Highview Parking PCN from 2019, CCJ claim received

Coupon-mad

Yep that's fine, except:

The defendant does not have any record of the time to prove or disprove that they were the driver on the date in question.

No. Unless you were that breastfeeding mother, deny you were the driver.  

You know you were not (unless it was you).

Watkin_Bassett

OK brilliant, thanks, I will amend that and then submit my defence tomorrow and onto the next stage. Thanks for your replies so far.

KeithP

Your paragraph 2 essentially says you don't know who was driving.

Your paragraph 3 tells us all that you do know who was driving - the mother of a five month old son.

Para 3d - You mention PoFA 2018.
The first time you use initialisations, it is usual to spell it out in full with the shortened version in brackets for further use - just like you have for Particulars of Claim ('POC'). 
And it isn't 2018.
So those words become...
the 'keeper liability' requirements set out in Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 ('PoFA').

Watkin_Bassett

Great @KeithP, yes I have ammended the details about knowing who was driving, I will update PoFA 2012. Many thanks for spotting that.