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Moorside Legal - Letter of Claim - None Specific answers to Template Email

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  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 152,071 Forumite
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    edited 24 April at 12:36AM
    Moorside Legal then?

    You are nearly out of time so I really hope you did the AOS already (to extend your defence deadline)  or you'll possibly have a CCJ already.

    See the second post of the NEWBIES thread.

    You don't seem to have read that or used the Template Defence? There's a special version for Moorside cases. Takes mere minutes. Your para 6 should not talk about facts. Do not respond to what ISN'T pleaded in the POC.
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  • RandomGuy2024
    RandomGuy2024 Posts: 12 Forumite
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    edited 24 April at 8:25PM
    Yes, Moorside Legal.
    Yes I completed the Acknowledgement of Service on 02/04/2025
    Yes I've added the 1-6 of the "Gladstones, CEL (in-house only) and Moorside Legal claims" specific template, and then from Paragraph 4 of the standard template defence and renumbered, total of 34.
    I've added my bits in Point 6 "
    (Add basic facts and/or admit or deny the paragraphs in the woeful POC one by one)"

    Ok, I thought Point 6 should be as detailed as possible. I've removed everything apart from the below

    6.      (Add basic facts and/or admit or deny the paragraphs in the woeful POC one by one)

    ·        Particulars of Claim

    o   Point 1: Address of Car Park is incorrect, it cannot be in the City of Salford and in the City of Manchester

    o   Point 2: The Parking Charge Notice cannot be issued on the same day as the Parking Charge as the driver is given up to 72hours after parking to pay.

    The parking took place on 01/03/2024 therefore the Parking Charge could not be issued until at least 03/03/2024

    o   Point 3: Breach of the Terms on NCP Signs - Signage provided by NCP is incorrect and not representative of signage in the Car Park

    o   Point 4: NCP Terms & Conditions do not state payment of a Parking Charge Notice is required within 28days

  • Coupon-mad
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    edited 24 April at 1:35PM
    Issue Date was the 28th March 2025



    You could also add that the POC misleads the court that the 'total of the PCN' was £170 which is untrue and would be impossible for a PCN on private land.
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
    Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • RandomGuy2024
    RandomGuy2024 Posts: 12 Forumite
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    Added the part of about the Total of the PCN.

    Anything else to add?

    As always, I appreciate all the help
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