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Draft for defence against Parallel Parking ltd (& gladstones solicitors)-please check!

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  • Fruitcake
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    edited 15 November 2022 at 5:08PM
    The new CoP has been temporarily withdrawn for a judicial review into parking charge amounts, so your WS looks to be out of date from about para 11 onwards.

    Most recent example of WS for style and format is that written by @aphex007
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  • Fruitcake said:
    The new CoP has been temporarily withdrawn for a judicial review into parking charge amounts, so your WS looks to be out of date from about para 11 onwards.

    Most recent example of WS for style and format is that written by @aphex007
    I have used the new format written by @aphex007 so it should be in date i reckon. Can you let me know which bits look out of date?
    thanks
  • Grizebeck
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    edited 15 November 2022 at 5:18PM
    I dont think this WS reads well.
  • Fruitcake
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    edited 15 November 2022 at 5:22PM
    13 The DHLUC's CoP is not yet a statutory instrument.
    14 The fake add on costs are not yet banned.
    19 The new code has not yet been enacted
    20 - 23 are missing
    27 The DHLUC has not yet banned additional costs.

    However, the government's intent to introduce a mandatory CoP and ban fake add-ons hasn't changed, and the Deputy Secretary of State's comment that these charges are an attempt at extortion are still valid.
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  • Umkomaas
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    Please note, we are not a legal advice forum. I personally don't get involved in critiquing court case Defences/Witness Statements, so unable to help on that front. Please don't ask. .

    I provide only my personal opinion, it is not a legal opinion, it is simply a personal one. I am not a lawyer.

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  • Grizebeck said:
    I dont think this WS reads well.
    Can you please elaborate and advise how I can improve on this? thanks
  • Umkomaas said:
    3 x para 5s
    Jump from 19 to 24
    Umkomaas said:
    3 x para 5s
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    Thanks yeh i noticed il sort that out now. any other feedback?
  • Coupon-mad
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    I don't recognise that as being based on the final WS bundle by @aphex007 including at the start.
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  • I don't recognise that as being based on the final WS bundle by @aphex007 including at the start.
    I have used the info from aphex as much as I could. But aphex has used signage as the argument, whereas I’m using not driver and n keeper liability as my argument so I’m thinking I can’t use everything aphex has mentioned. 

    Let me know how my witness statement is please?  
  • 1505grandad
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    An observation:-

    Check the spelling is correct  of the "Lamoureux" case.

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