Not sure how to word leaflet

lawtz04

Hi all

I have a small sideline doing graphic design work (which is what I do in my actual job also) in a selfemployed manner.

I am going to leaflet all of the small to medium businesses in the area but am struggling with the wording.

I have three bullet points at the bottom which say:

Quick and Friendly
Reliable and Creative
xxxxx

The third one is where I struggle because I wanted to say that I am much more affordable than agencies but dont want to use the word cheap really as it implies poor work etc.

Can anyone help? Also, could I post the leaflet for people to proof read or is that breaking mse rules?

Thanks

whitewing

lawtz04 wrote: »

Hi all

I have a small sideline doing graphic design work (which is what I do in my actual job also) in a selfemployed manner.

I am going to leaflet all of the small to medium businesses in the area but am struggling with the wording.

I have three bullet points at the bottom which say:

Quick and Friendly
Reliable and Creative
Personal Service and Great Value for Money



The third one is where I struggle because I wanted to say that I am much more affordable than agencies but dont want to use the word cheap really as it implies poor work etc.

Can anyone help? Also, could I post the leaflet for people to proof read or is that breaking mse rules?

Thanks

Added above

paddyrg

Attractively priced
Local prices for local clients
Soho quality local prices
No expensive overheads meaning better value for you
Keenly priced to expand client base
I want your long-term business and price accordingly


None of those are quite 'there', I know, but may fire some more ideas in somebody?!

paddyrg

whitewing wrote: »

Added above

'Personal Service' - bit of an unintended euphamism?! :-/

Savvy_Sue

Just checking, does your employer know you're touting for business in the area, potentially nicking their customers?

Ainsley1

"........and Creative"

So why asking the question??

whitewing

paddyrg wrote: »

'Personal Service' - bit of an unintended euphamism?! :-/

Not unintended, lol, I thought 'quick' from quick and friendly would deter misreads!

BryanSmallBiz

Unless you've already got one somewhere else, make the last bullet point a "call to action" such as "Contact me now ..." followed by something you like from paddyrg above.

lawtz04

Thank you very much for the great response.

I am certainly not on the market for that type of "personal service"! but it would be nice to keep the friendly approach as my previous clients all seem to like that.

My employer is an authority so all work is internal and they do not look for external work so no conflict.

I wish I could attach my flyer, but it seems I cant unless its a url on a website!

S

printisnotdead

A good call to action would be a nice addition to the third line. The first two lines have covered what your customer can expect from you so motivating them to call or hire you is the next logical step.