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Lbc Gladstones advice pls - Fluttering ticket

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  • Coupon-mad
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    edited 14 April 2017 at 10:36PM
    Yes but 'management' is not on the agenda, so the worst of these firms would see the amount of PCNs as as a success (for them). Terrible.
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  • Gemwill
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    Ok think it's almost ready, unless anyone else has any pointers please?
    It's obviously over the 122 to submit on line. I have the email address to send it to but do I need to do anything else with my online form? Thank you


    Claim Number

    Link Parking Limited
    V
    Xxxxx


    Statement of Defence

    I am xx defendant in this matter and deny liability for the entirety of the claim for the following
    reasons:

    (1).
    It is admitted that the Defendant was the authorised registered keeper of the vehicle in question at the time of the alleged incident.

    (2).
    It is admitted that the Defendant was the driver of the vehicle in question at the time of the alleged incident.
    This information was provided at appeal on xx and also to the IAS on xx a name and serviceable address was provided on both occasions, Link Parking have improperly obtained the registered keeper details from the DVLA and failed to comply with the requirements of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012.


    (3)
    The Claimant has not complied with the pre-court protocol.
    a) No Compliant Letter of Claim was sent to the Defendant, when this was queried and further information requested. The response was ‘they believed it to be compliant’ ‘ and that they are not instructed to enter into any further correspondence’. They failed to engage in any further correspondence despite this being part of the Protocol to try and avoid court stages, and to reduce the costs of resolving the dispute.
    b) I'd refer the court to Para 4 on non-compliance and sanction, and I'd also point out that there can be no reasonable excuse for the Claimant's failure to follow the Pre-action Conduct process, especially bearing in mind that the Claim was issued by their own Solicitors so they clearly had legal advice before issuing proceedings and have issued a vast number of these.

    (4)
    The defendant wrote to the claimant on xx and xx asking for:
    -Full particulars of the parking charges
    -A full copy of the contract with the landholder that demonstrated that their authority.
    -If the charges were based on damages for breach of contract to provide a breakdown
    -To provide a copy of the signs that Link Parking can evidence were on site and which contended formed a contract with the driver on that occasion, as well a sign map of the location.

    The claimant has not responded. All the above are reasonable and proportionate requests to assist in the resolving of this case.

    Withholding any relevant photos of the car, particularly the signage terms, despite being asked for by the Defendant at the outset, is against the SRA code as well as contrary to the ‘overriding objective’ in the pre action protocol.
    As Gladstones are a firm of solicitors whose Directors also run the IPC Trade Body and deal with private parking issues every single day of the week there can be no excuse for these omissions, all parties must disclose all key documents relevant to the issues in dispute.

    The Defendant asks that the court orders Further and Better Particulars of Claim and asks leave to amend the Defence.

    (5) No offer of an independent ADR.
    Following an unsuccessful appeal to the Claimant, The Defendant researched the matter online and discovered that the Claimant is a member of the Independent Parking Committee (IPC), an organisation which in fact is run by the same two Directors who also run Gladstones Solicitors. They also operate the Independent Appeals Service (IAS), which claims to be an independent body that is appointed by the Claimant’s Trade Body, the IPC. The independence of this body has however been questioned as the Parking Review reported in 2016; only 20% of all appeals were upheld. The most recent lead adjudicator of POPLA, Henry Michael Greenslade in his 2015 annual report stated that ‘As the IAS does not allow motorists to see and comment on the operators entire evidence, it is by Mr Greenslade's definition an unfair service.’ As a result it appears that and any appeal was likely to have been doomed to failure.


    Research has also revealed that the IAS, far from being independent, is a subsidiary of the IPC, which in turn is owned and run by the same two Directors who also run Gladstones Solicitors. The individuals in question are John Davies, and William Hurley. This set-up is incapable of providing any fair means for motorists to challenge parking charges, as well as potentially breaching the SRA Code of Conduct. This claimant's Solicitors appear to pay little regard to the 'overriding objective' within pre-court protocols, issuing incoherent copy & paste claims with no due diligence.


    (6).
    Link Parking are not the lawful occupier of the land. I have the reasonable belief that they do not have the authority to issue charges on this land in their own name and that they have no rights to bring this case.
    a) The Claimant is not the landowner and is merely an agent acting on behalf of the landowner and has failed to demonstrate their legal standing to form a contract.
    b) The claimant is not the landowner and suffers no loss whatsoever as a result of a vehicle parking at the location in question
    c) The Claimant is put to proof that it has sufficient interest in the land or that there are specific terms in its contract to bring an action on its own behalf. As a third party agent, the Claimant may not pursue any charge. I have the reasonable belief that they do not have the authority to issue charges on this land in their own name and that they have no right to bring action regarding this claim.
    d) The name Link Parking is not on the entrance sign or the sign detailing all the terms and conditions next to the payment machine.

    (7)
    a) The Claimant has at no time provided an explanation how the sum has been calculated, the conduct that gave rise to it or how the amount has climbed from £100 as per the NTK issued on xxx to £160 on the next correspondence which was the non compliant Letter Before Claim dated xxx This appears to be an added cost with no apparently no qualification and an attempt at double recovery, which the POFA Schedule 4 specifically disallows.
    b) The Protection of Freedom Act Para 4(5) states that the maximum sum that may be recovered from the keeper is the charge stated on the Notice to Keeper.

    (8)
    (a)No figure for additional charges was 'agreed' nor could it have formed part of the alleged 'contract' because no such indemnity costs were quantified on the signs.
    Terms cannot be bolted on later with figures plucked out of thin air, as if they were
    incorporated into the small print when they were not.
    b) The Defendant also disputes that the Claimant has incurred £50 solicitor costs.
    c) The Defendant has the reasonable belief that the Claimant has not incurred £50 costs to pursue an alleged £100 debt.
    d) Notwithstanding the Defendant's belief, the costs are in any case not recoverable.
    e) The Claimant described the charge of £50.00 "legal fees" not "contractual costs".
    CPR 27.14 does not permit these to be recovered in the Small Claims Court.


    (9)
    The signage was inadequate to form a contract with the motorist
    a) The signage on this site is inadequate to form a contract, and breaches the IPC code of conduct on a number of factors.
    b) The entry signs do not offer any contractual information – Simply Park, a large ‘P’ the name of the location Tremains Court and the 2 payment bands – 2 hours £2 All day £3. There is no reference to any other signs or terms and conditions.
    c) The sign which is next to the payment machine, is also inadequate to form a contract, mainly as there is no indication as to who the contract is being entered with only that it is managed on behalf of the owner. Schedule 1 – IPC – Code of Practice The sign must identify you as the ‘creditor’ The name at the top of the sign is again Simply Park and the telephone number is answered by someone stating they are from Simply Park.
    e) I am sure the Claimant will point out that the 16th line does state ‘failure to comply will result in an excess charge of £100, this is within the second paragraph and below the instruction to ‘Please check ticket is correct following issue. Overpayment is accepted but no changed issued.’ Which implies that failure to comply with this and you agreeing to pay the higher fee. There is no mention of failure to comply with all terms and conditions.
    (f) At the time of the alleged incident, I witnessed no other signs, although have since returned to the site to examine the area for the case and have evidence of smaller prohibitive signs, with different wording, and amendments made to them via stickers placed on a neighbouring boundary walls, which are not obvious to the customer, displayed over 9 feet off the ground (110 inches) and the font is below the required sizing. The penalty charge is in a font measuring 3/8th of an inch. Industry standard signs recommend a minimum height of 3 inches in a bold font to have any readable impact at 30 feet. There is also a new addition to the sign giving the option to pay on line – yet the original sign still states ‘Payment is cash only’
    (g)In the absence of ‘adequate notice’ of the terms and the charge (which must be in large prominent letters such as the brief, clear and multiple signs in the Beavis case) this fails to meet the requirements of Schedule 4 of the POFA.
    (h)There is evidence within the car park of signs that have not been well maintained and accounted for, nor is the unreliable machine which is approximately 25 minutes out of time. This misleads users of the carpark and is indicative of a less than fair and transparent business practice.

    (10)
    The driver did not enter into any 'agreement on the charge', no consideration flowed between the parties and no contract was established.

    (a) The Defendant denies they would have agreed to pay the original demand of £100 to agree to the alleged contract had the terms and conditions of the contract been properly displayed and accessible.

    (11) If it is believed that a contract was formed that there is a clear argument for frustration of contract.
    (a)A ticket was paid for and displayed so all details could be seen, the defendant even checked the ticket before leaving the vehicle, evidence via a witness testimony can be provided by another user of the car park. There is no knowledge as to when or how the ticket was dislodged and ended face down on the dash board. The ticket gave the defendant a license to park for the day. The ticket is also marked with a reference number on the rear of the ticket which is included within the evidence. I have since been made aware the reference numbers are sequenced and can evidence this further, so whilst it might have taken the officer a few extra minutes to check the reference number it would have demonstrated that at the time of the PCN issued the ticket was valid.
    (b) The Fluttering Ticket, there have been a number of cases involving ‘the fluttering ticket’ and I include the views of Council Adjudicators regarding the well-known issue of 'flimsy fluttering tickets' in my defence, because the Supreme Court (and the Court of Appeal Judges) in Beavis were happy to draw similarities with Council PCNs:
    http://www.manchester.gov.uk/egov_download...Report_2006.pdf
    ‘In DB05057D the adjudicator said: “…having seen the original ticket I note that it is made of rather thin paper which is likely to be dislodged when a car door is shut. It may be that the Council would argue that it is the driver's responsibility to ensure that the ticket is on display when the vehicle is left, but on the other hand if it chooses to issue pay and display tickets made of such thin paper it must expect that now and again this type of situation will arise.”
    In HV05040D the adjudicator accepted the appellant’s evidence that she had displayed the ticket on the dash and checked after closing the door that it was still there. He said: “I am not aware of any signs in the car park suggesting the use of adhesives by motorists when parking their cars."
    (c) More recently a similar case involving a car park on the same road as this incident and also ‘managed’ by Link Parking C8GF30W7 Link Parking v Mr H. 14/11/2016 Port Talbot
    Mr H parked and purchased a valid ticket which he displayed on the dashboard. When he returned to his car he found a parking charge because at some time the ticket had turned upside down. This was the second hearing. The first was adjourned.
    The judge dismissed the claim. He ruled that it was the responsibility of the parking company to provide sticky backed tickets and that he had already thrown out 6-10 of these type of cases which Link Parking had brought.

    (d)Through research it has become apparent that Link Parking have a number of fluttering ticket cases, many for within the same area, it is part of the IPC code of conduct that Predatory tactics must not be used, knowingly issuing tickets which are not fit for purpose would be considered a predatory tactic.

    (12). The Defendant would like to point out that this car park can be fully distinguished from the details, facts, and location in the Beavis case. This site does not offer a free parking licence, nor is there any comparable 'legitimate interest' nor complex contractual arrangement to disengage the penalty rule, as ParkingEye did in the unique case heard by the Supreme Court in 2015. Whilst the Claimant withheld any photos of the signs on site, the Defendant contends these are no contractual and breach the IPC code of conduct with terms hidden in small print, unlike the 'clear and prominent' signs which created a contract Mr Beavis was 'bound to have seen'.


    The defendant therefore asks that the court orders the case to be struck out for want of a detailed course of action and/or for the claim as having no prospect of success.


    I believe the facts stated in this defence are true.
  • Coupon-mad
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    It's obviously over the 122 to submit on line.

    We don't recommend online defence on MCOL anyway. You need it set out 1.5 line spaced in Times New Roman, with headings set out nice and clearly as per the examples in post #2 of the NEWBIES thread and attach it as a PDF to an email with the claim number and 'defence' in the subject line.

    Your defence looks like it covers the bases and I would get that submitted and prepare for the next stages (DQ N180 form, then later your Witness Statement and evidence for a hearing).

    This is worth the fight, as all the winners here will tell you. :)
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  • Gemwill
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    Thank you.
    I started the AOS on line but just wanted to check if i need to do anything there to say it's gone via email? I know I'm probably over thinking that part.
    Started reading prepping for next stage - slightly obsessive ha ha ��
  • Coupon-mad
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    No you don't have to update MCOL. It will update though.
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  • Gemwill
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    Hi, got my court date for October at my local court. It's asking for my WT and all docs by July 5th. From reading other posts I thought this was due a few weeks before court not 3 months before?
    Do I need to send hard copies or can I email it all.?
    I did try searching first ��
    Thank you
  • Coupon-mad
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    Not always a few weeks before. Some Court Judges like the WS & evidence filed earlier. The Directions are how that Judge/that Court likes the process to be done, under their preferred deadlines.
    Do I need to send hard copies or can I email it all.?

    Email to the claimant, and copy yourself in as proof of emailing them. But definitely hard copies in a file, like a cheap ring binder or document wallet, for your Court Judge. All nice and well-arranged, with a contents page and evidence/page numbering to make it easy for the Judge to find your evidence.

    This is explained in the NEWBIES thread post #3, with examples of WS and skeleton arguments.
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  • Gemwill
    Gemwill Posts: 32 Forumite
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    Thank you, it just threw me with the timings. Will get on it this week
    Thank you
  • Gemwill
    Gemwill Posts: 32 Forumite
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    Just about to send off my WT tomorrow and received theirs
    He has stated that I didn't appeal (I did and I provided a serviceable address as driver)
    Why would he say I haven't in his statement when it's obvious I have proof?
    I will add link for their WT apologies for blank pages tried to remove personal details.
    I so hope the judge see this is a genuine case
    https://www.dropbox.com/s/uvy885rgv9ufr0a/wt1.pdf?dl=0
  • Gemwill
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    Cheeky quick bump x
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