creating a defence

fairsquare

B789 said:

Also, we only need to see the paragraphs that you have added or changed. No need to publish reams of info that is unchanged,

This was John's original paragraph 3

3. The Driver was a patron at B&M store within the retail park and did shopping there. As the driver was a genuine customer and remained on site throughout their visit.  

And I changed it to :

3. The Driver was a member of a gym here. This gym is part of a larger chain with sites all over the UK and in this particular site there were parking rules . However these rules were not made clear to the driver  at the  the time.

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No other paragraphs have been added , deleted or edited 

KeithP

fairsquare said:

Now can  I send the text of the defence as it us or does it need to be in pdf format ?

It needs to be a signed pdf.
Didn't you get that from the checklist in the opening post of the NEWBIES thread?

That said, I think the paragraph 3 that you have shown us requires some more work before it is ready to file.

Trainerman

@KeithP beat me to it, but for emphasis 1) add your text to the template. 2) ensure paragraph numbering is correct 3) sign 4) convert to pdf 5) email during business hours 6) Ensure you get emailed receipt of defence

B789

fairsquare said:
3. The Driver was a member of a gym here. This gym is part of a larger chain with sites all over the UK and in this particular site there were parking rules . However these rules were not made clear to the driver  at the  the time.

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No other paragraphs have been added , deleted or edited 

There are literally hundreds of UKPC defences on the forum that you can have a look at and select which bits are applicable to your claim. Just use the search function.

fairsquare

KeithP said:

fairsquare said:

Now can  I send the text of the defence as it us or does it need to be in pdf format ?

It needs to be a signed pdf.
Didn't you get that from the checklist in the opening post of the NEWBIES thread?

That said, I think the paragraph 3 that you have shown us requires some more work before it is ready to file.

Ok

I will get it printed / signed / scanned .

But before that paragraph 3 needs changing like you said . EVERYTHING else in the defence is fine and I'm not posting it here because it's way too long . 

fairsquare

Defence was sent on time . 

DcB legal have today informed me they will proceed with the claim . Should I be worried?

Boat_to_Bolivia

Nope, standard stuff.

KeithP

fairsquare said:

DcB legal have today informed me they will proceed with the claim . Should I be worried?

You were expecting that, weren't you?

Item 7 on that checklist you were following says...

fairsquare

I'm sorry guys .. I really tried hard to find the email to send a copy of the n180 form to . can someone please help . 

Coupon-mad

Yes it's in the Template Defence sticky.