Claimant bank park management Solicitor dcb legal. Need help with defence.

mohammadb1234

Le_Kirk said:

mohammadb1234 said:

Not done any correspondence yet. Will post my defence on here hopefully tomorrow as have a day off. Any advice on changes will Be appreciated. I’ll try only post the paragraphs I change 

Not even an appeal?

No only thing I did was an aos. 

I just thought if I ignored it then it would go away lol. Like it has in the past 

mohammadb1234

Le_Kirk said:

mohammadb1234 said:

Not done any correspondence yet. Will post my defence on here hopefully tomorrow as have a day off. Any advice on changes will Be appreciated. I’ll try only post the paragraphs I change 

Not even an appeal?

No nothing at all. I ignored it hoping it would just go away. 

mohammadb1234

The facts as known to the Defendant:

2. It is admitted that the Defendant was the registered keeper and driver of the vehicle.

3. The defendant was parked in this car park as he was visiting the charity shop to drop off an item. The defendant has used this car park previously and this was given the all clear by the charity shop when dropping items for donation. The signs in the car park were unclear and hard to read. The defendant felt that as he was visiting a vendor whom has a right to the car park and who had previously given permission for the defendant to park within it that it was ok to do so on this occasion without any further action. The parking charge that followed came as a shock to the defendant. 

mohammadb1234

Any advice appreciated please. 

Le_Kirk

mohammadb1234 said:

The facts as known to the Defendant:

2. It is admitted that the Defendant was the registered keeper and driver of the vehicle.

3. The defendant was parked in this car park as he was visiting the charity shop to drop off an item. The defendant has used this car park previously and this thus was given the all clear by the charity shop when dropping items for donation. The signs in the car park were unclear and hard to read. The defendant felt that as he was visiting a vendor whom has a right to the car park and who had previously given permission for the defendant to park within it that it was ok to do so on this occasion without any further action. The parking charge that followed came as a shock to the defendant. 

Maybe change as above, if you were a frequent visitor you probably knew the signage or restrictions.

Coupon-mad

Yep, slot that shorter version by @Le_Kirk into the defence by @Johny86 (= 33 paragraphs) and sign & date & email it off as a PDF to the CCBC as set out in the Template Defence '12 first steps'.

mohammadb1234

Le_Kirk said:

mohammadb1234 said:

The facts as known to the Defendant:

2. It is admitted that the Defendant was the registered keeper and driver of the vehicle.

3. The defendant was parked in this car park as he was visiting the charity shop to drop off an item. The defendant has used this car park previously and this thus was given the all clear by the charity shop when dropping items for donation. The signs in the car park were unclear and hard to read. The defendant felt that as he was visiting a vendor whom has a right to the car park and who had previously given permission for the defendant to park within it that it was ok to do so on this occasion without any further action. The parking charge that followed came as a shock to the defendant. 

Maybe change as above, if you were a frequent visitor you probably knew the signage or restrictions.

Thanks for your help. I have visited a few times. But it changed just before the last time I visited to bank park management who installed the anpr camera. Since then I’ve avoided the car park. But I’ll leave it as you’ve edited the paragraphs as wouldn’t want to look like a repeat offender. 

mohammadb1234

Coupon-mad said:

Yep, slot that shorter version by @Le_Kirk into the defence by @Johny86 (= 33 paragraphs) and sign & date & email it off as a PDF to the CCBC as set out in the Template Defence '12 first steps'.

Thanks I’ll do that. 

mohammadb1234

Coupon-mad said:

Yep, slot that shorter version by @Le_Kirk into the defence by @Johny86 (= 33 paragraphs) and sign & date & email it off as a PDF to the CCBC as set out in the Template Defence '12 first steps'.

Hi
just wanted to ask do I need to print and sign. Or can I just type my name where it says signature. Thanks 

Le_Kirk

You can either print, sign and scan to .pdf or take a photo of (or scan) your signature on white paper/card and copy that to your defence .pdf.