Things to do in Northern Ireland

I've wrote a little thing on squidoo about things to do in Northern Ireland and wouldn't mind if some of you's could have a look at it and tell me where i could improve? I'm not an experienced writer or anything just starting to get into writing and quite enjoy it so wouldn't mind knowing were i need improvement. have a look n let me know if you have the time.

all constructive criticism and things you think should be added welcome.

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