County Court Defence for a parking ticket

emjay1926

Hi there,
I've gone to submit my defence online at the Money Claim Online. gov  website, however it only gives me 122 lines. My defence is a lot longer than this. 
What would you suggest? 
Thank you! 

nosferatu1001

What did the newbies thread etll you?
Every single question you have on this is answered there. 

emjay1926

nosferatu1001 said:

What did the newbies thread etll you?
Every single question you have on this is answered there. 

Sorry, I can't seem to find this? 
Could you repost please or direct me to it. Thank you! 
The links I have looked on, don't have the details about this matter. 

D_P_Dance

It is on the index page,

Le_Kirk

You were given specific instructions by KeithP on 14th April at 8.51 pm (admittedly you had to follow a link) on how to submit your defence by e-mail and not through MCOL

nosferatu1001

The newbies thread explicitly states how you are to file your defence, and you have been explicitly directed to it more than once now.

emjay1926

Thank you all so much for your help! I've found the link. 
Sorry to ask lost of questions, its my first ticket & time on the MSE forum too! 
Keep safe everyone & thank you again. 

Coupon-mad

The link isn't the actual NEWBIES thread though, you need to read that too to see the whole picture. 

How have you got this far WITHOUT reading the sticky thread of FAQS that tells you all about pre-court and court stage and how to win? 

 See my signature.  You are TWO CLICKS away and were meant to read the second post of that sticky thread first.

emjay1926

Hi guys & gals, 
I hope you are all keeping well & safe. I am going to send a SAR to ParkingEye I was wondering if this sounds okay to send or do I need to edit it in any ways.
Thank you all so much for your help!!  
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Dear Sir or Madam,

Subject Access Request 

(Data Protection Act 2018 / General Data Protection Regulations (GDPR) )

 

Please supply the data about me that I am entitled to under data protection law relating to myself.

I understand that you may hold data relating me and I am therefore writing to request access to my personal data. This request is made in accordance with Article15 of the General Data Protection Regulations (“GDPR”). I am happy for this information to be provided to me via Email attachments PDF form. 

 

In terms of the data I wish to access, I am seeking all personal data processed by you or any third party to which my personal data has been disclosed including, but not limited to, emails or other word-processed documents, contracts, account notes, financial statements, default notices etc.

- All data held, all evidence you will rely on, and a full copy of the PCN, NTK.

-All information send to POPLA regarding this case, including written and photographs.

-All colour photographs and complete video CCTV and ANPR footage of the car park entrance, exit, the car park area and car wash area on the 'day xxxxxxxxxx 2019, times 12:40- 14:00.

- All letters and emails sent and received, including any appeal correspondence earlier. 

- All letters, emails and phone conversations including dates & times with Holiday Inn Ariel & the onsite car cleaning company.

- All photos of the parking signs in the car park & car cleaning area on the day of ‘day xxxxxxxxxx 2019. 

- The total amount of vehicles that overstayed the 30-minute allowance on 'day xxxxxxxxxx 2019.

- The total amount of vehicles that input their details in the car wash keypad on ‘day xxxxxxxxxx 2019. 

- The total amount of vehicles that got PCNs on ‘day xxxxxxxxxx 2019.

- A list of all PCNs that are outstanding against myself and/or this VRN.

 

As you will know, subject access requests made under the GDPR are now free of charge and you are required to comply with my request within one calendar month beginning after the day the request has been received. If you need any more data from me to confirm my identity please let me know as soon as possible.

If you do not normally deal with these requests, please pass this letter to your Data Protection Officer, or relevant staff member. If you need advice on dealing with this request, the Information Commissioner’s Office can assist you. Its website is ico.org.uk or it can be contacted on 0303 123 1113.

 

Yours faithfully,

Redx

a SAR only covers YOUR PERSONAL DATA , nothing else, so half of that list is not applicable

the only items that are applicable apply to you and your vehicle , nothing else