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Money Claim From Moorside Legal for parking at Greater Anglia Car Park in Shenfield.

Hi, i recieved a letter of claim for several unpaid parking tickets at a Greater Anglia car park which is looked after by NCP.

I have had several other similar pcns cancelled by using this template:

I appeal as keeper.  I am not obliged to identify the driver and I decline to do so.  You cannot transfer the driver's liability (if any) to me as keeper because the location in question is excluded from the definition of 'relevant land' in paragraph 3 of Schedule 4 to the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 ('POFA').

Furthermore, even if (which is not the case) the location is relevant land, your PCN is not POFA-compliant because (without limitation) it was delivered after the end of the 'relevant period' as defined in POFA paragraph 9 and does not contain the mandatory wording required by that paragraph.

I require you to cancel the PCN or issue a POPLA Code so that POPLA can order you to cancel it.

I have acknlowledged the claim but need to make a defence. I have not replied to any letters from moorside legal and have not said i am the driver. All the tickets were all delivered at the end relevant period. So can i use this defence for the money claim as well?

could someone help me draft a letter to write for my defence, i would be very grateful.

thank you



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  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 157,751 Forumite
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    Just use the Moorside version of defence linked in the FIRST post of the Template Defence thread. 
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
    Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • mrknight
    mrknight Posts: 13 Forumite
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    do i need to change any wording?
  • mrknight
    mrknight Posts: 13 Forumite
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    sorry i should mention it is a money claim, not letter of claim
  • Coupon-mad
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    mrknight said:
    do i need to change any wording?
    Well you certainly DON'T use an appeal!
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
    Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • ChirpyChicken
    ChirpyChicken Posts: 2,630 Forumite
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    Have you got a court claim or letter before claim as its confusing
  • mrknight
    mrknight Posts: 13 Forumite
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    its a court money claim form
  • mrknight
    mrknight Posts: 13 Forumite
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    i have acknowledged the claim to get a further 14 days to file a defence, but just need to know what to put in my defence now
  • mrknight
    mrknight Posts: 13 Forumite
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    could anyone help with defence wording or if there is a specific link to the wording i can use for my defence?
  • Car1980
    Car1980 Posts: 2,458 Forumite
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    It's in the sticky 
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 157,751 Forumite
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    mrknight said:
    could anyone help with defence wording or if there is a specific link to the wording i can use for my defence?
    I already answered that.
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
    Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
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