CC claim form athens security help please!

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can anyone confirm that this information is correct

It may or may not be correct but it has no bearing on the case. At issue is whether the driver had a contract or not. How the claimant conducts themselves afterwards and who they use as solicitors has no bearing on the core issue of a contract.

IMHO would take this out or replace it with

The claimant failed to include a copy of their written contract as per Practice Direction 16 7.3(1) and Practice Direction 7C 1.4(3A). No indication is given as to the Claimants contractual authority to operate there as required by the Claimants Trade Association's Code of Practice B1.1

and

The particulars of claim do not meet the requirements of Practice Direction 16 7.5 as there is nothing which specifies how the terms were breached. Indeed the particulars of claim are not clear and concise as is required by CPR 16.4 1(a).