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Dear Sir/Madam,
As the registered keeper of the below vehicle, I wish to appeal parking charge issued against it. I would like to have the parking charge notice cancelled based on the following grounds:
POPLA Ref:
UKPC Ref Number:
VRN:
1. Insufficient evidence of the alleged contravention - No evidence that the driver ‘left the site’
2. No site boundary defined.
3. Non-Compliant Signage
4. Lack of standing / authority from landowner
1. No evidence that the driver ‘left the site’.
The notice to keeper states that the reason for issuing the charge notice
is: “Driver left site designated for customer parking only.”
No evidence has been provided from UKPC showing the vehicle driver leaving the
site and I require UKPC to provide this. Such evidence should include
photographs of the contravention and a site map and a picture of the signage
that would have communicated to the driver the defined boundary of the site
they are alleged to have left.The burden of proof shifts to UKPC to prove otherwise
and to explain why their attendant (presumably):
1.Watched a driver or occupant walk towards the edge of an undefined boundary,
2. Did not attempt to stop/warn the driver nor even ascertain if a passenger had already been dropped at the door of the premises.
The attendant also had a legal duty under contract law, to mitigate any
loss. In VCS v Ibbotson, Case No 1SE09849 16.5.2012 District Judge McIlwaine
stated:
‘you say he left the premises...where does the premises start and where does
the premises finish?....there is a duty to mitigate the loss.’
In this case now under POPLA appeaI, contend that UKPC have neither demonstrated any evidence that there was a breach nor shown that their operative took any steps to mitigate any loss.
2. No site boundary defined.
Nowhere on the signage does it state:
- What the site boundary is.
- Show any map of where site boundary begins and ends.
No explanation has been provided as to what constitutes “leaving the site” and it has not been established whether the driver was on site all along. The only evidence provided are pictures of the car parked within a parking bay.
If no such sign or evidence exist, then I contend that the driver could not have known where the car park site boundary began and ended and in the absence of proof, I deny that there was any contravention. As a result, there was no contract formed with the driver to pay a charge in exchange for going off site; there was no consideration, offer or acceptance and no site boundary defined.
Even if a sign says a charge can be issued for 'leaving the site', this means nothing if 'the site' is not defined. This could include any number of shops, a cash point, toilets, cafe, drop-off areas, delivery area, the car park itself, rest area/benches and any other section of a retail park.
3.The signage was not compliant so there was no valid contract formed between UKPC and the driver.
Due to their high position, overall small size and the barely legible size of the small print, the signs in this car park are very hard to read and understand. I request that POPLA check the Operator's evidence and signage map/photos on this point and compare the signs to the BPA Code of Practice requirements. I contend that the signs on this land, in terms of wording, position and clarity, do not comply and fail to properly warn/inform the driver of the terms and any consequences for breach, as in the case of Excel Parking Services Ltd v Martin Cutts, 2011 and Waltham Forest v Vine [CCRTF 98/1290/B2])
As such, the signs were not so prominent with their terms and conditions that they 'must' have been seen by the driver - who would never have agreed to pay £100 in a free car park in the event that they left the site- and therefore I contend the elements of a contract were conspicuous by their absence. The signage is not a contract or offer of a contract but an invitation to treat.
Section 18 of the British Parking Association
(BPA) Code of Practice requires operators to fully comply with the following on
entrance signage:
18.2 Entrance signs play an important part in establishing a parking contract
and deterring trespassers. Therefore,
as well as the signs you must have telling drivers about the terms and
conditions for parking, you must also have a standard form of entrance sign at
the entrance to the parking area. Entrance signs must tell drivers that the car
park is managed and that there are terms and conditions they must be aware of.
Entrance signs must follow some minimum general principles and be in a standard
format. The size of the sign must take into account the expected speed of
vehicles approaching the car park, and it is recommended that you follow
Department for Transport guidance on this. See Appendix B for an example of an
entrance sign and more information about their use.
18.3 Specific parking-terms signage tells drivers what your terms and
conditions are, including your parking charges. You must place signs containing
the specific parking terms throughout the site, so that drivers are given the
chance to read them at the time of parking or leaving their vehicle. Signs must
be conspicuous and legible, and written in intelligible language, so that they
are easy to see, read and understand. Signs showing your detailed terms and
conditions must be at least 450mm x 450mm.
If a driver can't read the sum of the parking charge (£100) before parking -
because the font is too small/the sign unremarkable and too high to read from a
driver's seat - then they cannot have agreed to it. Also, a keeper appellant
cannot be bound by inadequate notice of the charge either (POFA Schedule 4
requires 'adequate notice' of the sum of the parking charge, not just vague
illegible small print, however near the car).
So, for this appeal, I put this operator to strict proof of where the car was parked and (from photos taken in the same lighting conditions) how their signs appeared on that date, at that time, from the angle of the driver's perspective. Equally, I require this operator to show how the entrance signs appear from a driver's seat, not stock examples of 'the sign' in isolation/close-up. I submit that full terms simply cannot be read from a car before parking and mere 'stock examples' of close-ups of the (alleged) signage terms will not be sufficient to disprove this.
4. No Landowner Authority - the operator is put to strict proof of full compliance with the BPA Code of Practice.
As this operator does not have proprietary interest in the land, then I require that they produce an unredacted copy of the contract with the landowner.
The contract and any 'site agreement' or 'User Manual' setting out details - such as any 'genuine customer' or 'genuine resident' exemptions or any site occupier's 'right of veto' charge cancellation rights, and of course all enforcement dates/times/days, and the boundary of the site - is vital evidence to define what this operator is authorised to do, and when/where.
It cannot be assumed, just because an agent is contracted to merely put some signs up and issue Parking Charge Notices, that the agent is authorised on the material date, to make contracts with all or any category of visiting drivers and/or to enforce the charge in court in their own name (legal action regarding land use disputes generally being a matter for a landowner only).
Witness statements are not sound evidence of the above, often being pre-signed, generic documents not even identifying the case in hand or even the site rules. A witness statement might in some cases be accepted by POPLA, but in this case, I suggest it is unlikely to sufficiently evidence the definition of the services provided by each party to the agreement.
Nor would it define vital information such as charging days/times, any exemption clauses, grace periods (which I believe may be longer than the bare minimum times set out in the BPA CoP) and basic but crucial information such as the site boundary and any bays where enforcement applies/does not apply. Not forgetting evidence of the only restrictions which the landowner has authorised can give rise to a charge, as well as the date that the parking contract began, and when it runs to, or whether it runs in perpetuity, and of course, who the signatories are: name/job title/employer company, and whether they are authorised by the landowner to sign a binding legal agreement.
Paragraph 7 of the BPA CoP defines the mandatory requirements and I put this operator to strict proof of full compliance:
Section 7.1 states:
“If you do not own the land on which you are carrying out parking
management, you must have the written authorisation of the landowner (or their
appointed agent). The written confirmation must be given before you can start
operating on the land in question and give you the authority to carry out all
the aspects of car park management for the site that you are responsible for.
In particular, it must say that the landowner (or their appointed agent)
requires you to keep to the Code of Practice and that you have the authority to
pursue outstanding parking charges.”
Section 7.2 states:
“If the operator wishes to take legal action on any outstanding parking charges, they must ensure that they have the written authority of the landowner (or their appointed agent) prior to legal action being taken.”
Section 7.3 states:
“The written authorisation must also set out:
a. the definition of the land on which you may operate, so that the boundaries of the land can be clearly defined.
b. any conditions or restrictions on parking control and enforcement operations, including any restrictions on hours of operation.
c. any conditions or restrictions on the types of vehicles that may, or may not, be subject to parking control and enforcement.
d. who has the responsibility for putting up and maintaining signs.
e. the definition of the services provided by each party to the agreement”.
I put UKPC to strict proof of compliance with all of the above requirements.
This is vital; I contend that the contract - if this operator produces one -
does not reflect the signage and if only a basic agreement or 'witness
statement' is produced, then this will fail to demonstrate compliance with 7.3
(in particular, point b and d, above).
Some parking companies have provided "witness statements" instead of
the relevant contract. There is no proof whatsoever that the alleged signatory
has ever seen the relevant contract, or, indeed is even an employee of the
landowner. Nor would a witness statement show whether there is a payment made
from either party within the agreement/contract which would affect any 'loss'
calculations. Nor would it show whether the contract includes the necessary
authority, required by the BPA CoP, to specifically allow UKPC to pursue these
charges in their own name as creditor in the Courts, and to grant them the
standing/assignment of title to make contracts with drivers.
In POPLA case reference 1771073004, POPLA ruled that a witness statement was
'not valid evidence'. This witness statement concerned evidence which could
have been produced but was not. So, if the operator produces a witness
statement mentioning the contract but does not produce the actual
un-redacted contract document, then POPLA should be consistent and rule any
such statement invalid.
This would destroy any attempt by this operator to argue there is a
Beavis-case-style 'legitimate interest' backed by any commercial justification
and wishes of the landowner to sue customers setting foot beyond the boundary
of a car park.
I require UKPC to provide a full copy of the contemporaneous, signed & dated contract with the landowner showing evidence to meet 7.3 of the CoP. In order to comply, a non-landowner private parking company must have a specifically worded contract with the landowner, not merely a 'standard business agreement'; with a non-landholder managing agent which is true of any such business model. This cannot impact upon, nor create a contract with, any driver, as was found in case no. 3JD00517 Parking Eye v Clarke 19th December 2013.
Taking all the above into account, I respectfully request that this parking charge notice appeal be allowed and await your decision.Comments
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It is refreshing to see a first time poster who has read and followed the information in the NEWBIES before starting a thread. Well done! It makes the job of the regulars so much easier.
Attach the night time photos to your appeal. (Embed them, don't use links. That way the assessor is forced to see them.) Don't include the daytime images.
You could add if you wish at para 2 before the word "Nowhere" that the keeper revisited the site in daylight You wouldn't want a PoPLA assessor assuming the keeper was the driver and could see the signs, otherwise they couldn't have known what was on them.
I admit, it's gilding the Lilly, but not that long ago PoPLA assessors and senior assessors were having trouble counting to 14. Don't give them the slightest chance of rejecting it, although it is already an excellent appeal and I fully expect UKPC will chicken out and withdraw rather than pay PoPLA.
I married my cousin. I had to...I don't have a sister.All my screwdrivers are cordless."You're Safety Is My Primary Concern Dear" - Laks3 -
Fruitcake said:It is refreshing to see a first time poster who has read and followed the information in the NEWBIES before starting a thread. Well done! It makes the job of the regulars so much easier.
Attach the night time photos to your appeal. (Embed them, don't use links. That way the assessor is forced to see them.) Don't include the daytime images.
You could add if you wish at para 2 before the word "Nowhere" that the keeper revisited the site in daylight You wouldn't want a PoPLA assessor assuming the keeper was the driver and could see the signs, otherwise they couldn't have known what was on them.
I admit, it's gilding the Lilly, but not that long ago PoPLA assessors and senior assessors were having trouble counting to 14. Don't give them the slightest chance of rejecting it, although it is already an excellent appeal and I fully expect UKPC will chicken out and withdraw rather than pay PoPLA.
I will make the adjustments before I send it
Have a good weekend0 -
A heads-up - you should be using/quoting BPA CoP version 8 dated January 2020 - sign para numbers are 19 (not 18). Not important for a POPLA doc but more important if a court claim involved.4
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I’ve had 2 PCNs cancelled at Stevenage Retail Park which were both issued for leaving the site.
i wrote angry emails to the park manager who got them cancelled for me. I presume you didn’t try this.4 -
FingersLily said:I’ve had 2 PCNs cancelled at Stevenage Retail Park which were both issued for leaving the site.
i wrote angry emails to the park manager who got them cancelled for me. I presume you didn’t try this.
The photos show a yellow sticker on the windscreen but that was 100% not there when I returned to my car and there is no sign of residue of it being stuck on the screen! First photo taken at 17:45 - last photo 17:59
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TLaw12 said:FingersLily said:I’ve had 2 PCNs cancelled at Stevenage Retail Park which were both issued for leaving the site.
i wrote angry emails to the park manager who got them cancelled for me. I presume you didn’t try this.
The photos show a yellow sticker on the windscreen but that was 100% not there when I returned to my car and there is no sign of residue of it being stuck on the screen! First photo taken at 17:45 - last photo 17:59
I married my cousin. I had to...I don't have a sister.All my screwdrivers are cordless."You're Safety Is My Primary Concern Dear" - Laks1 -
The photos show a yellow sticker on the windscreen but that was 100% not there when I returned to my car and there is no sign of residue of it being stuck on the screen! First photo taken at 17:45 - last photo 17:59Google 'ghost ticketing'. There's no surprise that dodgy practices are in play where UKPC are concerned.
https://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/parking-company-workers-doctored-photos-6420974
Please note, we are not a legal advice forum. I personally don't get involved in critiquing court case Defences/Witness Statements, so unable to help on that front. Please don't ask. .
I provide only my personal opinion, it is not a legal opinion, it is simply a personal one. I am not a lawyer.
Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; show him how to catch fish, and you feed him for a lifetime.Private Parking Firms - Killing the High Street2 -
@Fruitcake - thanks, I will. Just wanted the email address that @FingersLily used for the Leisure Park Management as it’s not on their website.0
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FingersLily said:I’ve had 2 PCNs cancelled at Stevenage Retail Park which were both issued for leaving the site.
i wrote angry emails to the park manager who got them cancelled for me. I presume you didn’t try this.
I emailed the leisure park and they just replied to speak to UKPC, I also emailed the land agent and they didn't respond at all
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Bobthethird said:FingersLily said:I’ve had 2 PCNs cancelled at Stevenage Retail Park which were both issued for leaving the site.
i wrote angry emails to the park manager who got them cancelled for me. I presume you didn’t try this.
I emailed the leisure park and they just replied to speak to UKPC, I also emailed the land agent and they didn't respond at all
Tell them that in any court action you will involve them as a witness2
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