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Advise on appeal wording for bad signing

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  • ppsigning
    ppsigning Posts: 29 Forumite
    edited 8 May 2018 at 8:43PM
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    Am I allowed, or would it be wise, to share case specific details such as location on this board? Or should I remove those to show drafts.

    Also I am having to exclude this section from the template as the hyperlink no longer works:
    ...and the same chart is reproduced here:

    (dead ebay link)

    ''When designing an outdoor sign for your business keep in mind the readability of the letters. Letters always look smaller when mounted high onto an outdoor wall''.

    ''...a guideline for selecting sign letters. Multiply the letter height by 10 and that is the best viewing distance in feet. Multiply the best viewing distance by 4 and that is the max viewing distance.''
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 132,341 Forumite
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    Show location and dates, but not PCN or VRN or name data.

    If that eBay linky is dead, remove it. I might well edit the template the same.
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top of this/any page where it says:
    Forum Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • ppsigning
    ppsigning Posts: 29 Forumite
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    so pictures ive made, took, and the location is fine? will link a draft shortly then
  • Coupon-mad
    Coupon-mad Posts: 132,341 Forumite
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    Yes, look, here is someone's POPLA example appeal, full of photos:

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zNb032FgDm-HJbanbsJZssyj6UOzNSKQ/view

    That also gives you the final (new) appeal point about ANPR cases in full, about ICO DPA breach.
    PRIVATE 'PCN'? DON'T PAY BUT DON'T IGNORE IT (except N.Ireland).
    CLICK at the top of this/any page where it says:
    Forum Home»Motoring»Parking Tickets Fines & Parking - read the NEWBIES THREAD
  • ppsigning
    ppsigning Posts: 29 Forumite
    edited 10 May 2018 at 7:37PM
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    Yes I was able to find the ICO DPA breach and add it onto my draft.

    Here is the link provided for my most recent draft

    drive.google.com/file/d/1BOTKiSHLswx8Mh3FCAdcdrm9uKy5P_Wf/view?usp=sharing
  • KeithP
    KeithP Posts: 37,811 Forumite
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    edited 10 May 2018 at 6:57PM
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    Your point 3 starts "My third and final point is...".

    But you continue on to a point 4, and then a point 5. :D

    You have gone to the trouble of blanking out data at the start of that document, but starting on page 15 there is a second copy of your appeal with that data included.

    There is no 's' in practice.
  • ppsigning
    ppsigning Posts: 29 Forumite
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    Hmm I swear i fixed that point 3 !

    Here you go try this.

    Dunno what happend at apge 15..

    drive.google.com/file/d/1BOTKiSHLswx8Mh3FCAdcdrm9uKy5P_Wf/view?usp=sharing
  • KeithP
    KeithP Posts: 37,811 Forumite
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    You need to delete that earlier googledrive document.
  • ppsigning
    ppsigning Posts: 29 Forumite
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    Thanks! THat's what I get for multi tasking..
  • ppsigning
    ppsigning Posts: 29 Forumite
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    Any critique of it at all? Anything else to add?


    Wanna smash this at POPLA.


    How is my section on grafitti?
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