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Wright Hassall CEL (Letter of Claim) HELP!
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Hello friends,
Do I need to reply to this?!
(unable to post links but I've uploaded it to dropbox - dropbox.com/s/g1dulew0eketbc9/CEL%20letter%20of%205%20Jan%202018.jpg?dl=0 )
Any guidance on whether I need to start prepping defence would be helpful, not looking forward to doing this at all but I've read MANY recent posts on here and I refuse to be an annoying "pls spoon feed me" newbie.
If there's any links that you think may be of use at this stage in my process, please do point me in the right direction - appreciate you guys will see plenty of repetitive messages on here and I'll do my best to learn all I can from previous threads and keep my posts minimal.
Many thanks0 -
Do I need to reply to this?!
No but file it.This is a system account and does not represent a real person. To contact the Forum Team email forumteam@moneysavingexpert.com0 -
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IamEmanresu’s advice is good.Please note, we are not a legal advice forum. I personally don't get involved in critiquing court case Defences/Witness Statements, so unable to help on that front. Please don't ask. .
I provide only my personal opinion, it is not a legal opinion, it is simply a personal one. I am not a lawyer.
Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; show him how to catch fish, and you feed him for a lifetime.Private Parking Firms - Killing the High Street0 -
HELLO,
Guess who has just received a Claim form...
I've read multiple threads now and am a bit lost on next steps - clearly I need to respond to this one!
Firstly, do I have a leg to stand on here....
- Never received the initial PCN from CEL which claims to have been submitted end of 2016... My first ever correspondence came over 2 months later as a "final reminder before legal action" from CEL with a ridiculous £100 fee... I never even had an option to pay the original PCN, even if I had been in the wrong!?
- I did email them back then and have proof of this requesting to see the original PCN and evidence of the incident, they never responded.
- I have since received letters from ZZPS (all ignored), Wright Hassall etc...
- The "incident" occurred on a Bank Holiday... though the sign in smallprint (having revisited the site) shows parking needs to paid all year round - should this be mentioned in defence?
we do not actually know who was driving at the time
- PCN has been sent to the RK
-ANPR technology used, no pictures have been sent to me to prove this of my vehicle/driver however
Would it be sensible to dispute the entirety of this claim? I'm concerned about a CCJ, however the principle of paying what is now £300+ to these clowns is disgusting.
Please advise on submitting an appropriate defence?
I have information overload from the number of threads I've read and each case is somewhat unique in itself, this is the only reason I'm asking.
Would something like the below be sufficient / applicable to my case?
In the County Court Business Centre
Between:
Civil Enforcement Limited
V
XXXXXXXXXXX
Claim Number: XXXXXXXX
I, XXXXXXXXXXXXX, deny I am liable to the Claimant for the entirety of the claim for each of the following reasons:
The Claim Form issued on X/XX/2018 by Civil Enforcement Limited was not correctly filed under The Practice Direction as it was not signed by a legal person but signed by !!!8220;Civil Enforcement Limited!!!8221;.
This Claimant has not complied with pre-court protocol (as outlined in the new Pre Action Protocol for Debt Claims, 1 October 2017). As an example as to why this prevents a full defence being filed at this time, a parking charge can be for trespass, breach of contract or a contractual charge. All these are treated differently in law and require a different defence. The wording of any contract will naturally be a key element in this matter, and a copy of the alleged contract has never been provided to the Defendant.
There was no compliant !!!8216;Letter before County Court Claim!!!8217;, under the Practice Direction.
This is a speculative serial litigant, issuing a large number of identical 'draft particulars'. The badly mail-merged documents contain very little information.
The Schedule of information is sparse of detailed information.
The Claim Form Particulars were extremely sparse and divulged no cause of action nor sufficient detail. The Defendant has no idea what the claim is about - why the charge arose, what the alleged contract was; nothing that could be considered a fair exchange of information.
The Claim Form Particulars did not contain any evidence of contravention or photographs. These documents, and the !!!8216;Letter before County Court Claim!!!8217; should have been produced, pursuant to paragraph 6 of the Practice Direction !!!8211; Pre Action Conduct. This constitutes a deliberate attempt to thwart any efforts to defend the claim or to !!!8220;take stock!!!8221;, pursuant to paragraph 12 of the Practice Direction. Again, this totally contradicts the guidance outlined in the new Pre-Action Protocol for Debt Claims (2017), the aims of which are:
!!!8216;early engagement and communication between the parties, including early exchange of sufficient information about the matter to help clarify whether there are any issues in dispute
enable the parties to resolve the matter without the need to start court proceedings, including agreeing a reasonable repayment plan or considering using an Alternative Dispute Resolution (ADR) procedure
encourage the parties to act in a reasonable and proportionate manner in all dealings with one another (for example, avoiding running up costs which do not bear a reasonable relationship to the sums in issue) and
support the efficient management of proceedings that cannot be avoided.!!!8217;
The Defence therefore asks the Court to strike out the claim as disclosing no cause of action and having no reasonable prospect of success as currently drafted.
Alternatively, the Defendant asks that the Claimant is required to file Particulars which comply with Practice Directions and include at least the following information;
Whether the matter is being brought for trespass, breach of contract or a contractual charge, and an explanation as to the exact nature of the charge
A copy of any contract it is alleged was in place (e.g. copies of signage)
How any contract was concluded (if by performance, then copies of signage maps in place at the time)
Whether keeper liability is being claimed, and if so copies of any Notice to Driver / Notice to Keeper
Whether the Claimant is acting as Agent or Principal, together with a list of documents they will rely on in this matter
If charges over and above the initial charge are being claimed, the basis on which this is being claimed
If Interest charges are being claimed, the basis on which this is being claimed.
Once these Particulars have been filed, the Defendant asks for reasonable time to file another defence.
The Claimant failed to meet the Notice to Keeper obligations of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012. Absent such a notice served within 14 days of the parking event and with fully compliant statutory wording, this Claimant is unable to hold me liable under the strict !!!8216;keeper liability!!!8217; provisions.
Schedule 4 also states that the only sum a keeper can be pursued for (if Schedule 4 is fully complied with, which it was not, and if there was a 'relevant obligation' and relevant contract' fairly and adequately communicated, which there was not) is the sum on the Notice to Keeper. They cannot pluck another sum from thin air and bolt that on as well when it is believed that neither the signs, nor any NTK mentioned a possible additional £XXX for outstanding debt and damages.
The Claimant has added unrecoverable sums to the original parking charge. It is believed that the employee who drew up the paperwork is remunerated and the particulars of claim are templates, so it is simply not credible that £50 'legal representative!!!8217;s (or even admin) costs!!!8217; were incurred.
This case can be distinguished from ParkingEye v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67 (the Beavis case) which was dependent upon an undenied contract, formed by unusually prominent signage forming a clear offer and which turned on unique facts regarding the location and the interests of the landowner. Strict compliance with the BPA Code of Practice (CoP) was paramount and Mr Beavis was the driver who saw the signs and entered into a contract to pay £85 after exceeding a licence to park free. As far as I can ascertain, based upon the very vague particulars of claim and complete lack of evidence and photographs, and without having been furnished with the alleged signage 'contract', none of this applies in this material case.
In the absence of any proof of adequate signage that contractually bound the Defendant then there can have been no contract and the Claimant has no case.
The Claimant is put to strict proof that at the time of the alleged event they had both advertisement consent and the permission from the site owner to display the signs.
In the absence of strict proof I submit that the Claimant was committing an offence by displaying their signs and therefore no contract could have been entered into between the driver and the Claimant.
Inadequate signs incapable of binding the driver - this distinguishes this case from the Beavis case:
Sporadic and illegible (charge not prominent nor large lettering) of site/entrance signage - breach of the POFA 2012 Schedule 4 and the BPA Code of Practice and no contract formed to pay any clearly stated sum.
It is believed the signage was not lit and any terms were not transparent or legible; this is an unfair contract, not agreed by the driver and contrary to the Consumer Rights Act 2015 in requiring a huge inflated sum as 'compensation' from by an authorised party using the premises as intended.
No promise was made by the driver that could constitute consideration because there was no offer known nor accepted. No consideration flowed from the Claimant.
The signs are believed to have no mention of any debt collection additional charge, which cannot form part of any alleged contract.
BPA CoP breaches - this distinguishes this case from the Beavis case:
the signs were not compliant in terms of the font size, lighting or positioning.
the sum pursued exceeds £100.
there is / was no compliant landowner contract.
No standing - this distinguishes this case from the Beavis case:
It is believed Civil Enforcement do not hold a legitimate contract at this car park. As an agent, the Claimant has no legal right to bring such a claim in their name which should be in the name of the landowner.
The Beavis case confirmed the fact that, if it is a matter of trespass (not breach of any contract), a parking firm has no standing as a non-landowner to pursue even nominal damages.
The charge is an unenforceable penalty based upon a lack of commercial justification. The Beavis case confirmed that the penalty rule is certainly engaged in any case of a private parking charge and was only disengaged due to the unique circumstances of that case, which do not resemble this claim.
Due to the length of time, the Defendant has little to no recollection of the day in question. It would not be reasonable to expect a registered keeper to be able to recall the potential driver(s) of the car over 15 months later. In any case, there is no such obligation in law and this was confirmed in the POPLA Annual Report 2015 by parking expert barrister and Lead Adjudicator, Henry Greenslade, who also clarified the fact that registered keeper can only be held liable under the POFA Schedule 4 and not by presumption or any other legal argument.
The Defendant denies any liability whatsoever to the Claimant in any matter and asks the Court to note that the Claimant has:
Failed to disclose any cause of action in the incorrectly filed Claim Form issued on Xth XXXXX 2017.
Sent a template, well-known to be generic cut and paste 'Particulars' of claim relying on irrelevant case law (Beavis) which ignores the fact that this Claimant cannot hold registered keepers liable in law, due to their own choice of non-POFA documentation.
The vague Particulars of Claim disclose no clear cause of action. The court is invited to strike out the claim of its own volition as having no merit and no reasonable prospects of success.
I confirm that the above facts and statements are true to the best of my knowledge and recollection.0 -
do I have a leg to stand on here....
...except one this week, where the OP didn't notice that a court letter said the case would be decided ''on the papers'' (no hearing) and the poster failed to object and missed insisting on their day in court, and the Brighton Judge made a (seemingly certainly wrong - given the POFA) decision...based on the papers only.
Otherwise, ALL win v CEL, all discontinued thus far. The scam is almost over, no need to worry.PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD0 -
NEWBIES thread
Post 2. Read it. Read it again. Then a third time. Every single step is explained there.
First step will be to acknoweldge the claim. This gives you 33 days from the ISSUE DATE on the form. Whats the issue date?0
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