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Help with witness statement against UKCPM/Gladstones please!

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  • 1505grandad
    1505grandad Forumite Posts: 2,734
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    A heads-up  -  you will see that in the above mentioned WS examples they refer to the BPA CoP because they are BPA AoS members  -  your claimant is an IPC AoS member so you should be using/quoting the relevant version of the IPC CoP.
  • ANTIUKCPM
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    A heads-up  -  you will see that in the above mentioned WS examples they refer to the BPA CoP because they are BPA AoS members  -  your claimant is an IPC AoS member so you should be using/quoting the relevant version of the IPC CoP.
    Just had a look on the UKCPM website and says they are part of IPC and the BPA? 

    https://www.uk-carparkmanagement.co.uk/aboutus/industry-standards

  • Coupon-mad
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    edited 12 June at 10:40PM
    If I had a fiver for every time someone has posted that...!

    They aren't, and this point (specific to UKCPM) is answered in the Q&A in the first post of the NEWBIES thread. Nothing much is new or different.
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top of this/any page where it says:
    Forum Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • ANTIUKCPM
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    Please can someone read my first draft WS? 

    It is not complete and my exhibits haven't been labelled correctly, but is the content ok? 

    Then I can just move onto indexing/correct exhibits. 

    Do I need to provide exhibits for every legal case I mention? 

    https://uploadnow.io/f/cgp4blb

  • KeithP
    KeithP Forumite Posts: 36,207
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    You are asking for someone to download a file to their device.
    Not for me I'm afraid.

    Why not use something like Dropbox?
  • ANTIUKCPM
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    Sure, please check the link below for the draft:

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/bhfxo30yywfyw9d/Draft WS word.docx?dl=0
  • Le_Kirk
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    I was initially shocked to receive formal notices of demand for parking charges, for which I never actually received an initial ticket for.
    Nice try to use correct grammar but then messed it up!  Also I see no mention (certainly in the early stages of your statement) of Loading/Unloading is not parking and citing Jopson v Homeguard.  If it is later, apologies.  You mention employees and visitors; are you an employee or just a visitor?
  • 1505grandad
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    edited 13 June at 11:55AM
    Pedantic observations  -  para 3   -  "no where" is one word "nowhwere"
                                             para 5  -   "Chrons Disease"  -  is this the correct spelling?
                                             para 10 -  "pulse developmen"  -  is this the name of a                                                                        company  if so first letters should be capital

    Opening post states:-

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    2) For stopping outside my friends flat to offload and the car was probably left for 5-10 minutes in total - again a postal ticket. (no DYL)"

    However WS para 12 states "Defendant's residency"  -  and "De
    fendant's Tenancy Agreement"
  • ANTIUKCPM
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    Pedantic observations  -  para 3   -  "no where" is one word "nowhwere"
                                             para 5  -   "Chrons Disease"  -  is this the correct spelling?
                                             para 10 -  "pulse developmen"  -  is this the name of a                                                                        company  if so first letters should be capital

    Opening post states:-

    "2) For stopping outside my friends flat to offload and the car was probably left for 5-10 minutes in total - again a postal ticket. (no DYL)"

    However WS para 12 states "Defendant's residency"  -  and "Defendant's Tenancy Agreement"
    Thanks for the help. 

    Point 12 is the Jopson vs Homeguard point. Can I not mention it as a visitor? I was visiting. 
  • ANTIUKCPM
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    Le_Kirk said:
    I was initially shocked to receive formal notices of demand for parking charges, for which I never actually received an initial ticket for.
    Nice try to use correct grammar but then messed it up!  Also I see no mention (certainly in the early stages of your statement) of Loading/Unloading is not parking and citing Jopson v Homeguard.  If it is later, apologies.  You mention employees and visitors; are you an employee or just a visitor?
    Thanks @Le_Kirk, I mentioned Jopson v Homeguard on point 12. Now I am confused if it is even valid as a visitor

    Do I need to place all cases mentioned as Exhibits?

    many thanks 
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