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HX Car Park Management, Gladstones Letter Before Claim

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  • Lamilad
    Lamilad Posts: 1,412 Forumite
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    edited 19 August 2017 at 8:34PM
    "(2). The particulars of claim do not meet the requirements of Practice Direction 16 7.5 as!
    there is nothing which specifies how the terms were breached. Indeed the particulars
    of claim are not clear and concise as is required by CPR 16.4 1(a). [Strike]The Claimants are
    known to be serial issuers of generic claims similar to this one. HM Courts Service!
    have identified over 1000 similar sparse claims. I believe the term for such behaviour
    is roboclaims and as such is against the public interest.[/strike]

    ^ This para is virtually the same as your defence para 4. Amalgamate the 2
  • Lamilad
    Lamilad Posts: 1,412 Forumite
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    . The claimant is not the landowner and suffers no loss whatsoever as a result of a!
    vehicle parking at the location in question
    Remove this
  • Lamilad
    Lamilad Posts: 1,412 Forumite
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    "On the basis of the above, [strike]we[/strike] request the court!"

    Go with "I" or "the defendant"
  • Lamilad
    Lamilad Posts: 1,412 Forumite
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    Practice Direction 3A which references Civil Procedure Rule 3.4 illustrates this point:!


    1.4 The following are examples of cases where the court may conclude that particulars of!
    claim (whether contained in a claim form or filed separately) fall within rule 3.4(2)(a):
    1. those which set out no facts indicating what the claim is about, for example ‘Money!
    owed £5000’,
    2. those which are incoherent and make no sense,
    3. those which contain a coherent set of facts but those facts, even if true, do not
    disclose any legally recognisable claim against the defendant

    On the basis of the above, we request the court strike out the claim for want of a
    cause of action.!
    Make this more concise

    " Due to the woefully inept particulars of claim which are sparse, vague and incoherent. The defence requests the claim is struck out as disclosing no cause of action pursuant to CPR 3.4 and PD 3A
  • Birdo26
    Birdo26 Posts: 54 Forumite
    edited 20 August 2017 at 1:09PM
    ccbcaq@hmcts.gsi.gov.uk

    just want to check this is the right email.

    Can I just attach the word doc.
  • nosferatu1001
    nosferatu1001 Posts: 12,961 Forumite
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    Of course not. Your defence must be signed, as the form tells you. Print, sign, scan to PDF.
  • Lamilad
    Lamilad Posts: 1,412 Forumite
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    OP - do you require further review of your defence or have you sent it?
  • Birdo26
    Birdo26 Posts: 54 Forumite
    I've sent it, signed and scanned. Is it still wroth ringing the court on Monday?

    Really appreciate the help, thank you.
  • Lamilad
    Lamilad Posts: 1,412 Forumite
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    Birdo26 wrote: »
    I've sent it, signed and scanned. Is it still wroth ringing the court on Monday?

    Really appreciate the help, thank you.
    Yes you need to confirm they've received it
  • Birdo26
    Birdo26 Posts: 54 Forumite
    Take it it's the MCOL number and not the CCBC number?
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