Parking Eye Appeal Form

Arthur101

Hi,
I've followed the newbie thread and copied and pasted the template but the PE appeal form only allows 3000 characters. Can anyone help with this, i.e. is there are shortened version of it?
Many thanks.

Fruitcake

Arthur101 wrote: »

Hi,
I've followed the newbie thread and copied and pasted the template but the PE appeal form only allows 3000 characters. Can anyone help with this, i.e. is there are shortened version of it?
Many thanks.

Put a one liner in saying see attachment, and attach your appeal as a pdf.

Coupon-mad

Or write your own shorter version - anyone can weed out bits they don't want. You may not believe this but I hate templates and only wrote that one because too many people in this Country of ours cannot write a poxy letter (rant over!).

The whole point is to appeal as keeper, and get a POPLA code. End of story as PE will then give up at POPLA if you use our POPLA appeals (far more important to get them right)!

ezerscrooge

Here's one I did earlier.... but do adapt it for your own circumstances.
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I challenge this 'PCN' as keeper of the car, on the following grounds:


a) The sum does not represent a genuine pre-estimate of loss. It is a disguised penalty and not commercially justified


b) As keeper I believe that the signs were not seen, the wording is ambiguous and the predominant purpose of your business model is intended to be a deterrent


c) There is no evidence that you have any proprietary interest in the land


d) Your 'Notice' fails to comply with the POFA 2012 and also breaches the Consumer Contracts (Information, Cancellation and Additional Payments) Regs 2013


e) There was no consideration nor acceptance flowing from both parties and any contract with myself, or the driver, is denied


f) Your ANPR is not maintained or in correct working order. Furthermore the system is not operated in a reasonable, consistent and transparent manner


The purpose of this communication is threefold:


1. Formal challenge
There will be no admissions as to who was driving and no assumptions can be drawn in the absence of evidence. As such, you must either rely on the POFA 2012 or prove beyond any doubt who was driving - or cancel the charge


2. ''Drop hands'' offer
I calculate that we have both incurred some nominal costs - under £15 – so this is a formal “drop hands” offer. I remind you of the duty to mitigate any loss, so withdraw the charge within 35 days without further expense and I will not pursue you for my costs



3. Notice of cancellation of contract
I hereby give notice of withdrawal from this alleged contract which was never properly offered or explained by you. The charge is not acknowledged, is not due and no 'service contract' from you was ever expressly requested by the driver or by me. Neither the driver nor myself gave 'prior express consent' or any consent at all for any contract to exist. This 'contract' is hereby cancelled and any obligations now end


This constitutes the entirety of my challenge and nothing further will be added. You must now, within 35 days, EITHER (i) accept my challenge and notify me that the charge is cancelled, OR (ii) reject my challenge, send me a PoPLA code, and suspend any collection activity pending my PoPLA appeal


This is submitted online so I have kept a copy and this communication is clearly received by you unless proved otherwise. I look forward to your reply within 35 days and urge you to accept the drop hands offer and accept that I have cancelled any 'contract' because this resolves the dispute without cost

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Arthur101

Thats great. Thanks for your help, its really appreciated.