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  • KeithP
    KeithP Posts: 41,296 Forumite
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    But surely you have a record of everything you have returned to the County Court Business Centre?

    Why have you not answered my question...
    I guess you received the Claim Form. What did you do with it?
    Did you write anything in the Defence and Counterclaim box when returning it?
    It is difficult to say whether your proposed Witness Statement is suitable without knowing what has been filed as a Defence.

    You say "...don't remember doing a Questionnaire" - that was the form where you chose your local court for a hearing and opted for mediation - ring any bells?

    You say "...certainly haven’t filed a defence".
    HM Courts and Tribunals Service thinks otherwise.
  • Jlbourne
    Jlbourne Posts: 13 Forumite
    No record
    This has all hapoened at the same time as me having a baby. I havent been the most organised

    I dont recall receiving a claim form. This whole thing has been overwhelming i have clearly made a lot of mistakes
    Is there any saving it now?

    Is there anyway to see what hm courts have as my defence?
  • Redx
    Redx Posts: 38,084 Forumite
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    edited 29 July 2019 at 7:04PM
    your defence was filed before 14th june to the MCOL CCBC in Northampton, who then sent you a DQ asking to be filled in and naming your local court in your reply

    seems you are at the witness statement stage, not defence stage, that ship sailed months ago

    maybe they will email it to you if you ring them (a bit like a SAR), plus ask when the DQ was sent out and when they received it back WITH YOUR LOCAL COURT DETAILS ON IT ?

    email PE enforcement and ask them for copies (include a copy of your V5C log book as proof of ID), again like a SAR for all their docs etc, email their DPO a SAR too, tonight , for all docs and pics and data, including a copy of your defence in their reply to your SAR, again include a copy of the V5C as proof of ID
  • Jlbourne
    Jlbourne Posts: 13 Forumite
    edited 29 July 2019 at 7:29PM
    This is something that was submitted online. I thought this was an appeal? Maybe this was the defence

    I have been an NHS worker at xxfor the last
    10 years and have always worked hard for the community I serve
    locally which includes Xxx. I moved to Xxx in February
    2017, when the Xx car park, now managed by Parkingeye
    Ltd was a open air car wash which I used to use often and park in
    regularly with no issues at all to go and do my shopping on the
    high street. I had no idea it had been taken over only relatively
    recently by Parkingeye Ltd, or I would never have gone in
    there. The signage that this was owned by this company which is
    known to issue unfair and disproportionately high fines, was not
    obvious to me for reasons I will explain below. The car park is
    adjacent to the Railway Tavern Pub on the corner of the high
    street and I thought it had merely been taken over by the pub once
    more. I was not to know that Parkingeye Ltd had taken over
    management.

    I was 30 weeks pregnant at the time and in the car with my 1
    year-old girl and my 5 year-old boy when I came over very unwell
    and nauseous and vomited everywhere in the car. I know the area
    very well and live only around half a mile away from where this
    happened and am aware that the whole of the main road has double
    yellow lines with fast-flowing traffic. I pulled over into the
    Railway Tavern car park to be safe and move out of the way of the
    traffic for mine and my children's safety as well as oncoming
    traffic to avoid an accident. I did not see any signage to inform
    me that this was a private car park. Certainly it was not obvious
    to me at the immediate time and in the unwell and flustered state I
    was in at the time and I did not see any signs. My young children
    were extremely distressed by my violent vomiting which came on
    quite suddenly and I needed time to console them, to clean up the
    car and to call my partner. I composed myself and left the car
    park finally. I have suffered with polyhydramnios in this
    pregnancy and have required regular monitoring by the
    Obstetricians and Foetal Medicine Consultants at Xx
    Hospital needing regular blood tests and scans with more intensive
    monitoring and have been unwell because of this.

    My baby son is now less than two weeks old and this claim has come
    out of the blue. I have not received and letters up until now in
    the prelude to this, therefore this is a shock. We are very
    stressed at this difficult time which should be cherished and
    special but this situation is causing a great deal of stress in an
    unfair and unreasonable way. I hope that you can take into account
    these mitigating circumstances and please understand that the
    situation could not be helped and was an emergency. I am very
    sorry but a fine of £175 is excessive and completely unfair
    especially as it is out of the blue. Thank you for considering
    this statement of mine and I hope that a fair conclusion can be
    reached.
  • Jlbourne
    Jlbourne Posts: 13 Forumite
    I have Parking eyes documents all included in their witness statement
  • Redx
    Redx Posts: 38,084 Forumite
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    edited 29 July 2019 at 7:09PM
    seems to me that the above is your defence filed with the CCBC in Northampton

    reading it , its a witness statement, not a defence

    you are now at the WS + Exhibits stage if you have a letter from your local county court ? with a deadline day, a few weeks prior to the hearing date


    in the bundle from PE, did it include your defence that you filed with the CCBC back before june ?


    edit


    REMOVE YOUR PERSONAL DETAILS LIKE VRM vehicle details from your proposed defence above in post #7
  • Jlbourne
    Jlbourne Posts: 13 Forumite
    Yes this is where i have got confused
    Yes i have a letter saying all documents need to be sent 14 days before hearing

    The bundle from PE did not include my defence
    This statement i submitted 1st march

    Where should i go from here?

    Should i rename the above my WS and submit it?
  • Redx
    Redx Posts: 38,084 Forumite
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    [QUOTE=Jlbourne;76091101


    1. The Defendant was the registered keeper and driver of vehicle registration number XXXXXXX on the material date. The Defendant denies that the Claimant is entitled to relief in the sum claimed, or at all.



    15. The Defendant has the reasonable belief that the Claimant has not incurred £75 costs to pursue an alleged £100 debt. The Protection of Freedoms Act 2012, in Schedule 4, Para 4(5) states that the maximum sum that may be recovered from the keeper is the charge stated on the Notice to Keeper, in this case £100.

    [/QUOTE]


    I edited out your VRM, you must do so too


    they are allowed the £100 for the parking charge default tariff plus the legal costs of £75 = £175 in total

    ie:- they can claim the £100 default on the signage plus their legal costs , so they havent added anything else on other than what is allowed


    that DEFENCE cannot just be relabelled as WS


    it needs pruning and adapting
  • Jlbourne
    Jlbourne Posts: 13 Forumite
    Thanks
    Didn’t think of that, i have taken it out
    How would you suggest i adapt it?
    I will remove that paragraph as i have clearly misunderstood That too. What a mess i have created
  • Jlbourne
    Jlbourne Posts: 13 Forumite
    Also do i still request a SaR or is it too late?
    Should i just adapt the above in to a witness statement?

    Any suggestions on how to do so?

    Sorry to be a burden but i am panicking and have no time to do this. I will need to complete this tonight
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