help with valentines poem

mitsy1111

Hi

My 15 year old son needs help with a poem for his girlfriends card

He would like her name in it(although im not going to put it on a forum) and that his been going out with her for just over 6 months

Can anybody help please

lyndseyann

i love you
i love you
i love you divine
please give me your bubblegum
your sitting in mine!!!!!!!




if i were a lettuce,
id split it in two
the leaves id give to anyone
the heart id give to you!!!!!!!!

AnnieH

bit hard to help with apoem if we don't know her name (especially if he wnts her name in it)

shellsuit

Oh Anna, you're such a spanner
You're not as lovely, as gorgeous Hannah



Now if her name isn't Hannah or Anna, I doubt that will help.

Like Annie said, difficult to write a poem (that rhymes) without the name!

mitsy1111

Thanks for the replies

I was thinking along the lines of

I love you (name) with all my heart etc etc

mitsy1111

shellsuit wrote: »

Oh Anna, you're such a spanner
You're not as lovely, as gorgeous Hannah



Now if her name isn't Hannah or Anna, I doubt that will help.

Like Annie said, difficult to write a poem (that rhymes) without the name!

This made me laugh but i dont think his girlfriend would lol

AnnieH

mitsy1111 wrote: »

Thanks for the replies

I was thinking along the lines of

I love you (name) with all my heart etc etc

Again, without knowing name it might not scan properly.

mitsy1111

I have sent you a pm with her name if thats ok

chupsy

" So long as i can breath or i can see so long lives our love which gives life to me"

Very meaningfull and loveing :-)