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PCN at surgery - Defence
 
             
         CLAIM No:
XXXXX
BETWEEN:
CIVIL ENFORCEMENT LIMITED
(Claimant)
-and-
XXXXX
(Defendant)
________________________________________
DEFENCE
________________________________________
1.
	The Defendant was the registered keeper and
driver of vehicle registration number XXXXXX on the material date. The
car was parked on the material date in a marked bay allocated
to company Civil Enforcement Ltd. (CEL) at XXXXX car park, for a
visit to XXXXX Surgery, XXXX
Surgery, 2nd
Floor, XXXXX
House, 6
XXXXXX
Road, XXXXXXX,
XXXXX.
2.
	The
Defendant frequently
visits
outpatients surgeries
for
clinical attention, which hasn’t been evidenced due to the
sensitive nature of the information. 
In NHS patient car parking principles Guidance is stated
“Concessions, including free
or reduced charges or caps, should be available for the following
groups … frequent outpatient
attenders”.
3. Due to the sparseness of the Particulars, it is unclear as to what legal basis the claim is brought, whether for breach of contract, contractual liability, or trespass. However, it is denied that the Defendant entered into any contractual agreement with the Claimant, whether express, implied, or by conduct.
3.1. The Particulars of Claim on the N1 Claim Form refer to “Claim for monies relating to a Parking Charge...in breach of the terms + conditions (T+Cs). Drivers are not allowed to park in accordance with T+Cs fo use.”. However, they do not state the basis of any purported liability for these charges, in that they do not state what the terms of parking were, or in what way they are alleged to have been breached.
Accordingly, the particulars of the claim do not meet the requirements of Practice Direction 16, 7.5 as there is nothing which specifies how the terms were breached.
3.2 PRACTICE DIRECTION 22 – STATEMENTS OF TRUTH not followed, as paragraph 3.9 “The individual who signs a statement of truth must print his full name clearly beneath his signature.” hasn’t been respected by the Claimants representative.
4.
Further and in the alternative, it is denied that the Claimant’s
signage sets out the terms in a sufficiently clear manner which would
be capable of binding any reasonable person reading them, especially
with no 'grace period' mentioned. They merely state “Permit
holders only – if you park without obtaining a permit, you agree to
pay £100. These terms apply at all times. Additional costs will be
incurred if payment is not made within 28 days”.
The
defendant would therefore suggest the sign is a forbidding sign and
is only making an offer of parking to permit holders only. If a
driver is not authorised to park in the car park due to it being
permit holders only then you cannot be offered a contract. The only
claim would be for trespass which only the landholder can claim, and
only for a nominal sum.
4.1. The signs refer to“Permit holders only/Terms of parking without permission”, and suggest that by parking without permission, motorists are contractually agreeing to a parking charge of £100. This is questionable, since if there is no permission, there is no offer, and therefore no contract.
5. In any case, the Claimant is put to strict proof that it had sufficient proprietary interest in the land, or that it had the necessary authorisation from the landowner to issue parking charge notices, and to pursue payment by means of litigation in its own name on the material date. The Claimant appears to be a contractor on an agent/principal basis operating under a bare licence to erect signs, and no doubt, to issue PCNs - but 'on behalf of' the landowner, which would give them no authority or standing.
5.1 The PCN issued by CEL at 02/05/2019 uses as address “CAR PARK AT XXXXXX HOUSE, SXXXXXX STREET, XXXXXX, XXXXX”, but the XXXX Surgery’s address is XXXX Surgery, 2nd Floor, XXXXXX House, YYYYYYY, XXXXX, XXXXX.
Due to the discrepancy of addresses of XXXXX Surgery, and of the one mentioned by the Claimant on the PCN, I require evidence that the correct land is managed by the Claimant, with the land being clearly defined in the contract with the Landlord.
5.2.
Even if the Claimant was authorised to issue PCNs in their own right,
it is denied that they could do so unfairly in a grace period,
disregarding the health services nature of the facilities, and
outwith the scope of the BPA CoP. It is denied that the limited
landowner contract gave this Claimant the express legal standing to
form contracts and litigate in their own name.
6.
The Claimant may rely on the case of ParkingEye v Beavis [2015]
UKSC 67 as a binding precedent on the lower court. However, that only
assists the Claimant if the facts of the case are the same, or
broadly the same. In Beavis, it was common ground between the parties
that the terms of a contract had been breached, whereas it is the
Defendant's position that no such breach occurred in this case,
because Claimant has no right to issue a PCN within 4 minutes and
without a grace period, because there was no valid contract, and also
because the 'legitimate interest' in enforcing parking rules for
retailers and shoppers in Beavis does not apply to these
circumstances. Therefore, this case can be distinguished from Beavis
on the facts and circumstances.
6.1 With no
'legitimate interest' excuse for charging this unconscionable sum
given the above facts, this Claimant is fully aware that their claim
is reduced to an unrecoverable penalty and must fail.
Unconscionable,
punitive 'parking charge' - again, Beavis is distinguished
7.
As the 'parking charge' was free, then the sum 'owed' is a
quantifiable figure. Despite it was an appointment of a genuine
patient to XXXXX surgery, the Defendant received a predatory PCN
applied demanding an extortionate £100 (also described also as the
'parking charge' but clearly being an unrecoverable penalty). This is
not the sort of 'complex' issue with a 'compelling' commercial
justification that saved the charge in Beavis from the penalty
rule.
7.2. No complicated manipulations of the penalty
rule can apply to a standard contract like this one, with quantified
damages, otherwise every trader could massage any £0 bill to
suddenly become £500. In Beavis it was held that the claim
could not have been pleaded as damages, as that would have failed. It
was accepted that £85 was the sum for parking, and that was the
'parking charge' for want of any other monetary consideration in a
free car park. It was not pleaded in damages, unlike here, where the
sum for parking was a minuscule sum in pence (if unpaid, which it was
not) and the Claimant is trying to claim damages of £100, no doubt
hoping for a Judge who cannot properly interpret the intricacies of
the Beavis case.
8. In addition to the original PCN
penalty, for which liability is denied, the Claimants have
artificially inflated the value of the Claim by adding purported
added 'costs' of £82, which the Defendant submits have not actually
been incurred by the Claimant.
8.1. These have been
variously described as “administration fee” (in the
pre-action exchange of letters) and/or a 'debt collection charge'
(not part of any terms on signage and cannot be added, not least
because it was never expended). Suddenly in the Particulars there is
also a second add-on for purported 'legal representative costs of
£50' on top of the vague £82, and also £11.01, artificially hiking
the sum to £999.01. This would be more than double recovery, being
vague and disingenuous and the Defendant is alarmed by this gross
abuse of process.
8.2. Not only are such costs not
permitted (CPR 27.14) but the Defendant believes that the Claimant
has not incurred legal costs. Given the fact that BW Legal boasted in
Bagri v BW Legal Ltd of processing 'millions' of claims with
an admin team (and only a handful of solicitors), the Defendant avers
that no solicitor is likely to have supervised this current batch of
cut & paste PPS robo-claims at all, on the balance of
probabilities.
8.2.1. According to Ladak v DRC Locums
UKEAT/0488/13/LA the claimant can only recover the direct and
provable costs of the time spent on preparing the claim in a legal
capacity, not any administration cost. 
9.
Given that it appears that this Claimant's conduct provides for no
cause of action, is without merit, and has no real prospect of
success, and this is intentional and contumelious, the Claimant's
claim must fail and the court is invited to strike it out.
Accordingly, the Court is invited to strike out the claim of its own
initiative, using its case management powers pursuant to Civil
Procedure Rules 3.4.
9.1. In
the alternative, the Court is invited, under the Judge's own
discretionary case management powers, to set a preliminary hearing to
examine the question of this Claimant's substantial interference with
easements, rights and 'primacy of contract' of patients at this site,
to put an end to not only this litigation but to send a clear message
to the Claimant to case wasting the court's time by bringing genuine
patients to court under excuse of a contractual breach that cannot
lawfully exist.
I believe the facts contained in this
Defence are true.
Signature
Name
Date
Comments
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            That is quite a bit older than the one I posted today - the advantage of the new one is that it asks the Judge to read the stuff about Abuse of Process first and to strike the claim out. It also attaches three judgments/Orders, not two.
 Can I encourage you please to test the new template, download it and adapt it then post your version here?
 See the thread I started today (no link!).PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
 CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
 Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD3
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            Is this the same incident as being discussed in your earlier thread?...
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            If it is, please let this thread die.
 DO NOT REPLY HERE AGAIN PLEASE IF THIS IS A DUPLICATE THREAD.
 Post your draft defence (NOT THE ABOVE ONE) on your existing thread. The one you download from my thread, suitably adapted - post that on your older thread and stay there ONLY.
 We cannot handle more than one thread per case. Don't start new threads at each stage, at all (please). Always reply on your thread.PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
 CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
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 oh GOD.. I can't write a defence for the third time.. is the defence I posted here bad?Coupon-mad said:That is quite a bit older than the one I posted today - the advantage of the new one is that it asks the Judge to read the stuff about Abuse of Process first and to strike the claim out. It also attaches three judgments/Orders, not two.
 Can I encourage you please to test the new template, download it and adapt it then post your version here?
 See the thread I started today (no link!).
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            You are not going to need to write another. Use mine.
 PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
 CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
 Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD2
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 I'll continue the discussion in this thread, if you don't mind..Coupon-mad said:If it is, please let this thread die.
 DO NOT REPLY HERE AGAIN PLEASE IF THIS IS A DUPLICATE THREAD.
 Post your draft defence (NOT THE ABOVE ONE) on your existing thread. The one you download from my thread, suitably adapted - post that on your older thread and stay there ONLY.
 We cannot handle more than one thread per case. Don't start new threads at each stage, at all (please). Always reply on your thread.
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 I'll keep that post and let the other die, as the subject of this post is much more representative of it's content.Coupon-mad said:You are not going to need to write another. Use mine.
 DO NOT REPLY HERE AGAIN PLEASE IF THIS IS A DUPLICATE THREAD.
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            OK I see what you mean!PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
 CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
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            Have you seen this?
 https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/nhs-patient-visitor-and-staff-car-parking-principles/nhs-patient-visitor-and-staff-car-parking-principlesNine times out of ten these tickets are scams, so consider complaining to your MP, it can cause the scammer extra costs and work, and has been known to get the charge cancelled. 
 Parliament is well aware of the MO of these private parking companies, many of whom are former clampers, and on 15th March 2019 a Bill was enacted to curb the excesses of these shysters. Codes of Practice are being drawn up, an independent appeals service will be set up, and access to the DVLA's date base more rigorously policed, persistent offenders denied access to the DVLA database and unable to operate.
 Hopefully life will become impossible for the worst of these scammers, but until this is done you should still complain to your MP, citing the new legislation.
 http://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2019/8/contents/enacted
 Just as the clampers were finally closed down, so hopefully will many of these Private Parking Companies.
 You never know how far you can go until you go too far.0
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            D_P_Dance said:Have you seen this?
 https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/nhs-patient-visitor-and-staff-car-parking-principles/nhs-patient-visitor-and-staff-car-parking-principlesNine times out of ten these tickets are scams, so consider complaining to your MP, it can cause the scammer extra costs and work, and has been known to get the charge cancelled. 
 Parliament is well aware of the MO of these private parking companies, many of whom are former clampers, and on 15th March 2019 a Bill was enacted to curb the excesses of these shysters. Codes of Practice are being drawn up, an independent appeals service will be set up, and access to the DVLA's date base more rigorously policed, persistent offenders denied access to the DVLA database and unable to operate.
 Hopefully life will become impossible for the worst of these scammers, but until this is done you should still complain to your MP, citing the new legislation.
 http://www.legislation.gov.uk/ukpga/2019/8/contents/enacted
 Just as the clampers were finally closed down, so hopefully will many of these Private Parking Companies.Hello D_P_Dance, and thanks for all your support. What should I write and to who MP? Just connected to internet again.Best0
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