DCB Legal LTD Brocklebank Retail Park

teagee85

I've recieved the usual claim form, have done the AOS and am now at writing the defence stage.

This is for "overstay" using Greenwich retail park. I was unaware that there was a time limit if you were a customer of the businesses there until I received the fine. I didn't notice the time limit on the signs there or I would have moved/left.

Can some one help me word that in a better way for section 3. of my defence? Is it worth including at all? 

Coupon-mad

Nope. You don't have any 'fine'.

Please just use what I already link there which already gives you your para 3.

Show us the POC please.

teagee85

Here's the POC

Coupon-mad

OK, same advice as here (remove a few words):

https://forums.moneysavingexpert.com/discussion/comment/81403976/#Comment_81403976

teagee85

Amazing, thanks for the info!

Gr1pr

And in future,  please complain about any future pcn invoice from a private parking company to the retail park management company or landlord,  or even the retailer or business,  ASAP after receiving it, as explained in this thread below 

https://forums.moneysavingexpert.com/discussion/comment/81382407#Comment_81382407

But do follow the advice given above for the current court claim