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Court Claim Help needed.

Hi, looking for some help. My husband has received a claim form from Northampton county court in relation to a parking charge notice issued may 2018. I was the driver, but this has not been admitted at any stage. Unfortunately, we just ignored all the threatening letters and did not realise this advice is WELL out of date and now we are at this stage. I parked in a free car park for the local Tesco express and I am unsure how I breached the terms, I have not kept the paperwork, I believe I was either not parked fully in a bay or parked at the side of a bay that was not a "designated Bay" it was just a blank space of tarmac but has recently had markings painted stated no parking deliveries only. (these were not there at the time.)
On the date no Tiket was put n the window the attendant just took a photo of my car. NO ANPR is used. I read through POFA and I do not think that we were issued a potal charge within 14 days, but I cannot say for definate.
I have completed the AOS on the moneyclaim.gov site
I have drafted a template from the forums but If i am honest I dont really understand the jargon.
Could someone read over it and give feedback or advice.
1) It is admitted that the defendant, xxxxx residing at xxxx is the registered keeper of the vehicle but was not driving and did not park the vehicle on the material date.

2) It is denied that any indemnity costs are owed and any debt is denied in its entirety.

3) No evidence has been supplied by this claimant as to who parked the vehicle. Under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 there is no presumption in law as to who parked a vehicle on private land nor does there exist any obligation for a keeper to name a driver. I choose to defend this claim as the registered keeper, as is my right.

4) This is a completely unsubstantiated and inflated three-figure sum, vaguely and incoherently adduced by the claimant's solicitors in their claim. The Particulars are not clear and concise, so I have had to cover all eventualities in defending a 'cut & paste' claim. This has caused significant distress and has denied me a fair chance to defend this claim in an informed way.

5) As an unrepresented consumer I respectfully ask that I be permitted to amend and or supplement this interim defence as may be required following a fuller disclosure of the Claimant's case.


6) The Claimant’s solicitors are known to be a serial issuer of generic claims similar to this one, with no due diligence, no scrutiny of details nor even checking for a true cause of action. HMCS have identified over 1000 similar poorly produced claims and the solicitor's conduct in many of these cases is believed to be currently the subject of an active investigation by the SRA.

7) I believe the term for such conduct is ‘robo-claims’ which is against the public interest, demonstrates a disregard for the dignity of the court and is unfair on unrepresented consumers. I have reason to believe that this is a claim that will proceed without any facts or evidence supplied until the last possible minute, to my significant detriment as an unrepresented Defendant.

8) I suggest that parking companies using the small claims track as a form of aggressive, automated debt collection is not something the courts should be seen to support.

9) It is denied that the Claimant has authority to bring this claim. The proper Claimant (if any debt exists, which is denied) would be the landowner.

10) The alleged debt as described in the claim are unenforceable penalties, being just the sort of unconscionable charges exposed as offending against the penalty rule, in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis.

11). The claimant may try to rely upon ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67, ('the Beavis case') yet ParkingEye would not have been able to recover any sum at all without 'agreement on the charge'. In the Beavis case, the £85 charge was held to be allowable to act as a disincentive in that case only, based upon very specific and unique facts in a 'complex' case involving the existence of a specific legitimate interest from the landowners regarding turnover of parking spaces and very clear, brief and prominent signs. In fact, the Supreme Court Judges observed that it would be unfair if drivers were to be penalised for parking slightly out of bay lines when causing no obstruction (this was specifically mentioned at the hearing and was clearly not something they would have allowed). Further, it was held at the Court of Appeal that a parking charge sum of £135 would fail the penalty rule. The authority for this is 'Parkingeye Ltd v Somerfield Stores Ltd [2012] EWCA Civ 1338 (17 October 2012)'.

12) Notwithstanding that the Claimant claims no right to pursue the Defendant as the registered keeper under The Protection of Freedoms Act 2012, the Claimant has failed to meet the conditions of the Act and has never acquired any right to pursue the Defendant in this capacity if it cannot identify the driver. This distinguishes the case from Elliott vs Loake(1982) in which there was irrefutable evidence of the drivers identity. The Protection of Freedom Act 2012 Schedule 4 has not being complied with and the claimant may not quote reasonable assumption. PATAS and POPLA Lead Adjudicator and barrister, Henry Michael Greenslade, clarified that with regards to keeper liability, "There is no ‘reasonable presumption’ in law that the registered keeper of a vehicle is the driver and operators should never suggest anything of the sort"(2015).

13) It is submitted that (apart from properly incurred court fees) any added legal fees/costs are simply numbers made up out of thin air, and are an attempt at double recovery by the Claimant, which would not be recoverable in the small claims court. The lack of diligence in this claim demonstrates admirably that at best a ‘copy and paste' is the closest a human, legally trained or not, came to the information transmitted from claimant to the Money Claims Online system. There are no real costs and POFA prevents claims exceeding the sum on the original parking notice.

14) It is denied that there was any 'relevant obligation' or 'relevant contract' relating to any single parking event.

15). The defendant denies the claim in its entirety voiding any liability to the claimant for all amounts claimed due to the aforementioned reasons. It is submitted that the conduct of the Claimant is wholly unreasonable and vexatious. As such, I am keeping a note of my wasted time/costs in dealing with this matter.

16). I request the court strike out this claim for the reasons stated above, and for similar reasons cited by District Judge Cross of St Albans County Court on 20/09/16 where a similar claim was struck out without a hearing, due to Gladstones' template particulars for a private parking firm being 'incoherent', failing to comply with CPR16.4, and ''providing no facts that could give rise to any apparent claim in law''.

17). I put the Claimant to strict proof that it issued a compliant notice under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. No Notice to driver was issued on the material date. Absent such a notice served within 14 days of the parking event and with fully compliant statutory wording, no keeper liability can apply, due to this Claimant's PCN not complying with Schedule 4.

18). I believe that their signs fail the test of 'large lettering' and prominence, as established in ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis.
Unreadable signage breaches Appendix B of the BPA Code of Practice which states that terms on entrance signs must be clearly readable without a driver having to turn away from the road ahead. A Notice is not imported into the contract unless brought home so prominently that the party 'must' have known of it and agreed terms beforehand. It is noted that the sign is a forbidding one, so no contract can be made with the driver.

Statement of Truth: I confirm that the contents of this statement are true to the best of my knowledge and belief.
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  • KeithP
    KeithP Posts: 41,218 Forumite
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    Hi and welcome.

    What is the Issue Date on the Claim Form?

    It is very important the everything is done in the name of the Defendant.
    As you husband is the Defendant, it all must be done in his name, but of course you can help him as much as you like, but he must sign forms, etc.

    For example, did you login to MCOL using his name when you did the Acknowledgement of Service?
  • iamsamrat1
    iamsamrat1 Posts: 14 Forumite
    yes I everything is in his name. The issue dates on the forms are 15 march 19
  • KeithP
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    iamsamrat1 wrote: »
    The issue dates on the forms are 15 march 19
    With a Claim Issue Date of 15th March, and having done the Acknowledgement of Service in a timely manner, you have until 4pm on Wednesday 17th April 2019 to file your Defence.

    That's over four weeks away. Loads of time to produce a perfect Defence, but don't leave it to the very last minute.


    When you are happy with the content, your Defence should be filed via email as suggested here:
      Print your Defence.
    1. Sign it and date it.
    2. Scan the signed document back in and save it as a pdf.
    3. Send that pdf as an email attachment to CCBCAQ@Justice.gov.uk
    4. Just put the claim number and the word Defence in the email title, and in the body of the email something like 'Please find my Defence attached'.
    5. Log into MCOL after a few days to see if the Claim is marked "defended". If not chase the CCBC until it is.
    6. Do not be surprised to receive a copy of the Claimant's Directions Questionnaire, they are just trying to put you under pressure.
    7. Wait for your DQ from the CCBC, or download one from the internet, and then re-read post #2 of the NEWBIES FAQ sticky thread to find out exactly what to do with it.
  • D_P_Dance
    D_P_Dance Posts: 11,585 Forumite
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    On 18th March 2019 a Bill was enacted to curb the excesses of these private parking companies. Codes of Practice are being drawn up, an independent appeals service will be set up, and access to the DVLA's date base more rigorously policed, and persistent offenders denied access. Hopefully life will become impossible for the worst of these scammers.

    Until this is done you should still complain to your MP, citing the new legislation.

    http://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2019/8/contents/enacted

    Just as the clampers were finally closed down, so hopefully will the Private Parking Companies.
    You never know how far you can go until you go too far.
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 147,627 Forumite
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    That's a waffly old defence and is written in the first person, so that isn't what we advise in the NEWBIES thread. Please show us a version that is based on bargepole's concise defence examples (no link given or needed - it's in the NEWBIES thread already).
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
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  • Please an someone tell me the newbies thread is though?
    I'm not very tech savvy and I'm really struggling to find the info to help me with a court claim form.
  • KeithP
    KeithP Posts: 41,218 Forumite
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    Shrub28 wrote: »
    Please an someone tell me the newbies thread is though?
    I'm not very tech savvy and I'm really struggling to find the info to help me with a court claim form.
    There is a link to the NEWBIES thread earlier in this thread.
    I posted it myself earlier today.

    Now please stop posting on random threads - instead please start you own thread if you still have unanswered questions having read the NEWBIES thread.
  • Coupon-mad
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    Shrub28 wrote: »
    Please an someone tell me the newbies thread is though?
    I'm not very tech savvy and I'm really struggling to find the info to help me with a court claim form.
    But my signature tells you under all my posts...you just asked that question, immediately under where I tell you where to click to find the NEWBIES thread.

    If you are using a phone, you can't see half the forum, so STOP if so. It wastes everyone's time, especially yours.

    Sometimes I wonder why I bother to carry the words below.
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  • iamsamrat1
    iamsamrat1 Posts: 14 Forumite
    edited 21 March 2019 at 1:56PM
    Hi, I have tried to cut it down and taken some examples that are relevant from bargepole's defence. any feedback appreciated.
    1) It is admitted that the defendant, xxxxx residing at xxxx is the registered keeper of the vehicle but was not driving and did not park the vehicle on the material date.

    2) It is denied that any indemnity costs are owed and any debt is denied in its entirety.

    3) The Particulars of Claim state that the Defendant xxxx was the registered keeper and/or the driver of the vehicle(s). These assertions indicate that the Claimant has failed to identify a Cause of Action, and is simply offering a menu of choices. As such, the Claim fails to comply with Civil Procedure Rule 16.4, or with Civil Practice Direction 16, paras. 7.3 to 7.5. Further, the particulars of the claim do not meet the requirements of Practice Direction 16 7.5 as there is nothing which specifies how the terms were breached.

    4) No evidence has been supplied by this claimant as to who parked the vehicle. Under the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 there is no presumption in law as to who parked a vehicle on private land nor does there exist any obligation for a keeper to name a driver. The defendant chooses to defend this claim as the registered keeper, as is their right.

    5) The Defendant puts the Claimant to strict proof that it issued a compliant notice under Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. No Notice to driver was issued on the material date. Absent such a notice served within 14 days of the parking event and with fully compliant statutory wording, no keeper liability can apply, due to this Claimant's PCN not complying with Schedule 4.

    6) Notwithstanding that the Claimant claims no right to pursue the Defendant as the registered keeper under The Protection of Freedoms Act 2012, the Claimant has failed to meet the conditions of the Act and has never acquired any right to pursue the Defendant in this capacity if it cannot identify the driver. The Protection of Freedom Act 2012 Schedule 4 has not being complied with and the claimant may not quote reasonable assumption. PATAS and POPLA Lead Adjudicator and barrister, Henry Michael Greenslade, clarified that with regards to keeper liability, "There is no ‘reasonable presumption’ in law that the registered keeper of a vehicle is the driver and operators should never suggest anything of the sort"(2015).

    7) The Claimant’s solicitors are known to be a serial issuer of generic claims similar to this one, with no due diligence, no scrutiny of details nor even checking for a true cause of action. HMCS have identified over 1000 similar poorly produced claims and the solicitor's conduct in many of these cases is believed to be the subject of an investigation by the SRA.

    8) It is denied that the Claimant has authority to bring this claim. The proper Claimant (if any debt exists, which is denied) would be the landowner.

    9) The Protection of Freedoms Act 2012, Schedule 4, at Section 4(5) states that the maximum sum that may be recovered from the keeper is the charge stated on the Notice to Keeper, in this case £100. The claim includes an additional £60 “contractual costs”, for which no calculation or explanation is given, and which appears to be an attempt at double recovery.

    10) It is denied that there was any 'relevant obligation' or 'relevant contract' relating to any single parking event.

    11) The Defendant requests the court strike out this claim for the reasons stated above, and for similar reasons cited by District Judge Cross of St Albans County Court on 20/09/16 where a similar claim was struck out without a hearing, due to Gladstones' template particulars for a private parking firm being 'incoherent', failing to comply with CPR16.4, and ''providing no facts that could give rise to any apparent claim in law''.


    The facts in this defence are true to the best of my knowledge and belief.

    xxxxxx
  • Le_Kirk
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    Looking good.
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