Need help with DCB Legal PCN. Thank you.

DisruptiveLad

What the hell is that logo?

DisruptiveLad

There are threads on the forum about dodgy court forms. Have you checked the logos with the court? The right-hand stamp should have the word Northampton on it. Am I right? Am I straw clutching?

Umkomaas

That is unequivocally a formal court claim form. This is all done electronically with the Claimant (their solicitor in most cases) just filling the details in online - there is no human involvement at the Northampton CCBC, the distribution centre for MCOL claims. The fact that the DCB Legal input is woeful and unprofessional does not allow anyone to be complacent about the claim. It is real, it is live, and it must be dealt with. 

MaludoliM

Hi 
Thank you for your eagle eye DisruptiveLad, and thank you for confirmation Umkomaas. 
I can fully confirm although my 9 year old son could fill it better this is genuine claim that AOS was done for today on GOV site. 
My best regards 

MaludoliM

Good afternoon everyone. 
Thank you for being there 
I hope i did not blab to much in this defence. 
Please see if this is acceptable and if not i would greatly appreciate input and suggestions. 
My best regards 

Redx

3) seems far too long to me , most of it should be saved for your witness statement plus exhibits stage in several months time , because it's an excellent witness statement , but a defence should be concise , to the point , having the points in place that are expanded upon in your WS

2) should say keeper and driver , losing the second sentence ( we tell people this on a daily basis , keep it concise , don't use 2 separate sentences when one will suffice )

MaludoliM

Hi 
So i blabbed to much …lol sorry
My English is not my strong part. How can i condense it ? what to get rid off?
I think i can like you say turn this to simpler looking and pointed message - at least first two paragraphs 
How do i condense third paragraph i don't know - let me re think this ang i will be back with V2.0
My best regards 

Le_Kirk

Condense it down to show only the important parts - disabled badge, disabled customer of the Range, poor signage, poor road markings etc and keep the (excellent) rest of it as per @Redx's comments for the witness statement stage.  Just make sure the defence refutes the points made in the POC (Particulars of Claim).

MaludoliM

Hi Le_Kirk!
Thank you that helped allot. 
I will apply this - i always struggle with making things short. 
Best regards 

DisruptiveLad

I have contacted the Ministry of Justice and lodged a complaint against Northampton CCBC.