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Defence in court

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  • Vorot
    Vorot Posts: 25 Forumite
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    sorry my English is enough to communicate but i am hardly struggle with such letters so took all what i was suggested and merge it together. Please let me know would it be ok or not?
  • Fruitcake
    Fruitcake Posts: 59,462 Forumite
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    edited 18 February 2024 at 7:54PM
    You must, absolutely MUST get the name of the claimant correct. You have given us at least three different names so far, and none of them are the actual names of parking companies.
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  • Vorot
    Vorot Posts: 25 Forumite
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    should i add  after or instead The transcript of this case is available online.:

    The court transcript of that hearing and judgment, heard on appeal by HHJ Harris sitting at Oxford Court, will be provided at witness statement stage in support of this defence.
  • Fruitcake
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    Vorot said:
    should i add  after or instead The transcript of this case is available online.:

    The court transcript of that hearing and judgment, heard on appeal by HHJ Harris sitting at Oxford Court, will be provided at witness statement stage in support of this defence.
    Replace, "The transcript is available online" with "The court transcript of that hearing and judgment ... "
    I married my cousin. I had to...
    I don't have a sister. :D
    All my screwdrivers are cordless.
    "You're Safety Is My Primary Concern Dear" - Laks
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 151,354 Forumite
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    You have a rogue paragraph above the Chan images.  Remove it.

    The Claimant is not 'Private Parking Solution'.
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top or bottom of any page where it says:
    Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • Vorot
    Vorot Posts: 25 Forumite
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    Claimant is Private Parking Solutions

    changed
  • Vorot
    Vorot Posts: 25 Forumite
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    edited 18 February 2024 at 8:55PM
    Vorot said:
    should i add  after or instead The transcript of this case is available online.:

    The court transcript of that hearing and judgment, heard on appeal by HHJ Harris sitting at Oxford Court, will be provided at witness statement stage in support of this defence.
    Replace, "The transcript is available online" with "The court transcript of that hearing and judgment ... "


    replaced
  • Fruitcake
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    edited 18 February 2024 at 9:03PM
    Vorot said:
    Claimant is Private Parking Solutions

    changed
    NO, it is not. You need the WHOLE name of the parking company, not part of it. 

    If you get the name wrong you will lose the case.
    I married my cousin. I had to...
    I don't have a sister. :D
    All my screwdrivers are cordless.
    "You're Safety Is My Primary Concern Dear" - Laks
  • Vorot
    Vorot Posts: 25 Forumite
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    So u mean
    Private parking Solutions (London) Ltd
  • Fruitcake
    Fruitcake Posts: 59,462 Forumite
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    edited 18 February 2024 at 10:22PM
    Vorot said:
    So u mean
    Private parking Solutions (London) Ltd
    Yes, that is the correct, full name. That is the name that must appear on your defence.
    I married my cousin. I had to...
    I don't have a sister. :D
    All my screwdrivers are cordless.
    "You're Safety Is My Primary Concern Dear" - Laks
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