Popla - need to submit tonight - my reason seem simple but wanted to ask for advice

Coupon-mad

Yes I think you should, because you said ''I came back to my car to find a ticket'' in your first appeal.

Some questions:

Is this PCN called a PENALTY or a Parking charge on the ticket? Does it mention section 14 byelaws or not?

Are you the owner?

If not the owner, then say so, to avoid POPLA madly looking for you to be held 'liable' under the byelaws. In fact maybe change point #1 to:

1. No Breach of Contract nor breach of byelaw

or have:

1. No Breach of Contract

2. No breach of byelaw

...which could point out there is no Railway byelaw known as: 'Breach code 1: Failing to display a valid ticket or voucher' and nor can that be a possible contravention in a pay-by-phone car park because it is not possible to display a ticket or voucher. So, if Indigo attempt to hold you liable under byelaws, despite the fact it's not relevant land (no POFA keeper liability possible) then breach of byelaws, too, is denied. Railway Byelaw 14 (3) says specifically:

(3) ''No person in charge of any motor vehicle, bicycle or other conveyance shall park it on any part of the railway where charges are made for parking by an Operator or an authorised person without paying the appropriate charge at the appropriate time in accordance with instructions given by an Operator or an authorised person at that place''.

Since the sign (which is too wordy/small font to be readable before parking) does not in any case, designate any 'appropriate time' then there is no defined appropriate time to pay. That time cannot be assumed and could very likely be at any time during the all day parking licence, before removing the car, because nothing instructs otherwise. It would be different if this was only a pay and display 'paper ticket on dashboard' car park but it is not.

An average circumspect driver and genuine train passenger, knowing that pay-by-phone is allowed for all day parking, can reasonably conclude that pay-by-phone can be done on the train or whenever they are able to get a signal to make that payment whilst the car is parked. There is no rule stating that payment must be made earlier, within xx minutes/hours or anything whatsoever in any 'instructions at that place'.

So no contravention of any contractual term stated on the sign at that place occurred and the PCN was not properly given.


I think I would try moving your contra proferentem point up to be within your 'no breach of contract' first point because it might sit better there than among a point about signage wording (debateable but let's see how the draft looks if you move this paragraph up):

Payment was made whilst the car was parked that day. There is no time limit on the sign as drafted. The contract law doctrine of 'contra proferentem' applies to all consumer contracts involving contract in written form. Namely, the interpretation of ambigiuous wording which best favours a consumer MUST prevail and that is what would be applied by the courts and 'contra proferentem' was applied between 2012 -2015 by the outgoing POPLA Assessors, consistently.

Doubledexx

It's a Penalty Notice, it states:

Penalty Notice

This car park is regulated by the termsand conditions of parking displayed at the car park in accordance with Rail Byelaw 14. By entering the car park you have agreed and are contractedto be legally bound by those terms and conditions.

My wife is the registered keeper. I use the car.

System

'contra proferentem'

Does not apply to bylaw penalties. Suggest you do not go to POPLA but instead wait 181 days from the date of the parking event.

If you do want to continue to POPLA be aware that they have no legal jurisdiction in this matter so anything you say or they say will simply be nonsense.

Doubledexx

Great points again Coupon Mad. Thankyou!

Here is a revised draft. I'm still a bit confused regarding whether I should state that I'm the 'keeper' or not (as suggested in your first post CM) My wife is the regisitered keeper, but I did say 'I came back to my car' in my initial appeal to Indigo.

1. No Breach of Contract

The ticket wrongly states:

'Breach code 1: Failing to display a valid ticket or voucher'

This cannot correctly describe a contravention in this car park, where pay-by-phone is allowed and no 'display' of any voucher is needed.

There was no ticket or voucher to display because payment was made by phone, evidenced by the attached receipt.

Payment was made whilst the car was parked that day. There is no time limit on the sign as drafted. The contract law doctrine of 'contra proferentem' applies to all consumer contracts involving contract in written form. Namely, the interpretation of ambigiuous wording which best favours a consumer MUST prevail and that is what would be applied by the courts and 'contra proferentem' was applied between 2012 -2015 by the outgoing POPLA Assessors, consistently.

I therefore contend that the contravention did not occur and there was no breach of contract.

2. No Breach of Byelaw

There is no Railway byelaw known as: 'Breach code 1: Failing to display a valid ticket or voucher' and nor can that be a possible contravention in a pay-by-phone car park because it is not possible to display a ticket or voucher. If Indigo attempt to hold me liable under byelaws, despite the fact it's not relevant land (no POFA keeper liability possible) then breach of byelaws, too, is denied. Railway Byelaw 14 (3) says specifically:

''No person in charge of any motor vehicle, bicycle or other conveyance shall park it on any part of the railway where charges are made for parking by an Operator or an authorised person without paying the appropriate charge at the appropriate time in accordance with instructions given by an Operator or an authorised person at that place''.

Since the sign (which is too wordy/small font to be readable before parking) does not in any case, designate any 'appropriate time' then there is no defined appropriate time to pay. That time cannot be assumed and could very likely be at any time during the all day parking licence, before removing the car, because nothing instructs otherwise. It would be different if this was only a pay and display 'paper ticket on dashboard' car park but it is not.

An average circumspect driver and genuine train passenger, knowing that pay-by-phone is allowed for all day parking, can reasonably conclude that pay-by-phone can be done on the train or whenever they are able to get a signal to make that payment whilst the car is parked. There is no rule stating that payment must be made earlier, within xx minutes/hours or anything whatsoever in any 'instructions at that place'.

So no contravention of any contractual term stated on the sign at that place occurred and the PCN was not properly given.




3. No Authority

Section 7 of the British Parking Association (BPA) Code of Practice requires parking operators to have the written authority from the landowner to operate on the land. I do not believe that Indigo has landowner authority and, as such; the operator has not met the requirements of this section of the BPA Code of Practice.

Section 7.1 states “If you do not own the land on which you are carrying out parking management, you must have the written authorisation of the landowner (or their appointed agent). The written confirmation must be given before you can start operating on the land in question and give you the authority to carry out all the aspects of car park management for the site that you are responsible for. In particular, it must say that the landowner (or their appointed agent) requires you to keep to the Code of Practice and that you have the authority to pursue outstanding parking charges”.

Section 7.3 states “The written authorisation must also set out:

a. the definition of the land on which you may operate, so that the boundaries of the land can be clearly defined

b. any conditions or restrictions on parking control and enforcement operations, including any restrictions on hours of operation

c. any conditions or restrictions on the types of vehicles that may, or may not, be subject to parking control and enforcement

d. who has the responsibility for putting up and maintaining signs

e. the definition of the services provided by each party to the agreement


Indigo are required to provide a full copy of the contemporaneous, signed & dated (unredacted) contract with the landowner. Any contract is not compliant with the requirements set out in the BPA Code of Practice and does not allow them to charge and issue proceedings for this sum for this alleged contravention in this car park. In order to refute this it will not be sufficient for the Operator merely to supply a site agreement or witness statement, as these do not show sufficient detail (such as the restrictions, charges and revenue sharing arrangements agreed with any landholder). In order to comply with paragraph 7 of the BPA Code of Practice, a non-landowner private parking company must have a specifically-worded contract with the landowner otherwise there is no authority.

As Indigo do not have proprietary interest in the land , I demand that they produce an unredacted copy of the contract with the landowner that authorises them to offer contracts for parking in their name, issue Parking Charge Notices and take legal action in their name for breach of contract. I do not believe they have such authority.

Indigo has no title in this land and no BPA compliant landowner contract assigning rights to charge and enforce in the courts in their own right.

As a third party payment system is operational at this location, any landowner contract and supplementary site specific user manual, must also provide evidence that this company has a contract with the landowner permitting the following:
a) payments by this system
b) Indigo have a contractual agreement with the pay by phone company granting this consent for use at this location.
c) No DPA rights have been contravened as a consequence of using such a system
d) Full planning consent is in force for the ANPR use and signage at the location.

On the date in question payment was made using a third party pay by phone provider and therefore it is deemed that Indigo do not have any right to recover any charges, as revenue from the tariffs typically go directly to the landowner and payment was made to a separate trading entity.


4. Unreasonable/Unfair Terms.


The charge being claimed by Indigo is a punitive sum. The following refers: Office of Fair Trading 'Guidance for the Unfair Terms in Consumer Contracts Regulations 1999': ''It is unfair to impose disproportionate sanctions for breach of contract. A requirement to pay more in compensation for a breach than a reasonable pre-estimate of the loss caused to the supplier is one kind of excessive penalty. Such a requirement will, in any case, normally be void to the extent that it amounts to a penalty under English common law...''

Test of fairness:
''A term is unfair if...contrary to the requirement of good faith it causes a significant imbalance in the parties' rights and obligations under the contract, to the detriment of consumers.

5.1 Unfair terms are not enforceable against the consumer.

9.2 ...terms of whose existence and content the consumer has no adequate notice at the time of entering the contract may not be binding under the general law, in any case, especially if they are onerous in character.''

The charge that was levied is an unreasonable indemnity clause pursuant to section 4(1) of the Unfair Contract Terms Act 1977 which provides that: "A person cannot by reference to any contract term be made to indemnify another person (whether a party to the contract or not) in respect of liability that may be incurred by the other for negligence or breach of contract, except in so far as the contract term satisfies the requirement of reasonableness.”

It is wholly unreasonable to attempt to profit by charging a disproportionate sum where no loss has been caused by a driver who has proved they paid the tariff in good faith. Indigo require strict proof to justify that their charge, under the circumstances described, does not cause a significant imbalance to a persons detriment and to justify that the charge does not breach the UTCCRs and UCT Act.


5. The signage was not readable so there was no valid contract formed between Indigo and the driver


The signage was not compliant with the BPA Code of Practice and was not seen before parking - so there was no valid contract formed between Indigo and the driver. There was no offer, consideration or acceptance flowing between this Operator and the driver which could have created any contract for the driver to pay this extortionate sum over and above the correct tariff already paid.

Indigo state that the terms and conditions of parking are displayed at the entrance to the car park. As the keeper, I made a special visit to the car park to ascertain the positioning and quality of the sign. The only sign is on entrance to the car park. It is difficult to notice as it is placed to the far right of the entrance (where a car would usually exit via a ramp), not in the line of sight of a car entering the car park (see photo 1). The size, positioning, size of font and colours used make it impossible to read without stopping and getting out of the car. Even then, the sign is not easily accessible To actually read the sign I had to walk across the both exits, and squeeze between crash barriers approx 8 inches apart (see photo 2). I managed to get close enough to read the left part of the sign, but the section on the right is impossible to read (see photo 3). It would have involved climbing over the crash barrier and wading through stinging nettles (see photo 4). The accessiblity of the sign is clearly a breach of health and safety regulations. The car park is busy and having dodge exiting cars to actually read the sign breaches the BPA code of practice.

Unreadable signage breaches Appendix B of the BPA Code of Practice which states that terms on entrance signs must be clearly readable without a driver having to turn away from the road ahead. A Notice is not imported into the contract unless brought home so prominently that the party 'must' have known of it and agreed terms beforehand. Nothing about Indigo’s terms and conditions' was sufficiently prominent and it is clear that the requirements for forming a contract (i.e. consideration flowing between the two parties, offer, acceptance and fairness and transparency of terms offered in good faith) were not satisfied.

The sign also breaches another point in Appendix B, requiring the the sign to identify who the car park is ‘managed by’. This is not optional information, but is clearly marked as ‘required’.

The BPA code of practice also states (18.3) You must place signs containing the specific parking terms throughout the site, so that drivers are given the chance to read them at the time of parking or leaving their vehicle. The badly positioned entrance sign is the only access point for this information. As stated by Indigo, the terms and conditions are only displayed at the entrance to the car park.

The third party telephone payment system does not communicate any terms and conditions. Therefore, if you pay for your parking by phone, there is nothing to clearly advise how any terms and conditions may be breached.

To be clear, there is nothing to communicate full contractual terms & conditions.

6. Failure to establish keeper liability.


Sites designated as Railways by the Secretary of State are subject to statutory control in the form of bylaws. POFA 2012 does not apply because land subject to statutory control is not 'relevant land' - this was found as fact by Senior Assessor Chris Adamson in POPLA ref 6060164050. I was a passenger in the car on the day in question. The driver has not been identified, therefore as keeper I cannot lawfully be held liable for this charge. If Indigo argue otherwise then they must produce the bylaws and maps to show that this part of the Railway is somehow exempt from statutory control. The onus falls upon Indigo to demonstrate this and I put them to strict proof on this point.

Indigo have failed to serve a Notice to Keeper. It has been completely omitted, Indigo appear to have assumed it is not needed when a keeper appeals against a windscreen ticket. But in the schedule it is clear that a NTK is a fundamental document where the Operator does not know who the driver was (and in this case there have been no admissions on that matter.) Therefore even if this was a site where bylaws affecting parking did not take precedence, Indigo have failed to establish keeper liability by forgetting the NTK.

The keeper liability requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 must be complied with, where the appellant is the registered keeper, as in this case. One of these requirements is the issue of a ‘notice to keeper’ (NTK) compliant with certain provisions. This operator failed to serve any NTK at all. As there has been no admission as to who may have parked the car and no evidence of this person has been produced by the operator, it has been held by POPLA multiple times in 2015 that a parking charge with no NTK cannot be enforced against the registered keeper.


That completes my case for appeal. I request that my appeal is upheld.


I would also like to formally request to see all evidence presented by Indigo regarding this appeal and the opportunity to refute any evidence submitted by Indigo regarding this appeal.

To quote Henry Greenslade; a highly respected, longstanding lead adjudicator of parking ticket appeals across the board (Council statutory tribunals as well as private parking issues via POPLA). With a reputation for fairness and high integrity.

From the Final Report:

''At POPLA, Assessors consider the evidence produced by each party, all of which evidence the other party has the opportunity to see and comment upon.''

and from page 15 of the POPLA Annual Report 2015:

“…it is certainly a basic principle of a fair appeals service that each party is given the opportunity to see the other party’s case and to comment upon it. This is the position at POPLA. Appellants should obviously receive the operator’s evidence in its entirety.''

Coupon-mad

Doubledexx wrote: »

My wife is the registered keeper. I use the car.

Aha, so you can argue that you are NOT the owner!

Where I have called you 'registered keeper' just put 'keeper'.

In the section about byelaws, state that you are merely the day to day keeper of the car, neither established as the driver nor are you the registered keeper or owner. as such, you are able to appeal as keeper (going by the POFA 2012 definition) but cannot be held liable under any byelaw because the Train Operator would have recourse only to pursue the owner via the Magistrates Court and that has not occurred. This is a third party agent pursuing the day to day keeper (neither established as driver nor owner).

Doubledexx

That's really confused me...Indigo have told me I have to appeal through POPLA

Coupon-mad

IamEmanresu wrote: »

Does not apply to bylaw penalties. Suggest you do not go to POPLA but instead wait 181 days from the date of the parking event.

I see what you are saying, IamEmanresu and that's certainly an option for any OP, where a PPC has said it's a penalty notice under byelaws.

That's really confused me...Indigo have told me I have to appeal through POPLA

IamEmanresu knows what he is talking about. He's merely saying that as it's a penalty under byelaws the only lawful way to pursue it would be against the owner and within six months and POPLA have no place to find either way on such a penalty - which is why I asked if you were the owner and mentioned the bit above to add about no recourse except via Mag's court.

I take the view that people may as well try POPLA as offered, knowing that it isn't binding on you and is actually codswallop re a byelaws penalty (but it drags you nearer to the six months limit for real enforcement!).

If you do want to continue to POPLA be aware that they have no legal jurisdiction in this matter so anything you say or they say will simply be nonsense.

Yes, as long as he puts this in knowing it doesn't matter what POPLA actually say, but it mught get it cancelled, then all is good.

Contra proferentem and the first point about no contract is merely there to head POPLA off from various angles they might try to apply. Only because POPLA Assessors are currently seen to be clueless, I think we may as well cover all angles if a person does try POPLA.

System

Indigo have told me I have to appeal through POPLA

That's the scam. If you believe that POPLA can adjudicate and then "fail" you may be persuaded to pay.

Simply put it is similar to the speed awareness courses offered for errant speeders. Rather than go to court - which you would need to happen if you failed to pay within 180 days - the Train Operating Company offer you the chance to pay Indigo. Indigo have absolutely no rights to the money, only the TOC has.

So after 180 days, there is an offence which the TOC can take you to court for, and then the money is paid to HM Government but neither the TOC or Indigo.

See why they want you to go to POPLA and con you into thinking they have the right to the monies.

Edit: Coupon-Mad explains it and go that way in the knowledge that it is all a sham.

Doubledexx

Thanks IamEmanresu...that makes sense. So, I'll still appeal to Popla in the knowledge that its a scam and if my appeal is upheld I don't have to worry about the 180 days...

Doubledexx

Draft updated again, with your last point added Coupon Mad..

1. No Breach of Contract

The ticket wrongly states:

'Breach code 1: Failing to display a valid ticket or voucher'

This cannot correctly describe a contravention in this car park, where pay-by-phone is allowed and no 'display' of any voucher is needed.

There was no ticket or voucher to display because payment was made by phone, evidenced by the attached receipt.

Payment was made whilst the car was parked that day. There is no time limit on the sign as drafted. The contract law doctrine of 'contra proferentem' applies to all consumer contracts involving contract in written form. Namely, the interpretation of ambigiuous wording which best favours a consumer MUST prevail and that is what would be applied by the courts and 'contra proferentem' was applied between 2012 -2015 by the outgoing POPLA Assessors, consistently.

I therefore contend that the contravention did not occur and there was no breach of contract.

2.. No Breach of Byelaw

There is no Railway byelaw known as: 'Breach code 1: Failing to display a valid ticket or voucher' and nor can that be a possible contravention in a pay-by-phone car park because it is not possible to display a ticket or voucher. If Indigo attempt to hold me liable under byelaws, despite the fact it's not relevant land (no POFA keeper liability possible) then breach of byelaws, too, is denied. Railway Byelaw 14 (3) says specifically:

''No person in charge of any motor vehicle, bicycle or other conveyance shall park it on any part of the railway where charges are made for parking by an Operator or an authorised person without paying the appropriate charge at the appropriate time in accordance with instructions given by an Operator or an authorised person at that place''.

Since the sign (which is too wordy/small font to be readable before parking) does not in any case, designate any 'appropriate time' then there is no defined appropriate time to pay. That time cannot be assumed and could very likely be at any time during the all day parking licence, before removing the car, because nothing instructs otherwise. It would be different if this was only a pay and display 'paper ticket on dashboard' car park but it is not.

An average circumspect driver and genuine train passenger, knowing that pay-by-phone is allowed for all day parking, can reasonably conclude that pay-by-phone can be done on the train or whenever they are able to get a signal to make that payment whilst the car is parked. There is no rule stating that payment must be made earlier, within xx minutes/hours or anything whatsoever in any 'instructions at that place'.

So no contravention of any contractual term stated on the sign at that place occurred and the PCN was not properly given.


3 .No Authority

Section 7 of the British Parking Association (BPA) Code of Practice requires parking operators to have the written authority from the landowner to operate on the land. I do not believe that Indigo has landowner authority and, as such; the operator has not met the requirements of this section of the BPA Code of Practice.

Section 7.1 states “If you do not own the land on which you are carrying out parking management, you must have the written authorisation of the landowner (or their appointed agent). The written confirmation must be given before you can start operating on the land in question and give you the authority to carry out all the aspects of car park management for the site that you are responsible for. In particular, it must say that the landowner (or their appointed agent) requires you to keep to the Code of Practice and that you have the authority to pursue outstanding parking charges”.

Section 7.3 states “The written authorisation must also set out:

a. the definition of the land on which you may operate, so that the boundaries of the land can be clearly defined

b. any conditions or restrictions on parking control and enforcement operations, including any restrictions on hours of operation

c. any conditions or restrictions on the types of vehicles that may, or may not, be subject to parking control and enforcement

d. who has the responsibility for putting up and maintaining signs

e. the definition of the services provided by each party to the agreement


Indigo are required to provide a full copy of the contemporaneous, signed & dated (unredacted) contract with the landowner. Any contract is not compliant with the requirements set out in the BPA Code of Practice and does not allow them to charge and issue proceedings for this sum for this alleged contravention in this car park. In order to refute this it will not be sufficient for the Operator merely to supply a site agreement or witness statement, as these do not show sufficient detail (such as the restrictions, charges and revenue sharing arrangements agreed with any landholder). In order to comply with paragraph 7 of the BPA Code of Practice, a non-landowner private parking company must have a specifically-worded contract with the landowner otherwise there is no authority.

As Indigo do not have proprietary interest in the land , I demand that they produce an unredacted copy of the contract with the landowner that authorises them to offer contracts for parking in their name, issue Parking Charge Notices and take legal action in their name for breach of contract. I do not believe they have such authority.

Indigo has no title in this land and no BPA compliant landowner contract assigning rights to charge and enforce in the courts in their own right.

As a third party payment system is operational at this location, any landowner contract and supplementary site specific user manual, must also provide evidence that this company has a contract with the landowner permitting the following:
a) payments by this system
b) Indigo have a contractual agreement with the pay by phone company granting this consent for use at this location.
c) No DPA rights have been contravened as a consequence of using such a system
d) Full planning consent is in force for the ANPR use and signage at the location.

On the date in question payment was made using a third party pay by phone provider and therefore it is deemed that Indigo do not have any right to recover any charges, as revenue from the tariffs typically go directly to the landowner and payment was made to a separate trading entity.


4. Unreasonable/Unfair Terms.


The charge being claimed by Indigo is a punitive sum. The following refers: Office of Fair Trading 'Guidance for the Unfair Terms in Consumer Contracts Regulations 1999': ''It is unfair to impose disproportionate sanctions for breach of contract. A requirement to pay more in compensation for a breach than a reasonable pre-estimate of the loss caused to the supplier is one kind of excessive penalty. Such a requirement will, in any case, normally be void to the extent that it amounts to a penalty under English common law...''

Test of fairness:
''A term is unfair if...contrary to the requirement of good faith it causes a significant imbalance in the parties' rights and obligations under the contract, to the detriment of consumers.

5.1 Unfair terms are not enforceable against the consumer.

9.2 ...terms of whose existence and content the consumer has no adequate notice at the time of entering the contract may not be binding under the general law, in any case, especially if they are onerous in character.''

The charge that was levied is an unreasonable indemnity clause pursuant to section 4(1) of the Unfair Contract Terms Act 1977 which provides that: "A person cannot by reference to any contract term be made to indemnify another person (whether a party to the contract or not) in respect of liability that may be incurred by the other for negligence or breach of contract, except in so far as the contract term satisfies the requirement of reasonableness.”

It is wholly unreasonable to attempt to profit by charging a disproportionate sum where no loss has been caused by a driver who has proved they paid the tariff in good faith. Indigo require strict proof to justify that their charge, under the circumstances described, does not cause a significant imbalance to a persons detriment and to justify that the charge does not breach the UTCCRs and UCT Act.


5. The signage was not readable so there was no valid contract formed between Indigo and the driver


The signage was not compliant with the BPA Code of Practice and was not seen before parking - so there was no valid contract formed between Indigo and the driver. There was no offer, consideration or acceptance flowing between this Operator and the driver which could have created any contract for the driver to pay this extortionate sum over and above the correct tariff already paid.

Indigo state that the terms and conditions of parking are displayed at the entrance to the car park. As the keeper, I made a special visit to the car park to ascertain the positioning and quality of the sign. The only sign is on entrance to the car park. It is difficult to notice as it is placed to the far right of the entrance (where a car would usually exit via a ramp), not in the line of sight of a car entering the car park (see photo 1). The size, positioning, size of font and colours used make it impossible to read without stopping and getting out of the car. Even then, the sign is not easily accessible To actually read the sign I had to walk across the both exits, and squeeze between crash barriers approx 8 inches apart (see photo 2). I managed to get close enough to read the left part of the sign, but the section on the right is impossible to read (see photo 3). It would have involved climbing over the crash barrier and wading through stinging nettles (see photo 4). The accessiblity of the sign is clearly a breach of health and safety regulations. The car park is busy and having dodge exiting cars to actually read the sign breaches the BPA code of practice.

Unreadable signage breaches Appendix B of the BPA Code of Practice which states that terms on entrance signs must be clearly readable without a driver having to turn away from the road ahead. A Notice is not imported into the contract unless brought home so prominently that the party 'must' have known of it and agreed terms beforehand. Nothing about Indigo’s terms and conditions' was sufficiently prominent and it is clear that the requirements for forming a contract (i.e. consideration flowing between the two parties, offer, acceptance and fairness and transparency of terms offered in good faith) were not satisfied.

The sign also breaches another point in Appendix B, requiring the the sign to identify who the car park is ‘managed by’. This is not optional information, but is clearly marked as ‘required’.

The BPA code of practice also states (18.3) You must place signs containing the specific parking terms throughout the site, so that drivers are given the chance to read them at the time of parking or leaving their vehicle. The badly positioned entrance sign is the only access point for this information. As stated by Indigo, the terms and conditions are only displayed at the entrance to the car park.

The third party telephone payment system does not communicate any terms and conditions. Therefore, if you pay for your parking by phone, there is nothing to clearly advise how any terms and conditions may be breached.

To be clear, there is nothing to communicate full contractual terms & conditions.

6. Failure to establish keeper liability. - should this be registered keeper??


Sites designated as Railways by the Secretary of State are subject to statutory control in the form of bylaws. POFA 2012 does not apply because land subject to statutory control is not 'relevant land' - this was found as fact by Senior Assessor Chris Adamson in POPLA ref 6060164050. I was a passenger in the car on the day in question. The driver has not been identified, therefore as keeper I cannot lawfully be held liable for this charge. If Indigo argue otherwise then they must produce the bylaws and maps to show that this part of the Railway is somehow exempt from statutory control. The onus falls upon Indigo to demonstrate this and I put them to strict proof on this point.

I am merely the day to day keeper of the car, neither established as the driver nor am I the registered keeper or owner. as such, I am able to appeal as keeper (going by the POFA 2012 definition) but cannot be held liable under any byelaw because the Train Operator would have recourse only to pursue the owner via the Magistrates Court and that has not occurred. This is a third party agent pursuing the day to day keeper (neither established as driver nor owner).

Indigo have failed to serve a Notice to Keeper. It has been completely omitted, Indigo appear to have assumed it is not needed when a keeper appeals against a windscreen ticket. But in the schedule it is clear that a NTK is a fundamental document where the Operator does not know who the driver was (and in this case there have been no admissions on that matter.) Therefore even if this was a site where bylaws affecting parking did not take precedence, Indigo have failed to establish keeper liability by forgetting the NTK.

The keeper liability requirements of Schedule 4 of the Protection of Freedoms Act 2012 must be complied with, where the appellant is the keeper, as in this case. One of these requirements is the issue of a ‘notice to keeper’ (NTK) compliant with certain provisions. This operator failed to serve any NTK at all. As there has been no admission as to who may have parked the car and no evidence of this person has been produced by the operator, it has been held by POPLA multiple times in 2015 that a parking charge with no NTK cannot be enforced against the registered keeper.


That completes my case for appeal. I request that my appeal is upheld.


I would also like to formally request to see all evidence presented by Indigo regarding this appeal and the opportunity to refute any evidence submitted by Indigo regarding this appeal.

To quote Henry Greenslade; a highly respected, longstanding lead adjudicator of parking ticket appeals across the board (Council statutory tribunals as well as private parking issues via POPLA). With a reputation for fairness and high integrity.

From the Final Report:

''At POPLA, Assessors consider the evidence produced by each party, all of which evidence the other party has the opportunity to see and comment upon.''

and from page 15 of the POPLA Annual Report 2015:

“…it is certainly a basic principle of a fair appeals service that each party is given the opportunity to see the other party’s case and to comment upon it. This is the position at POPLA. Appellants should obviously receive the operator’s evidence in its entirety.''