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NewJoiner

Coupon-mad wrote: »

Of course, that's why we all come here.



Can you show us draft #2 (with changes made) in a reply now, as we are on page 2 of your thread - as I see the forum pages at least - and it's easier to look at new posts than scroll back to a previous page now.

Thanks Coupon-mad. Not sure if you wanted me to post me appeal here or upload the doc with images. It is available here - XXX://www.scribd.com/document/418732192/Popla

Anyway, I'm working on changing from Para 9 to 8 as you pointed out, so need to get it right.
A few questions while working on it:
1. Where do I refer to the fact that there is no full address including post code, etc. just a name of shopping centre that doesn't exist?(pointed out by Edna).
2. The Notice to keeper was delivered after 30 days from the PCN, it is stated that it must be 28 days, am I correct?

Thank you!

Quentin

https://www.scribd.com/document/418732192/Popla

Coupon-mad

A few questions while working on it:
1. Where do I refer to the fact that there is no full address including post code, etc. just a name of shopping centre that doesn't exist?(pointed out by Edna).

Anywhere you like. Most people would have a section about why the NTK isn't fully compliant with the POFA and quote the bit from Sch4 where it says the NTK must identify the 'relevant land'.

2. The Notice to keeper was delivered after 30 days from the PCN, it is stated that it must be 28 days, am I correct?

No. They are not allowed to get DVLA data that soon after the PCN.

The POFA Sch4 is very easy to read at para 8 and it tells you the timeline allowed.

NewJoiner

Hi Coupn-mad, thank you for your feedback.
I have now modified the appeal and uploaded my latest draft. It will be great if you/anyone can read the full response and comment? I must get it finalised today. I thank you very much for your help.

File is here - https://www.scribd.com/document/419353062/Popla-2

NewJoiner

Anyone please???

NewJoiner

Coupon-mad, I know you get plenty of questions but if you can proof read my appeal it will be appreciated.

waamo

That should do it. You may have to hammer home failure to comply with POFA at the comments stage but even a gormless POPLA adjudicator should get it.

I haven't checked but did they get the dates right for POFA? If not point that out too.

NewJoiner

waamo wrote: »

That should do it. You may have to hammer home failure to comply with POFA at the comments stage but even a gormless POPLA adjudicator should get it.

I haven't checked but did they get the dates right for POFA? If not point that out too.

Thanks Waamo. I think they got the dates right, got the notice a couple of weeks after my appeal was rejected.

NewJoiner

@ Umkomaas - The Popla appeal is today.

Redx

NewJoiner wrote: »

Thank you for your comment Redx, I actually posted the full draft with pictures on post #28. I'm now uploading a revised version. I will post it in a new post.

I do not click on links, most people won't and especially not if they are on a phone or tablet at the time (like this reply I am typing and using predictive text using an Iconia tablet)

I only read what I can see, so I saw 2 different claimants being mentioned, which did not make any sense at all, hence my post