it. I'm too weary with this stuff to be arguing with a newbie.
    Please note, we are not a legal advice forum. I personally don't get involved in critiquing court case Defences/Witness Statements, so unable to help on that front. Please don't ask. .

    I provide only my personal opinion, it is not a legal opinion, it is simply a personal one. I am not a lawyer.

    Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; show him how to catch fish, and you feed him for a lifetime.

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  • Redx
    Redx Posts: 38,084 Forumite
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    edited 21 August 2019 at 8:58PM
    Then remove just those incorrect parts, no pdt section and no payment section

    You have a bad habit of using pre school English with the word I in sentences

    The 2 words to use are Keeper and driver

    The alleged contract is between parking company and driver

    This is being appealed as keeper , with no giving away details , like a no comment interview

    There is nothing illegal in any of this
  • jugulator
    jugulator Posts: 57 Forumite
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    Redx wrote: »
    Then remove just those incorrect parts, no pdt section and no payment section

    You have a bad habit of using pre school English with the word I in sentences

    The 2 words to use are Keeper and driver

    The alleged contract is between parking company and driver

    This is being appealed as keeper , with no giving away details , like a no comment interview

    There is nothing illegal in any of this

    Thank you. I will remove the pdt and payment section and send it off. Hope this one sounds ok:

    I dispute your 'parking charge', as the keeper of the vehicle. I deny any liability or contractual agreement and I will be making a formal complaint about your predatory conduct to your client landowner and to my MP.

    There will be no admissions as to who was driving and no assumptions can be drawn. Since your PCN is a vague template, I require ALL photos taken and an explanation of the allegation and your evidence.

    You must include a close up actual photograph of the sign you contend was at the location on the material date.

    The signage was hidden under the tree branch therefore, it was not clearly visible to the driver. Please see attached evidence.


    Formal note:
    Should you later pursue this charge by way of litigation, note that service of any legal documents by email is expressly disallowed and you are not entitled to assume that the data in this dispute/appeal remains the current address for service in the future.

    Yours faithfully,
  • Redx
    Redx Posts: 38,084 Forumite
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    Yes, that's fine ��

    Attach your picture of the hidden sign
  • Thank you.:beer:
  • Ralph-y
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    " I am not sure if I will have time to complain to PM as today is the deadline for appeal as I was on holiday."


    complain ... complain ... and complain



    this is by far the easiest way to end this


    Ralph:cool:
  • Ralph-y wrote: »
    " I am not sure if I will have time to complain to PM as today is the deadline for appeal as I was on holiday."


    complain ... complain ... and complain



    this is by far the easiest way to end this


    Ralph:cool:

    Hi My appeal to parking eye has been rejected. I have a POPLA ref number. Looking to appeal. Doing my research. Any guidance would be appreciated. I have also spoke to the practice, who have been difficult and not very helpful. Still in coversation.

    Many thanks for your help
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