civil enforcement

Quentin

kappie wrote: »

iv drafted up a statement in defence for a PCN County court claim is there anyone out there could check it out and tell me if it is any good

Make sure it's anonymous and post it here for comments

kappie

im new to this game
how do i upload it
yes i have removed an id

Quentin

Post it. If too big split over more than one post

KeithP

kappie wrote: »

a) It was not a notice to keeper but a “Parking Charge Notice” as detailed in the title of the invoice.

f) It was a speculative invoice titled “Parking Charge Notice” and not a notice to keeper...

Surely the first notice to you, the keeper, is a notice to keeper.

It may have been late, it may have non-compliant wording, but I suggest it is a notice to keeper.

Redx

KeithP wrote: »

Surely the first notice to you, the keeper, is a notice to keeper.

It may have been late, it may have non-compliant wording, but I suggest it is a notice to keeper.

agreed

if the first postal notice was a Parking Charge Notice, then its a Notice about a parking infringement. If they obtained DVLA details for the RK, and sent the parking charge NOTICE to that KEEPER , then its a NOTICE to KEEPER

THE TITLE IS ALMOST IRRELEVANT

if they did not send it , then they are likely to have failed POFA2012, but if it was sent , within the relevant timescales, plus with the correct wordings required by POFA2012, then its an NTK - its still an NTK even if it fails POFA2012

there is NO requirement for it to be titled NOTICE TO KEEPER

kappie

iv edited the paragraph does that look better

Lamilad

To be honest that defence is a bit of a mess....

There have been some really good CEL defences posted on the forum over the past few months. You just need to do some more research

Use the search function to find relevant threads.

kappie

I have change the parking charge section do you think its better

kappie

Dont know where to look i need some help

KeithP

kappie wrote: »

Dont know where to look i need some help

Stick civil enforcement defence in the forum's search facility, choose show posts and read several posts. I do recall a thread by claxtome about fluttering tickets eventually arrived at a good defence.

Yes, find a good one, but it may still need extensive tailoring to fit your circumstances.