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  • Darcy_1966
    Darcy_1966 Posts: 14 Forumite
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    Hi 
    My daughter now has a date for the court hearing on the 1st September 1 pm she has checked with the court today and the court fee was paid on the 31st July she has until the 18th August 1 pm to submit the witness statement does anyone have any advice if I need to add anything else to the defence I have already sent please thank you in advance 
  • Gr1pr
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    Just prepare a Witness Statement plus Exhibits bundle and get it submitted to both parties by the 18th, same as all the other cases on here 
  • Le_Kirk
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     witness statement does anyone have any advice if I need to add anything else to the defence I have already sent please thank you in advance 
    Your witness statement is "in support of your defence as already filed" and therefore should be ............... in support of and back up whatever you put in your/your daughter's defence.  It is a narrative of what happened on the day and subsequently, written in the first person in your daughter's own words.  It happened to your daughter so no one on here can write it for her.  Reduce the impact of anything negative and emphasise the impact of anything positive. It is also your chance to attach any evidence that was written about in her defence.  Read other witness statements to see what those posters wrote - particularly successful ones.

  • Coupon-mad
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    Hi 
    My daughter now has a date for the court hearing on the 1st September 1 pm she has checked with the court today and the court fee was paid on the 31st July she has until the 18th August 1 pm to submit the witness statement does anyone have any advice if I need to add anything else to the defence I have already sent please thank you in advance 
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  • Darcy_1966
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    Many thanks for your advice this is my first draft please could you advice 

     

     

    1. I am xxxxx, and I am the defendant in this matter. The facts below a true to the best of my belief and my account has been prepared based upon my own knowledge.

     

    2. In my statement I should refer to exhibits one to three within the evidence supplied with this statement referring to page and reference numbers when appropriate my defence is repeated and I will say as follows:-

     

    Facts and Sequence of Events 

     

    Date and time of the Incident

    3. It is admitted that on the material date of the xxxx2021 at 18.48 hrs, that I was the driver of the vehicle xxxx at xxxxxxx .I purchased a ticket for one hour then attended my physiotherapy appointment which I was attending due to back pain following the birth of my second child. On my return to the said vehicle, I experienced a migraine headache with visual disturbances. Due to my incapacity, I was unable to proceed to the pay machine to purchase another ticket to extend my parking, instead waited for the headache to pass and then drove away once my vision had improved leaving the car park at 20.14 hrs.
    4. Two weeks later I received a PCN notice for an alleged overstay of 26 minutes stating that my permit did not cover the date and time of parking I appealed this through the correct channels stating that I had experienced a migraine with visual disturbances, following a physiotherapy appointment for back pain and had been unable to leave the carpark until this had subsided, the claimant responded by offering to pay a reduced fee of £20, this reply went to an old email address that had been given by mistake. I responded on the 2nd July 2021 and offered to pay the £20 offered as a good will gesture but was informedthat the case had been handed over to a debt collection agency.

     

    Unreasonable Conduct 

     

    5. A suitable extended “grace” period under these circumstances would be required under the Equality Act 2010“You are under a legal duty to make reasonable adjustments under Section 20 of the Equality Act 2010.”as I was incapacitated unable to use the pay machine and unable to leave the car parkThis was breached by the claimantExhibit 1 – (BPA article )

     

    Exaggerated Claim 

    6. The alleged 'core debt' from any parking charge cannot have exceeded £100 (the industry cap set out in the applicable Code of Practice at the time). I have seen no evidence that the added damages/fees are genuine.

    7. I say that fees were not paid out or incurred by this Claimant, who is to put strict proof of:

    (i) the alleged breach, and

    (ii) a breakdown of how they arrived at the enhanced amount claimed, including how interest has been calculated, which appears to have been appliedimproperly on the entire inflated sum, as if that figure was immediately overdue on the day of an alleged parking event.

    8. This Claimant routinely pursues a disproportionate additional fixed sum (inexplicably added per PCN) despite knowing that the will of Parliament is to ban or substantially reduce the disproportionate 'Debt Fees'. This case is a classic example where the unjust enrichment of exaggerated fees encourages the 'numbers game' of inappropriate and out of control bulk litigation of weak/archive parking cases. No pre-action checks and balances are likely to have been made to ensure facts, merit, position of signs/the vehicle, or a proper cause of action.

    9. The Department for Levelling Up, Housing and Communities (the DLUHC) first published its statutory Parking Code of Practice on 7th February 2022, here: https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/private-parking-code-of-practice

    "Private firms issue roughly 22,000 parking tickets every day, often adopting a labyrinthine system of misleading and confusing signage, opaque appeals services, aggressive debt collection and unreasonable fees designed to extort money from motorists."

    10.. Despite legal challenges delaying the Code's implementation (marking it as temporarily 'withdrawn' as shown in the link above) a draft Impact Assessment (IA) to finalise the DLUHC Code was recently published on 30th July 2023, which has exposed some industry-gleaned facts about supposed 'Debt Fees'. This is revealed in the Government's analysis, found here: https://assets.publishing.service.gov.uk/government/uploads/system/uploads/attachment_data/file/1171438/Draft_IA_-_Private_Parking_Code_of_Practice_.pdf

    11. Paragraphs 4.31 and 5.19 reveal that the parking industry has informed the DLUHC that the true minor cost of what the parking industry likes to call debt recovery or 'enforcement' (pre-action) stage totals a mere £8.42 per recovery case.

    12. With that sum in mind, the extant claim has been enhanced by an excessive amount, disingenuously added as an extra 'fee'. This is believed to be routinely retained by the litigating legal team and has been claimed in addition to the intended 'legal representatives fees' cap set within the small claims track rules. This conduct has been examined and found - including in a notably detailed judgment by Her Honour Judge Jackson, now a specialist Civil High Court Judge on the Leeds/Bradford circuit - to constitute 'double recovery' and I take that position.

    13. The new draft IA now demonstrates that the unnecessarily intimidating stage of pre-action letter-chains costs 'eight times less' (says the DLUHC analysis) than the price-fixed £70 per PCN routinely added. This has caused consumer harm in the form of hundreds of thousands of inflated CCJs each year that District Judges have been powerless to prevent. This abusively enhanced 'industry standard' Debt Fee was enabled only by virtue of the self- serving Codes of Practice of the rival parking Trade Bodies, influenced by a Board of parking operators and debt firms who stood to gain from it.

    14.. In support of my contention that the sum sought is unconscionably exaggerated and thus unrecoverable, attention is drawn to paras 98, 100, 193, 198 of ParkingEye Ltd v Beavis [2015] UKSC67 ('the Beavis case'). Also, ParkingEye Ltd v Somerfield Stores Ltd ChD [2011] EWHC 4023(QB) where the parking charge was £75, discounted to £37.50 for prompt payment. Whilst £75 was reasonable, HHJ Hegarty (decision later ratified by the CoA) held in paras 419-428 that unspecified 'admin costs' inflating a parking charge to £135 was not a true reflection of the cost of a template letter and 'would appear to be penal.

    15.. This Claimant has not incurred any additional costs because the full parking charge (after expiry of discount) is already high and more than covers what the Supreme Court called an 'automated letter-chain' business model that generates a healthy profit. In Beavis, there were 4 or 5 letters in total, including pre-action phase reminders. The £85 parking charge was held to cover the 'costs of the operation' and the DLUHC's IA suggests it should still be the case that the parking charge itself more than covers the minor costs of pre-action stage, even if and when the Government reduces the level of parking charges.

    16. Whilst the new Code is not retrospective, the majority of the clauses went unchallenged by the parking industry, and it stands to become a creature of statute due to the failure of the self-serving BPA & IPC Codes. The DLUHC's Secretary of State mentions they are addressing 'market failure' more than once in the draft IA, a phrase which should be a clear steer for Courts in 2023 to scrutinise every aspect of claims like this one.

    17 In addition, pursuant to Schedule 4 paragraph 4(5) of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 ('the POFA') the sum claimed exceeds the maximum potentially recoverable. It is also disproportionate and in breach of the Consumer Rights Act 2015 (CRA).

     

    Consumer Rights Act 2015 Breaches 

    18. Claiming costs on an indemnity basis is unfair, per the Unfair Contract Terms Guidance (CMA37, para 5.14.3), the Government guidance on the CRA which introduced new requirements for 'prominence' of both contract terms and 'consumer notices'. In a parking context, this includes a test of fairness and clarity of signage and all notices, letters and other communications intended to be read by the consumer.

    19. Section 71 creates a duty upon courts to consider the test of fairness, including (but not limited to) whether all terms/notices were unambiguously and conspicuously brought to the

    attention of a consumer. Signage must be prominent, plentiful, well-placed (and lit in hour

    20. The CRA has been breached due to unfair/unclear terms and notices, pursuant to s62 and paying due regard to examples 6, 10, 14 & 18 of Schedule 2 and the requirements for fair/open dealing and good faith (NB: this does notnecessarily mean there has to be a finding of bad faith).

    21. Now for the first time, the DLUHC's draft IA exposes that template 'debt chaser' stage costs less than £9. This shows that HHJ Jackson was right all along in Excel v Wilkinson. (See Exhibit 2)

    Beavis Claim 

    22. The Supreme Court clarified that ‘the penalty rule is plainly engaged’ in parking cases, which must be determined on their own facts. That 'unique' case met a commercial justification test, given the location and clear signs with the charges in the largest/boldest text. Rather than causing other parking charges to be automatically justified, that case, particularly the brief, conspicuous yellow & black warning signs - (See Exhibit 11) - set a high bar that this Claimant has failed to reach.

    23. Paraphrasing from the Supreme Court, deterrence is likely to be penal if there is a lack of a 'legitimate interest' in performance extending beyond the prospect of compensation flowing directly from the alleged breach. The intention cannot be to punish a driver, nor to present them with hidden terms, unexpected/cumbersome obligations nor 'concealed pitfalls or traps'. (See Exhibit 12) for paragraphs from ParkingEye v Beavis).

    24. In the present case, the Claimant has fallen foul of those tests. There is one main issue that render this parking charge to be purely penal (i.e. no legitimate interest saves it) and thus, it is unenforceable:

    (i). Hidden Terms:

    The £100 penalty clause is positively buried in small print, as seen on the signs in evidence. The purported added (false) 'costs' are even more hidden and are also unspecified as a sum. Their (unlawful, due to the CRA Schedule 2 grey list of unfair terms) suggestion is that they can hide a vague sentence within a wordy sign, in the smallest possible print, then add whatever their trade body lets them, until the DLUHC bans it in 2024. And the driver has no idea about any risk nor even how much they might layer on top. Court of Appeal authorities which are on all fours with a case involving a lack of ‘adequate notice’ of a charge, include:

    (i) Spurling v Bradshaw [1956] 1 WLR 461 (‘red hand rule’) and

    (ii) Thornton v Shoe Lane Parking Ltd [1970] EWCA Civ2both leading authorities confirming that a clause cannot be incorporated after a contract has been concluded; and

    (iii) Vine v London Borough of Waltham Forest: CA 5 Apr 2000, where Ms Vine won because it was held that she had not seen the terms by which she would later be bound, due to "the absence of any notice on the wall opposite the parking space".

     

    Conclusion

    25.The Claimant's conduct is consistent with widespread consumer harm identified by the Government. Their added costs are not genuine losses but part of a profit-seeking litigation model targeting residents.

    26.  I respectfully ask the Court to:

     

    a)     Strike out or dismiss the claim due to lack of merit, poor particulars, and abuse of process.

    b)    Consider a finding of unreasonable conduct under CPR 27.14(2)(f) and CPR 27.14(2)(g) and award appropriate costs; including where the Court finds agency exists, consider the award of costs inter alia.

    28.   If the Claimant discontinues late, apply CPR 38.6 and CPR 46.5 to award costs accordingly.

    Statement of truth:

    I believe that the facts stated in this witness statement are true. I understand that proceedings for contempt of court may be brought against anyone who makes, or causes to be made, a false statement in a document verified by a statement of truth without an honest belief in its truth.

     

    Defendant’s signature:

     

     

    Costs Assessment

    Given the significant time and effort required to defend this unjust claim, I respectfully request that the court consider awarding costs under CPR 27.14(2)(g). I have spent considerable time researching, preparing this statement, and attending the hearing. My estimated costs for this are as follows:

    · Research and preparation of witness statement (5 Hours): £50

    · Travel expenses (Taxi to and from): £50

    · Childcare (5 Hours): £125

    Totalling: £225 I request that the court considers these costs in its judgment, given the claimant's unreasonable behaviour in pursuing this claim without merit.

     

     

     

     

  • Coupon-mad
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    Remove all this:

    "...The defendant purchased a 60 minute ticket. The PCN alleges the vehicle was on site for 1 hour and 26 minutes, which according to the claimant was an Overstayed Paid For Parking Session. On the defendant’s return to the vehicle, following physiotherapy treatment, the defendant experienced a migraine type headache with visual disturbances. The defendant made the decision that it would not be safe to drive as their vision was not 100%. Due to the visual disturbances the defendant was unable to purchase another ticket to cover the 26 mins. As soon as the defendant’s vision had returned they drove out of the car park. The attempt to impose a charge for a driver who was ensuring they were safe to drive, appears reckless and acting without due care and safety to the wider public."

    replace that section with:


    ...The Defendant paid for their parking. The Claimant is put to strict proof that the vehicle significantly overstayed after expiry of the purchased ticket. More likely is that the Claimant failed to allow a suitable consideration period on arrival, given this was a site requiring use of a pay and display machine.  All this takes time on arrival at a site and is not part of the 'parking period'. A reasonable period of minutes on arrival and also added upon leaving do not count and would fall within grace periods, especially in a car park where after finding a space, one must first read tariff boards, find coins (or download an app) and take time to pay.

    3.1. The British Parking Association ('BPA'), the Court of Appeal and the relevant Government Department (now renamed the MHCLG) all agree with this point:

    3.1.1.  In an official, published BPA news article by Kelvin Reynolds, BPA Director of Corporate Affairs, he states that there is a difference between 'grace' periods and 'observation' periods in parking and that good practice allows for this:
    “An observation period is the time when an enforcement officer should be able to determine what the motorist intends to do once in the car park. Our guidance specifically says that there must be sufficient time for the motorist to park their car, observe the signs, decide whether they want to comply with the operator’s conditions and either drive away or pay for a ticket. No time limit is specified. This is because it might take one person 5 minutes, but another person 10 minutes depending on various factors, not limited to disability.”
    https://www.britishparking.co.uk/News/good-car-parking-practice-includes-grace-periods

    3.1.2.  In the Court of Appeal case of National Car Parks Limited vs The Commissioner for HMRC (2019) A3/2017/2435 Lord Justice Newey states that ‘the precise figure was settled when the customer inserted her pound coin and 50p piece into the machine and then elected to press the green button rather than cancelling the transaction. The best analysis would seem to be that the contract was brought into being when the green button was pressed.’

    3.1.3.  This (consumer fairness) position is also reflected by the planned statutory regime which will flow from statute law already enacted, and which the new Government is now set to finalise in the coming months. Under the Parking (Code of Practice) Act 2019, the Secretary of State 'must' lay a statutory Code of Practice before Parliament and provide for a regulated regime of scrutiny to overcome the wholesale 'market failure' of the consumer-harming private parking industry. The draft statutory Code of Practice includes clauses that were not objected to by the parking industry's 2022 Judicial Review blocking tactics. In the definitions, the DLUHC (now MHCLG) state at 2.24: - parking period:  the length of time that a vehicle has been parked, i.e. left stationary otherwise than in the course of driving, after any relevant consideration period has expired ... This is not the period between a vehicle being recorded as entering and departing controlled land."  

    3.2.  In addition to an observation period (on arrival) there must be a grace period, to allow sufficient time to leave without penalty. On the Defendant’s return to the vehicle, following physiotherapy treatment, they experienced a migraine headache with visual disturbances. The Defendant was unable to drive away immediately but was within the vehicle and caused no obstruction nor loss of parking space availability because the car park was not full by any means. It would not have been safe to drive as their vision was not 100%.  A suitable extended grace period under these circumstances would be required under the Equality Act 2010 (the EA) and the Claimants knew all about the Defendant's migraine attack from her appeal but they have instead pursued this to court, which is in clear breach of their EA duty.
    Just a reminder that this was the crux of defence and the WS needs to match it.

    Also, remove the long second half of that WS and instead replace it with paragraphs 4-10 in the new Template Defence (even though this is a WS) as that will make it far more concise.

    Just to warn her, I think there might be a hearing (TCP had a DC Legal case on here last month that went to a hearing, so maybe they are less likely to discontinue than others). Also, I think she'll struggle because she did overstay paid for time.

    But it's worth attending as the judge should disallow the added £70 and she might win, if their evidence isn't great.
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  • Darcy_1966
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    Thank you @Coupon-mad  please could you clarify where I need to remove the long second half from apologies I know I haven’t followed the defence to be honest I have gone down a rabbit hole 😩 my daughter has MH issues so I think I might just pay DCB legal’s fee, it may be too much for her to attend a hearing 
  • Coupon-mad
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    No, I doubt you'll just pay. You can't live life like that: good people don't set examples by paying scams to make them go away.

    It's not a 'fee' and they might well still discontinue. Plenty of time!

    Do nothing different than completing the WS & exhibits.If it carries on to a hearing, she can either:

    (a) settle the case on the day if she wants, or

    (b) she can (we hope) cope well if you go with her to speak as her lay rep? It's only like a job interview type of formal meeting. You could do that. 
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  • Le_Kirk
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    Darcy_1966 said:
    2. In my statement I should will refer to exhibits one to three within the evidence supplied with this statement referring to page and reference numbers when appropriate my defence is repeated and I will say as follows:-

    One suggestion for you above.

  • Darcy_1966
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    Hi 

    Apologies for the late response I have been on holiday now back to the real world!!

    Thank you for your encouragement coupon mad she has decided to attend court with my support as you suggested.



    She has received their defence I have left out the first bit and the evidence .

    Defence

    22. The Keeper was afforded a 28-day period in which they could appeal. An appeal was lodged which

    was unsuccessful, and in which identified the Defendant as the Driver of the Vehicle. A copy of the

    appeal and response issued is exhibited at “EXHIBIT 7”. The Defendant was informed of the

    rejection, and of their options going forward. It is respectfully submitted that if the Defendant

    genuinely believed the Charge had been issued incorrectly, they would have engaged with the

    appeals process further, which they did not.

    23. If there was any doubt regarding their liability, the Defendant has had ample time to challenge the

    Charge or request evidence in support. Despite correspondence being sent to the Defendant by a debt

    collection agency and a Letter of Claim being issued in accordance with the Pre-Action Protocol for

    Debt Claims, no challenges have previously been raised.

    24. The Defendant has filed a widely available templated Defence, rather than dealing with the

    substantive issues. It is submitted the this is disingenuous and a waste of both the Court’s and my

    Company’s time.

    25. Notwithstanding the above, I respond to the issues raised in the Defence by way of sub-headings as

    follows (as the defence is quite repetitive, I will only deal with each point once, but for the avoidance

    of doubt nothing within the defence is accepted unless I specifically state otherwise): -

    4Defendant’s Disputes

    i. The Defendant alleges that their payment made was covering their stayed time, and such

    time should have accounted for the consideration period upon entering the Land. With

    respect, my Company denies that the payment made by the Defendant covered their whole

    duration of the Vehicle’s time on the Land. The images at “EXHIBIT 3” evidence that the

    Defendant entered the Land at 18:48 and exited the Land at 20:14. Whilst the payment was

    made promptly upon entering, the Payment Log at “EXHIBIT 4” clearly highlights that

    the payment was only to cover a stay up to 19:50. The Defendant overstayed this paid

    parking period by 24 minutes. It is unreasonable for the Defendant to allege that they made

    the correct payment for parking, given they only paid for a 1-hour parking session when

    they ought to have paid for 2 hours or left within the hour. Neither of these were done by

    the Defendant, which is a clear breach of the Terms as they did not properly pay for their

    stayed time.

    ii. Further to the above, the Defendant has referred to previous case law regarding the BPA

    grace period, and they allege that the relevant period should be respected when complying

    with the BPA Code. Respectfully, my Company have complied with the BPA Code by

    allowing the Defendant the correct periods regarding consideration and grace. It is my

    Company’s position that the consideration period ought not bear relevance to the

    Defendant’s dispute, given they paid for their parking within 1 minute of arriving on the

    Land. Further to this, the Defendant overstayed their parking period, and whilst they are

    provided with a grace period to exit the Land, this is set at 10 minutes under the Code and

    the Defendant overstayed by 24 minutes. Therefore, the Defendant has also overstayed the

    grace period, and their dispute is ultimately denied.

    The Contract

    iii. The Defendant alleges that there is no contract between them and my Company. It is my

    Company’s position that there is and the details of which are set out above. Parking Eye -

    v- Beavis established that this form of contract is perfectly workable.

    Protection of Freedoms Act

    iv. My Company applied to the DVLA for the details of the Registered Keeper and sent

    Notice to the Keeper compliant with Section 8 of POFA (see “EXHIBIT 6”). Paragraph 1

    5of POFA states that the Registered Keeper is presumed to be the ‘Keeper’ unless proven

    otherwise. Paragraph 4 of POFA gives my Company the right to recover from the

    ‘Keeper’.

    v. The Defendant appealed the Charge, as per “EXHIBIT 7”, as the Driver of the Vehicle,

    and they are therefore pursued on the same basis.

    CPR Compliance

    vi. The Defendant questions whether the Particulars of Claim comply with the Civil

    Procedure Rules. I submit that the Claim was issued via the Civil National Business Centre

    and in this regard, I refer to Practice Direction 7C (“the PD”) which specifically provides

    the guidelines for doing so. I respectfully submit that the Particulars of Claim (“the

    Particulars”) are in keeping with the PD. The following sections are of relevance: -

    5.2(1) provides a limited character count for the Particulars of Claim; and

    5.2A stipulates that the requirement in paragraph 7.3 of Practice Direction 16 for

    documents to be attached to the particulars of contract claims does not apply to

    claims started using an online claim form.

    vii. It is my Company’s position that the Particulars were sufficient to allow the Defendant to

    identify the subject matter of the Claim. The Defendant could not have submitted a

    Defence with the detail it contains if the Particulars were so insufficient as to prevent them

    from understanding the claim. Further, with respect, if the Defendant were of the genuine

    belief that the Particulars of Claim were insufficient, the correct procedure would have

    been to make an Application to the Court. The Defendant has chosen not to do so.

    viii. In addition to the above, I also refer to CPR 1 and respectfully remind the Defendant of

    their obligation to deal with the case justly and at proportionate cost. Bearing in mind the

    claim amount, my Company has taken proportionate steps to recover the debt.

    Signs / Unfair Contract Terms

    ix. The Terms, as per “EXHIBIT 2”, on the signs were adequate in respect of overall size,

    font size, plain English, location and content. The Plan at “EXHIBIT 5” demonstrates

    6x. xi. xii. xiii. xiv. where the signs were located and it is submitted they are adequate to constitute notice of

    the Terms to the Driver. If the Defendant did not understand the Terms on the signs, they

    should have exited the land and found alternative parking.

    The signs clearly outlined the Terms of parking and the Defendant was on notice of the

    Terms upon entering the Land. By parking on the Land, the Defendant accepted the Terms.

    These Terms state that if breached, the Defendant agrees to pay within 28 days of issue.

    In respect of the ‘terms’, as per Schedule 2 of the Consumer Right Act 2015, specifically

    referred to:

    Term 6 – It is submitted the sum is not disproportionate for the reasons set out within the

    ‘amount claimed’ section of this Statement, nor is it ‘compensation’.

    Term 10 – As is evident from the Plan, signs were displayed throughout the Land. The

    Driver was aware of the fact that parking was managed from the point of entering the Land

    and could leave if they did not agree to the Terms. It is not unreasonable for the Driver to

    need to potentially walk no more than 10 meters to fully familiarise themselves with the

    full Terms. This would have all happened before the conclusion of the contract.

    Term 14 – The price is stated on the sign.

    Term 18 – The fact the Driver was able to park means my Company fulfilled its

    obligations.

    The Terms clearly stated what would happen if payment was not made: -

    “Non payment within 28 days of the date of issue may incur further costs for debt

    recovery.”

    With no concession made in this regard, if a Driver ever does not understand the Terms on

    the signs, they can exit the land and find alternative parking. They are under no obligation

    to park on the Land.

    The phrase ‘double recovery’ suggests the same amount is being recovered twice. This is

    not what is claimed, as explained later in this Statement.

    7Penalty / Amount Claimed

    xv. In respect of the Defendant’s allegation that the claim is a penalty, my Company is not

    seeking more than the original charge as the core debt. The core charge remains the same

    for each Charge (i.e. £100.00); however, my Company is now also seeking further

    costs/damages.

    xvi. My Company is instructed to manage the Land, the Landowner agreement previously

    referred to in this statement confirms this. My Company’s legitimate interest is to fulfil

    this obligation. The Landowner’s legitimate interest in managing the Land is because it is a

    pay and display car park. Because there is a clear legitimate interest/commercial

    justification, the same as that established in ParkingEye -v- Beavis [2015], this case does

    not fall foul of the penalty rules established in that case.

    xvii. The amount charged is in line with the guidelines given by the ATA. Part E, Schedule 5 of

    the COP states “Parking charges must not exceed £100.00 unless agreed in advance with

    the BPA”. It is my Company’s position there is no requirement for the amount of the

    charge to bear any relevance to the actual or potential cost of parking. The Charge is a fee

    charged by my Company for providing the service and it stays within the guidelines given

    by the ATA. As with many other ‘services’; the service provider is entitled to charge as

    they deem appropriate.

    xviii. The Charge was not paid within the prescribed 28 days or indeed at all. In view of this the

    sum of £60.00 is also claimed as a contractual cost pursuant to the Contract which states

    “Non payment within 28 days of the date of issue may incur further costs for debt

    recovery.” The Defendant was on notice of the fact that the outstanding amount may

    increase as a result of any necessary debt recovery action. In support I draw the Court’s

    attention to paragraph 45 of Chaplair Limited v Kumari [2015] EWCA Civ 798 whereby,

    when considering contractual indemnity costs, it was stated: -

    “There is nothing … which enable[s] the rules to exclude or override that

    contractual entitlement and I therefore agree with Arden LJ that the judge had the

    jurisdiction to assess the costs free from any restraints imposed by CPR 27.14”;

    xix. The sum added is a contribution to the actual costs incurred by my Company as a result of

    the Defendant’s non-payment. My Company’s employees have spent time and material

    8attempting to recover the debt. This is not my Company’s usual business and the resources

    could have been better spent in other areas of the business, generating profit. Had the

    Defendant of paid as per the Contract, there would have been no need for recovery action

    so the amount due would not have increased.

    xx. With respect of Parking Eye -v- Beavis [2015], whilst it is accepted the original charge is

    designed to include the ‘operational costs’; this was with reference to maintaining the land,

    taking payment or sending the relevant POFA compliant notices. It was never intended to

    include the need to pursue the debt in Court to recover it. If that were the case, it would

    override the Civil Procedure Rules (allowing fixed costs and recovery of court fees) which

    of course is not the case. The Defendant has misunderstood the phrasing ‘operational

    costs’.

    xxi. The Defendant alleges my Company has failed to adhere to the Landowner's definitions,

    exemptions, grace period, hours of operation and instructions to cancel charges due to

    complaints. The Defendant is a third party to the Landowner Agreement. Privity of

    contract applies.

    Alternative Dispute Resolution (“ADR”)

    xxii. The Defendant alleges that my Company has failed to engage in any genuine ADR. This is

    denied. My Company’s solicitor provided the Defendant with the opportunity to request

    ADR prior to the Claim being issued. No response was received to the Letter of Claim. It

    is submitted that if the Defendant genuinely had doubts regarding liability, they would

    have engaged further with this opportunity.

    xxiii. Further to the above, my Company confirms that the Defendant was offered a reduced

    price of the Charge if paid within 7 days as a goodwill gesture when the Charge was

    appealed. The Defendant did not respond to such offer, and no payment was received. My

    Company respectfully submits that reasonable offers have been made to settle the matter

    prior to pursuing legal proceedings. Whilst such goodwill offer was made, this does not

    supersede that the Defendant is liable for the Charge, and my Company now intends to

    pursue them for the full balance.

    9Private Parking Code of Practice

    xxiv. The Defendant refers in detail to the Private Parking Code of Practice in respect of the

    additional costs incurred in this matter. I respectfully submit that the Private Parking Code

    of Practice has been withdrawn since 07/06/2022. The Defendant also acknowledges that it

    is not retrospective guidance. I therefore submit that it does not apply to this matter and I

    do not intend to comment on this point any further.

    Dismissal of Claim

    xxv. The recent successful appeal in Britannia Parking Group Ltd v Semark-Jullien [2020] EW

    Misc 12 (CC) (29 July 2020) found that the inclusion of the debt recovery charge in the

    claim does not fall foul of the decision of Parking Eye Ltd v Beavis [2015] UKSC 67,

    because that was not the point in discussion in that case. The appeal also concluded that

    the inclusion of such a charge in a claim of this type does not constitute an abuse of

    process that would allow for the entire claim to be struck out.

    Defendant’s Costs

    xxvi. Defendant is requesting standard Witness costs for attendance at Court. The Defendant’s

    entitlement to the relief claimed is denied in its entirety. The Defendant’s Claim is not

    supported by any documentation to evidence the costs incurred. Costs are to be decided

    after the determination of liability. Pursuant to CPR 27.14, costs are not ordinarily

    applicable to Small Claims. Notwithstanding the above, and without concession, the

    Defendant is put to proof that the costs claimed are true.

    xxvii. The Defendant alleges that my Company should be ordered to pay their costs due to

    unreasonable conduct. It is denied that my Company has acted unreasonably in any way.

    The Defendant parked in breach of the Terms of the Contract and as such the Charges

    were issued correctly. My Company has taken all of the reasonable and necessary steps in

    recovering the debt and has issued legal proceedings only as a last resort.

    xxviii. In view of the above, it is my Company’s position that the Defendant breached the

    Contract as set out in this Statement and as such the Defendant is liable.

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