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DCBL legal court claim pack

Hello everyone, 

firstly I am posting for my own records and to also ask some guidance with my first court claim. 

I have read the sticky thread and will refer to the defence template but ask for some advice on any customisation that should be done - I am slightly autistic and any guidance will make me feel more comfortable in this challenge. 

The PCN arrived by post around 8 months before claim arrived - driver had paid for a set time in the evening, displayed the ticket clearly and returned after the paid period unknowingly, no illuminated signs etc and just paid out of respect. 

The PCN arrived with pictures from a camera and the driver cannot remember whether or not the registration was entered or not. Possibly 30-40 minutes later than paid for/left around 10:30pm ish and is a very small 20 bay car park. 

Is there any suggested way to defend this, the driver did not plan to overstay. 

No longer own the vehicle and all letters regarding these PCN where left in the vehicle when selling it accidentally so not much to refer to. 

Any advice is greatly appreciated, or is it as simple as a direct copy paste of the defence template? 

I have around 8 days for to respond. 

Please let me know if you wish to see the claim form and what to include/grey out.

thank you very much
puggles99

Comments

  • Nellymoser
    Nellymoser Posts: 1,318 Forumite
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    Post the Claim form after covering
    • Your name and address
    • Car reg (shown in the Particular of Claim)
    • Claim No
    • Password (shown in Important Note)

    Did you do the AOS?
  • Puggles99
    Puggles99 Posts: 7 Forumite
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    edited 30 April at 10:11AM
    Post the Claim form after covering
    • Your name and address
    • Car reg (shown in the Particular of Claim)
    • Claim No
    • Password (shown in Important Note)

    Did you do the AOS?
    Hi Nellymoser, 

    thank you for your reply, I have attached the claim form for you.

    AOS is being posted out today
  • Gr1pr
    Gr1pr Posts: 6,677 Forumite
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    edited 30 April at 10:21AM
    Do not post the AOS,  if possible login to MCOL after 5pm today and complete it online,  for free 

    Use the defence template,  which is mainly copy it, adapt paragraphs 2 & 3 to suit Your own case 

    Once complete,  all of the template is used,  saved as a pdf document 

    Attach the completed pdf document to an email,  with the claim reference etc, sending it to the claim responses email address as shown in the defence template thread and in the newbies sticky thread post 2

    You do not have to use any paperwork 
  • Puggles99
    Puggles99 Posts: 7 Forumite
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    Gr1pr said:
    Do not post the AOS,  if possible login to MCOL after 5pm today and complete it online,  for free 

    Use the defence template,  which is mainly copy it, adapt paragraphs 2 & 3 to suit Your own case 

    Once complete,  all of the template is used,  saved as a pdf document 

    Attach the completed pdf document to an email,  with the claim reference etc, sending it to the claim responses email address as shown in the defence template thread and in the newbies sticky thread post 2

    You do not have to use any paperwork 
    Thank you for such clear advice. 

    So just to confirm, I have created MCOL and to file AOS after 5PM, and use template and adapt to my needs. 

    Could you give me some guidance on a rough idea of what I should/should not put given my situation?

    Thank you again!
  • Gr1pr
    Gr1pr Posts: 6,677 Forumite
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    edited 30 April at 10:47AM
    Correct 

    In paragraph 2 , add a suitable ending to the paragraph,  so if you were the driver,  add and driver 

    In paragraph 3, study other recent dcb legal court claim threads from this month only  ( April  2025  )  and look at what their paragraph 3 states, especially if coupon mad approved it , so you may be copying it,  or may be changing the date,  or may be removing a small part of it 

    You may decide to write a short concise paragraph 3.1 as well,  based on the circumstances on the date in question,  or not, that may come from somebody else suggesting it 

    My point being that most of what you need is already written,  so very few changes,  but to be sure, when you have adapted your 2 or 3 paragraphs, copy and paste below,  for checking by us

    Once approved,  replace the paragraphs 2 & 3 in the template with your approved paragraphs,  the rest is unchanged 

    You will be adding your details and claim reference number to the start of your draft,  before saving as a pdf and attaching it to your email submission 
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 148,095 Forumite
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    Puggles99 said:
    Gr1pr said:
    Do not post the AOS,  if possible login to MCOL after 5pm today and complete it online,  for free 

    Use the defence template,  which is mainly copy it, adapt paragraphs 2 & 3 to suit Your own case 

    Once complete,  all of the template is used,  saved as a pdf document 

    Attach the completed pdf document to an email,  with the claim reference etc, sending it to the claim responses email address as shown in the defence template thread and in the newbies sticky thread post 2

    You do not have to use any paperwork 
    Thank you for such clear advice. 

    So just to confirm, I have created MCOL and to file AOS after 5PM, and use template and adapt to my needs. 

    Could you give me some guidance on a rough idea of what I should/should not put given my situation?

    Thank you again!
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